Seto Kaiba has gathered the 8 strongest duelists in the world to battle in a great tournament. Yugi Motou, Seto Kaiba, Jaden Yuki, Zane Truesdale, Aster Phoenix, Jhesse Anderson, Yusei Fudo, and (yours truely) ExplodingClay have gathered to Face off. The rules are simple: Matches are determined by a random draw and each duelist can only use one banned card in their decks. And then, the Superstar Tournament begins!!!
1. You use an author insert.
2. Why are these eight guys coming together? How are they in the same time period? Magic tournament? BULL.
3. Your capitalization is weird.
4. Attachments aren't allowed. And besides, it looks to me like it's just a picture of Deidara, by not clicking on it. Uhh, WHY!?!?
5. Superstar Tournament? That doesn't sound AWESOME enough.
6. Seto Kaiba gathers himself.
It needs work already. WOW, this is gonna need work.
f*** You!
The tournament consists of 3 rounds. He who wins the contest wins the prize card. Good luck. Let the dueling begin!
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Jeez. Your reply just set the future of this thing in stone. This has no potential. You don't want to improve it an it sucks and makes no sense, so you're going down the wrong path. It's happened many times before. Just listen to her.
Please read this rule, Mr. Narutocharactermanonayugiohforummakingitlookawkwardlikeallofthoseotherpeoplelikethat.
The Jack Witt Clause
You must be able to take criticism for your fanfic. Neg-repping a person just because they gave you a bad review or told you that your fanfic was bad in any other way is NOT OK. And most definitely, you should NOT REPORT IT. Instead, learn to live the comments and improve from them.
Now, you can't seem to handle any sort of criticism, so you've just broken that rule a tad bit there. LEARN FROM YOUR MISTAKE AND STOP BEING SO... SO... RUDE!
Do you think I care what you say? f*** off!
Sheesh, trolls nowadays just aren't as tactful as they used to be.