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YuGiOh!: Dream Duels
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OK, this is my first fan-fic so I hope it goes well. Any problems you find or have with it please tell me because I would like to make this a good fan fic.

Characters (Click to View)


Chapter 1-Path to Dreams Pt. 1 (Click to View)
Chapter 2-Path to Dreams Pt.2 (Click to View)
Chapter 3-Starting On the Wrong Foot (Click to View)
Chapter 4-Rivals!? (Click to View)
Chapter 5-For a Friend (Click to View)

I just looked over it and found that you need to fix some grammatical errors. Find them all and win a prize!
This really should continue Cool.
Thanks for the comments. Chapter 2 is up!
Great story so far. When will Chapter 3 be up? =D
Thankies. I'm not for sure really, it should might be up on Monday.
This is very nice. I like how you posted the link to the cards you used. Most fan-fics dont do that and I think i would be best if they did. I hope you continue this.
Thanks GHawk, glad you like it. =)

EDIT: Chapter 3 is up!
This is good, can I submit a card Idea for Ryota.
Thanks! =)

I've pretty much got the first season already made up in my mind, but for the second season I'd love the help. Wink
Chapter 4 is up!
Keep writing this. Its really good.

you've got my support. Very Happy
Thankies =]

I'll get chp. 5 up this weekend. ;]
(10-10-2009 11:02 AM)Legend Zero Wrote: [ -> ]Thankies =]

I'll get chp. 5 up this weekend. ;]

no, thank you!

I feel like this picture:
YES!
Chapter 5 is up!
cool chapter, bro.

The only thing I would do is make the duels more elaborate. I thought Callen lost way to easily with a card like magic cylinder, but the thing you did with The Tricky was very clever.

btw, what was callen's reaction to loosing?

Good job, I'll keep reading.
(10-12-2009 02:27 PM)Thewho Wrote: [ -> ]cool chapter, bro.

The only thing I would do is make the duels more elaborate. I thought Callen lost way to easily with a card like magic cylinder, but the thing you did with The Tricky was very clever.

btw, what was callen's reaction to loosing?

Good job, I'll keep reading.


Thankies Wink

As for Callen's reaction you'll find out next chapter. =]
helping this by posting...

not to be demanding, but when's the next chapter coming up?
This what you been up too. This is really good Legend.
Thanks guys, I tried to write it but my computer shut down. T-T I'll re-try this weekend when I'm not busy.
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