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Here it is: the sequel to 'Yu-Gi-Oh!: The Story of a Legend Continues'!
Almost no knowledge about book 1 is required, but here's the link anyways:

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-89474.html

For those who don't like reading (gtfo), here's a short recap:

The Story of a Legend Continues (Click to View)

So, without further ado, here it is!

Prologue: The Day after Tomorrow (Click to View)
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The chapters can be found on later posts on page 1!
Oh, you're the one who wrote that 'awesome' story that just ended? Yeah, I REALLY think that this is gonna be good too. I'm going to take you down a peg. Just so you know THIS IS A FAKE REVIEW. IT SHALL BE POSITIVE.
[quote='LarryCotter' pid='3026718' dateline='1253918654']
Here it is: the sequel to 'Yu-Gi-Oh!: The Story of a Legend Continues'!
Absolutely no knowledge about book 1 is required, but here's the link anyways:
No knowledge required?! So what'll we do when we see 'Bill' or
'Frank' appear for no reason?!

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-89474.html

So, without further ado, here it is!
Yeah, tryin' to act like it'll take off immediately...
Prologue: The Day after Tomorrow (Click to View)
This is the dumbest story ever. So a vulture takes over an island/world, then makes everybody play a trading card game for survival?! WHAT KIND OF STORY IS THIS?! And what's up with that guy at EVERY STORE AT THE SAME TIME?!?! THIS IS STUPID. THIS SHOULD BE ABANDONED.

But really, it's great. It sets up the situation, however odd it may be, and I realize that he was just described as a vulture. But he let a much bigger impression that the little girl who will likely become the main focus in this story, so maybe you should get on that as soon as possible.

Now, watch this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=caooYbp_r...re=related
=I. From the Ashes of Death, a new Life will bloom= (Click to View)
Actually, elites is the proper term. And it (the video) was supposed to be an awesome anime video about 30 seconds long with some guy talking to a girl, then getting punched several feet away for no reason.
=II. Time for Action= (Click to View)
Dang, I'm lazy.

I myself thought it was good. The occasional grammatical misstep here and there (...out of those villages, until they...), but overall could be interesting. Though the vulture simile/metaphor/whatever it was again is a bit weird. A VULTURE FLYING AROUND THE CARCASS OF THE WORLD!!
(09-25-2009 07:47 PM)Kendo Fish Wrote: [ -> ]Dang, I'm lazy.

I myself thought it was good. The occasional grammatical misstep here and there (...out of those villages, until they...), but overall could be interesting. Though the vulture simile/metaphor/whatever it was again is a bit weird. A VULTURE FLYING AROUND THE CARCASS OF THE WORLD!!

What was wrong with the comma? I tought it looked cool.

I know. I suddenly tought of a vulture during maths, so I wrote it down on a scrap of paper.
I read your other story (49 chapters in one nihgt and then the 50th when it was put up.) and I think that this shall be good. I think that maybe the person was described as being vulture-like and myabe has a helicopter to fly in.
(09-25-2009 07:55 PM)legolover09 Wrote: [ -> ]I read your other story (49 chapters in one nihgt and then the 50th when it was put up.) and I think that this shall be good. I think that maybe the person was described as being vulture-like and myabe has a helicopter to fly in.

He's not the same guy as the one from chapter 50 of book 1 tough...;p
Actually, I was still sarcastic with the names... but yeah, that was a good video I described! Ha ha.
This sound so cool.
typical for wanting political power. You'll go mad with it eventually
(09-26-2009 12:40 AM)ragnarok1945 Wrote: [ -> ]typical for wanting political power. You'll go mad with it eventually

In an earlier transcript, Ludwig was nicknamed "The Guide".
But since I don't want discussions with YCM's Jewish Comunity, I'll try to avoid any resmblances to Nazi-Germany, even tough that's where this book's idea came from.
will there eventually be jewish characters or something in the fic?
(09-26-2009 03:05 PM)ragnarok1945 Wrote: [ -> ]will there eventually be jewish characters or something in the fic?

Actually, I replaced everything with non-discriminating terms...

... = Insopia
... = Ludwig
... = bad duelists
... = Dunaco
... = Snatchers
... = distant future
Aw, but if you hadn't explained it all already, there could be extensive discussios on what others thought things meant! Gosh darnit...
(09-26-2009 03:21 PM)Weather Report Wrote: [ -> ]Aw, but if you hadn't explained it all already, there could be extensive discussios on what others thought things meant! Gosh darnit...

I deleted it allready for vulture's sake!
Uh... I guess so? Hooray for debates?!
I am intrested.
(09-26-2009 03:34 PM)Golden Light Wrote: [ -> ]I am intrested.

So am I!
This prologue seems really goo-

Oh, wait...lawlz
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