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Liek, omg rite? Godzilla fic? Blasphemy.
Some things you should know (Click to View)
Prologue - Conversation (Click to View)
Chapter 1 - Encounter (Click to View)
Awesome Prologue, Fen'.

May the Fanfic-writing Force be with you.
Very good for a prolouge. I am a fan of godzilla myself, and I think you did him justice.

Looking forward to more, I will be checking back often.
Interesting exposition. It's seems good, and I'll be awaiting the first chapter. ;D
Mothra is cooler than godzilla. So is that hydra guy.

That's all I have to say.

Interesting story, maybe I can submit a character after a couple chapters.
Is this that project you PMed me about? I'm not a big fan of Godzilla, but I bet you'll be able to make it work. ;D
(11-02-2009 11:58 AM).:Abarai Renji:. Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome Prologue, Fen'.

May the Fanfic-writing Force be with you.

Err, thanks?

(11-02-2009 12:46 PM)Good Omen Wrote: [ -> ]Very good for a prolouge. I am a fan of godzilla myself, and I think you did him justice.

Looking forward to more, I will be checking back often.

Thank you. :3

(11-02-2009 07:49 PM)Davok Wrote: [ -> ]Interesting exposition. It's seems good, and I'll be awaiting the first chapter. ;D

Yay~ Very Happy

(11-02-2009 10:10 PM)Nexev Wrote: [ -> ]Mothra is cooler than godzilla. So is that hydra guy.

That's all I have to say.

Interesting story, maybe I can submit a character after a couple chapters.

Mothra's all peace and hippie like, Battra's more of the whole "I'm gonna blow up your planet and you can't do crap about it"

And sure. :3

(11-02-2009 10:19 PM)Déjà Cru Wrote: [ -> ]Is this that project you PMed me about? I'm not a big fan of Godzilla, but I bet you'll be able to make it work. ;D

Yes, yes it is.

Oh, and I'm gonna make it work. >:3

EDIT: Part 1 of Chapter 1 is up. I have to go in a bit, but when I get back I'll work on chapter 1 some more~
The first part was awesome indeed.

Lemme guess? Icy's Character?
(11-03-2009 04:39 PM).:Abarai Renji:. Wrote: [ -> ]The first part was awesome indeed.

Lemme guess? Icy's Character?

NO.

NO IT'S NOT.

WHAT IS THIS LIE THAT YOU SPEAK OF?
My thoughts are confirmed then. "Thank you, come again."
Chapter 1 is complete now, going to update this post with the character register.

Monster Directory (Click to View)
Pretty nice. You didn't disappoint with the first chapter.
Thanks, I admit, I'm a bit rusty. ^_^;

Updated Monster Directory with Titanosaurus and Ebirah. >:D
The first Chapter was great, I have to admit. ;D
First chapter was okay, also, though the Titanosaurus/Ebirah fight could have been better. =/ The description's okay, also, though I am irritated by the repetition of "seemed" in the first paragraph. Don't really have time to critique it all; just came to say it seems you're doing well, but there's still some room for improvement. I guess I'll elaborate later, I have to go now.
It was pretty good, but i have to agree with Davok the Titanosaurus/Ebirah could have been better, but its your story, anywho, just keep up the good work.
(11-04-2009 12:52 PM)Davok Wrote: [ -> ]First chapter was okay, also, though the Titanosaurus/Ebirah fight could have been better. =/ The description's okay, also, though I am irritated by the repetition of "seemed" in the first paragraph. Don't really have time to critique it all; just came to say it seems you're doing well, but there's still some room for improvement. I guess I'll elaborate later, I have to go now.
(11-04-2009 02:08 PM)Mystic Soul Wrote: [ -> ]It was pretty good, but i have to agree with Davok the Titanosaurus/Ebirah could have been better, but its your story, anywho, just keep up the good work.

I was originally going to make the fight longer, but Ebirah isn't that strong. :/

I'll see if I can edit it tomorrow.
Very nice. Interesting. I cant wait for more.
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