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listen ever since I've started ycm kendo fish has been giving me crap and I'm saying right now if she is reading this I don't whant to hear or I mean read it.
characters:
zethron is the main character and a very energenic duelest
syther zethrons best friend and not such a energenic type
sea koala zethrons spirit partner
andrew is the best duelist in neo duel academy and has a bone to pick with syther for some reason




sea koala: whooooo
zethron: momy 5 more minutes please
sea koala: whowhooooooo!!!!!!!
zethron: WHAT!WHERE!WHO!
o, your a duel spirit aren't you
sea koala: whooooo
zethron: who is your master?
hey I've got a sea koala card! are you my duel spirit two whos for yes
sea koala: who who
zethron: YES!!!! I've got a duel spirit!
sea koala: whoooooooooo!
(theme song)
andrew:..........
syther: andrew....
I'm sorry, for what I did all those years ago
andrew: LETS DUEL!!!
syther: ok
andrew: draw, I summon my meta warrior
(atk 1950 def 850)
syther: I summon my mystical elf in defence mode
(atk 800 def 2000)
andrew: still dueling like that syther not good enough my turn I summon my meta dragon-z
(atk 1500 def 2000)
syther: o ya look whose winning now I activate foolish burial and send my golden dragon to the grave, but don't say good bye because I activate monster reborn to specially summon my golden dragon!
(atk 5000 def 0 effect: when this card is summoned to the field it can't attack) I end my turn looks like this is it
andrew: draw, no this is it I WIN with EXODIA
syther: I guess you can hold it agenst me
(black out)
to be continued...

Keep chapters to 1 topic, please.

And since you've posted this on the Internet, you've consented that you're open to criticism. If you don't like people pointing out what's wrong with your stuff, then don't post it in the first place.

I'm ok with my mistakes being pointed out but thats not what she does!