10-28-2009, 09:59 PM
This is my first Fan-Fic I'm posting hope you like it!
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Chapter 1: Welcome to the Academy (Click to View)
"I think I activate Capture Rod to decrease your monsters attack in half then I trbiute both of my Spirit Salmon for Sun Trout now it's attack will increase by 1200 (Sun Trout ATK 3800 Gene Warped Warwolf 1000 Atk) so now I activate Tail Sweep to decrease the Attack of your wolf by 900 also since Sun Trout has an effect that consideres all battle damage as effect damage so DRoN makes you lose an extra 300 so you lose." "Wait I play Soul Removal now I can remove this card from play in order to play Mirrorman so you will lose Jake Lombardi" said the Duel Robot. " I activate the effect of Trap copy fish so I'm going to use it's effect to activate Solemn Judgement so I still win." "Nice duel Jake that was a good One-Turn Kill but I'm going to do better"
" NEXT DUELIST JASON YUDEN PLEASE REPORT TO DUEL SYSTEM 2"
" I guess it's my lucky day!"
" Jason commence duel you draw 5 I draw 6 cards, I play one monster in defense mode end phase"
" Huh I'm going with Kid Arlas now attack his monster" The card exploded revealing a man with a grey hat and a grey coat with grey pants holding a card then exploding
"You destroyed Card Seeker I now Special Summon Black Luster Soldier"
"Hey cool I want one of those so this card face down and I end my turn."
"I summon Chaos Knight in attack mode his effect lets me Special Summon one DARK monster from my deck as long as it is 4 stars or lower now Dark Elf show your self now Chaos Knight mutual-kill"
" I activate trap it is Unsafe Sacrifice so Black Luster Soldier busts my life points but he's destroyed and you must end your Battle Phase." After Black Luster Soldier attacked Jason it started glowing then exploding.
"I end my turn."
"Good so I use Kid Arlas' special ability in order to grow up to Arlas of Worqshac next I play All Out Attack that suits Arlas perfectly because his attack will incease by 300 for every card he sends to the graveyard and this lets him attack until there is no monsters so i'll start with your elf so you lose 800 now you lose 1500 next I activated Time Reverse so your monsters are brought back so I can attack again to win so batter up take down his elf now his knight"
" Error Error this can't be wait I activate the effect of King Kuriboh reducing damage to 0"
"I guess I'll end."
"Commence Draw Phase I summon Dark Avenger to summon Dark Elf then I activate Evil Unite to summon Elf of Evil with a 1000 point boost but I cannot enter Battle Phase commencing End Phase."
" Heh heh let's see how long that demented elf will last I draw I'm going to use the magic of Aura Shine to use one card from either players Graveyard i select Card Seeker in face-down defense mode now i flip summon him to play Mystic Thunder Katana and equip it to Arlas so now there is no pointless mutual kill so attacking won't destroy my monster."
"Error this is impossible how could he win my next card was Ruthless Assault as long as I had only him I could attack twice so I would have won. ERROR ERROR."
" Huh? I guess I overloaded him with skill. So I passed?"
"Yes you did Jason the test results have been calculated you scored a 55.3 out of 100 so overall the average is 77.7 so we will be farming in Hiona Black this year however since it was 20% lower then the average you will be placed in Abortorius Red." said Principal Keetley
" So Jake how'd you do on the test because I passed you should have got 99% you made a comeback you should have done the best."
"Well Jason I got the lowest so far 52.1% but theres two duelists that we should know Robert Wheeler and Aaron Wilson, Robert is Joey Wheelers son he plays a Dimensional Hero dek that relies on removal so he can power up his Dimensional Hero Van Clad, while Aaron uses Darknights that relies on powering one another up he uses Darknight Lilith to harness his true usage of the deck."
"I have to say that Aaron is going to get a higher mark because removal decks are as slow as exodia decks."
"Hey you don't know what your talking about I run both in the same deck and i got the highest score in the duel exam." exclaimed Dawson.
" So what!?"
"Hey guys if you would stop arguing maybe I could watch this duel."
"So it's my turn to duel hey robo-brain you better be ready because I am the son of Joey Wheeler and Mai Valentine and since I am better then you I go first. Let's go! Okay I draw hmmmmm I think Dimensional Hero Malacious Edge in defense mode but now I can neither add one fusion material monster from my deck to my hand or one Polymerization next I'll activate Dark Dimension now all cards are removed from play if they are sent to the grave I'm done."
"I play Mystic Tomato in attack mode now I attack Malacious Edge destroying it but it allows you to add one Dimensional Hero from your deck to your hand now I play one card face down and end my turn."
"I'll draw so let's begin with Polymerization fusing Charger with Magnum summoning Dimensional Hero Chargeblaster now attack his tomato and let's see the splat (Robert: 4000 Duel Simulator: 3400) and a face down should do."
"Excellent I play Ominous Striker since he was Special Summoned you lose life points until they are equal to mine (Robert&Duel Simulator: 3400) next I activate Future Fusion also say goodbye to my Striker and meet the Darkness Loraiu when he is summoned by tributing that monster he can absorb 800 life points (Robert: 2600 Duel Simulator: 4200) next is Evil Power-Stone now I play one Counter Blast now you lose 1500 life points and I'll end my turn (Robert: 1100 Duel Simulator: 4200)"
"So you like to burn huh well I play another Polymerization to fuse Van Clad with Neo-Inferno to summon Terra Fighter Elite (DHero Terra Fighter Elite ATK: 2700 DEF: 2550) now I'll use Chargeblasters effect to boost his attack by 1400 so with this attack you will be down to 100 life points but with Clad Armour Strike which will make you lose 100 life points for every Van Clad monster that iss removed so you lose exactly."
"So did I pass or did I passssss Principal Keetley?"
"Barely Robert your score was 50.2 out of 100"
"WHAT I kicked that hunk of junks tin can butt."
" But you only got one question right on the paper exam which was who was a famous duelist and you said JOeey WheeelAr which was acceptable because you poorly spelled your fathers name."
"Hmm so which dorm am I going to?"
"Abortorius Red the lowest."
"Hey Jason at least I didn't get the lowest right *snicker*"
"That isn't very funny Jake it's sort of sad."
" NEXT DUELIST JASON YUDEN PLEASE REPORT TO DUEL SYSTEM 2"
" I guess it's my lucky day!"
" Jason commence duel you draw 5 I draw 6 cards, I play one monster in defense mode end phase"
" Huh I'm going with Kid Arlas now attack his monster" The card exploded revealing a man with a grey hat and a grey coat with grey pants holding a card then exploding
"You destroyed Card Seeker I now Special Summon Black Luster Soldier"
"Hey cool I want one of those so this card face down and I end my turn."
"I summon Chaos Knight in attack mode his effect lets me Special Summon one DARK monster from my deck as long as it is 4 stars or lower now Dark Elf show your self now Chaos Knight mutual-kill"
" I activate trap it is Unsafe Sacrifice so Black Luster Soldier busts my life points but he's destroyed and you must end your Battle Phase." After Black Luster Soldier attacked Jason it started glowing then exploding.
"I end my turn."
"Good so I use Kid Arlas' special ability in order to grow up to Arlas of Worqshac next I play All Out Attack that suits Arlas perfectly because his attack will incease by 300 for every card he sends to the graveyard and this lets him attack until there is no monsters so i'll start with your elf so you lose 800 now you lose 1500 next I activated Time Reverse so your monsters are brought back so I can attack again to win so batter up take down his elf now his knight"
" Error Error this can't be wait I activate the effect of King Kuriboh reducing damage to 0"
"I guess I'll end."
"Commence Draw Phase I summon Dark Avenger to summon Dark Elf then I activate Evil Unite to summon Elf of Evil with a 1000 point boost but I cannot enter Battle Phase commencing End Phase."
" Heh heh let's see how long that demented elf will last I draw I'm going to use the magic of Aura Shine to use one card from either players Graveyard i select Card Seeker in face-down defense mode now i flip summon him to play Mystic Thunder Katana and equip it to Arlas so now there is no pointless mutual kill so attacking won't destroy my monster."
"Error this is impossible how could he win my next card was Ruthless Assault as long as I had only him I could attack twice so I would have won. ERROR ERROR."
" Huh? I guess I overloaded him with skill. So I passed?"
"Yes you did Jason the test results have been calculated you scored a 55.3 out of 100 so overall the average is 77.7 so we will be farming in Hiona Black this year however since it was 20% lower then the average you will be placed in Abortorius Red." said Principal Keetley
" So Jake how'd you do on the test because I passed you should have got 99% you made a comeback you should have done the best."
"Well Jason I got the lowest so far 52.1% but theres two duelists that we should know Robert Wheeler and Aaron Wilson, Robert is Joey Wheelers son he plays a Dimensional Hero dek that relies on removal so he can power up his Dimensional Hero Van Clad, while Aaron uses Darknights that relies on powering one another up he uses Darknight Lilith to harness his true usage of the deck."
"I have to say that Aaron is going to get a higher mark because removal decks are as slow as exodia decks."
"Hey you don't know what your talking about I run both in the same deck and i got the highest score in the duel exam." exclaimed Dawson.
" So what!?"
"Hey guys if you would stop arguing maybe I could watch this duel."
"So it's my turn to duel hey robo-brain you better be ready because I am the son of Joey Wheeler and Mai Valentine and since I am better then you I go first. Let's go! Okay I draw hmmmmm I think Dimensional Hero Malacious Edge in defense mode but now I can neither add one fusion material monster from my deck to my hand or one Polymerization next I'll activate Dark Dimension now all cards are removed from play if they are sent to the grave I'm done."
"I play Mystic Tomato in attack mode now I attack Malacious Edge destroying it but it allows you to add one Dimensional Hero from your deck to your hand now I play one card face down and end my turn."
"I'll draw so let's begin with Polymerization fusing Charger with Magnum summoning Dimensional Hero Chargeblaster now attack his tomato and let's see the splat (Robert: 4000 Duel Simulator: 3400) and a face down should do."
"Excellent I play Ominous Striker since he was Special Summoned you lose life points until they are equal to mine (Robert&Duel Simulator: 3400) next I activate Future Fusion also say goodbye to my Striker and meet the Darkness Loraiu when he is summoned by tributing that monster he can absorb 800 life points (Robert: 2600 Duel Simulator: 4200) next is Evil Power-Stone now I play one Counter Blast now you lose 1500 life points and I'll end my turn (Robert: 1100 Duel Simulator: 4200)"
"So you like to burn huh well I play another Polymerization to fuse Van Clad with Neo-Inferno to summon Terra Fighter Elite (DHero Terra Fighter Elite ATK: 2700 DEF: 2550) now I'll use Chargeblasters effect to boost his attack by 1400 so with this attack you will be down to 100 life points but with Clad Armour Strike which will make you lose 100 life points for every Van Clad monster that iss removed so you lose exactly."
"So did I pass or did I passssss Principal Keetley?"
"Barely Robert your score was 50.2 out of 100"
"WHAT I kicked that hunk of junks tin can butt."
" But you only got one question right on the paper exam which was who was a famous duelist and you said JOeey WheeelAr which was acceptable because you poorly spelled your fathers name."
"Hmm so which dorm am I going to?"
"Abortorius Red the lowest."
"Hey Jason at least I didn't get the lowest right *snicker*"
"That isn't very funny Jake it's sort of sad."
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