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Chapter 1: Summon! Fusion Force Dragon! (Click to View)
Chapter 2: The Ace of Raiko!? Crimson Thunder Strike! (Click to View)
Chapter 3: Child of Thundering Skies! (Click to View)
Undescriptive and short Prologue. Chapters will be better and longer.
hmm...it's goood...
just you could the 2nd part of the prologue describe little more or write it differently...
the story is nice...Very Happy
and maybe you should remove the 7 years thing and just put when the 2nd part starts 7 years later...it's may opinion...
I read few of your fan-fics and I know that this will be good too...Very Happy
Unfortunatelly I usually don't end my fanfics, but I promise I will try my best with this one, because unlike the last ones I was forced to follow a certain theme, this one will be a little more free.

First Chapter will be up soon, I think =P
I hope that you will end it...Very Happy
'cause you have talent...
yay..I can't wait...Very Happy
Chapter 1: Summon! Fusion Force Dragon! (Click to View)
Notes: If you get the references on Valian's name, rep for you! Also, about the prologue; I just couldn't resist putting that YGOAS joke in it.
wow...Very Happy
this super awesome...Very HappyD
I love your made up cards...just when you could make them to see the golden roar dragon...
I spot few grammar errors but it's good...
hmm maybe Vailan means Villain?!
this is very good...
if you want I could help you make the cards...Very Happy
I would love to do that..Very Happy
In fact Valian has nothing to do with the references, Jackson is a reference to both the King and the Prince. (Jack Atlas and Michael Jackson)
I dislike splitting up duels in more chapters, but whatever. Grammar check should be done. It will prevent typo's like 'displays' and 'teh'. I'm waiting for more.
eh...I thought that the name has to do with the references...Very Happy
but that's nice from you to mention MJ in your fic...Very Happy
1 rep for you...Very Happy
BTW: Jack's going to cameo, isn't he? I know he seems to be retired, but can he have one little Duel?
Note: In this Chapter I changed "The Announcer" to "The MC".

Chapter 2: The Ace of Raiko!? Crimson Thunder Strike! (Click to View)
nice...I love it...Very Happy
I see you put yourself in the Fic...Very Happy
I like the end...Very Happy sp they will have to duel again..Very Happy
Actually, the guy named after myself won't play a major role, I just had major lack of fantasy during the end.

EDIT: Made-Upz!
Chapter 3: Child of Thundering Skies! (Click to View)
Also, you can get a character in this fic too. If it becomes a major character or not depends on how much I like it. Anyway, PM me if you're interested.
nice chapter...Very Happy
tough it's a bit short...
the other kid is creepy..like he is coming from a child-horror...xD
and I sad 'cause there is were no duels...Sad(
I want more comments.

Well, well, at least I have you Trace xD

Anyway, writing Ch 4 now, and got myself a signature for this thing.
hh..Very Happy
I will always leave here a comment 'cause the fis is awesome...Very Happy
hmm..could I post a character? just PM what should I fill..Very Happy
and the signature is awesome...Very Happy
Just PM me the basic information, like name, appearance and deck.
ok..Very Happy do I have to PM all Deck List or just one archetype and then you add some cards?
It's good so far. Keep up the good work.
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