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Hello! This is my Great Swordsmen set. I want people to rate them give ideas for future cards etc.
I DO NOT own the artwork of my cards. They are from deviantart by these users:

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Some cards have long effects which i have put next to them. I hope you like my cards!Here they are (I'll do more when I have time):

Monsters and some long effects (Click to View)

Magic Cards (Click to View)

Trap Cards (not many) (Click to View)

And the pack (which is also in my signature):
[Image: GreatSwordsmanBoosterPack.jpg]

great cards

Great Swordsman-The Survivor looks alot like ike from fire emblem

It's actually from Kingdom Hearts I think. Please vote in the poll too.

I like it. But it does have some possible flaws.

Thunder Warrior: most people don't like cards with two attributes, personally, i don't care. But meh. 3000 points max increase is a lot, but it is a two tribute with 2000 attack and defence, since its unaffected by its own effect, it seems balanced. To me, anyway.

Twin Sword: i think allowing it to attack twice without an equip is going a bit overboard...

Swords: The Field lets you get two cards a turn for no cost? A bit overpowered.

Golden Shaman: Ok... when you summon it you could simply summon back the monsters you sacrificed. You can summon monsters without tribute and your opponents cost one more? and of course warriors gaining 600 attack but losing 200 defense. That might be pushing it a bit.

Command Laser Sword: i think this card is JUST ok. If your opponent doesn't use those monster types... but then again they can set other monsters, so, like 'the last warrior from another planet'. Its good.

Great Swordsman: With its effect you could really destroy a monster a turn... But its good.

Double Knifer: "But then they have to be destroyed". When? during the end phase?

This is just my opinion, and since i'm a newb you should probably wait for a more experienced person Smile

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As for some ideas... Well, this deck seems to be based on Equips, increased attack, and multiple attacks. So... perhaps a card that allows all 'great swordsman' on the field to attack twice? Of course, the cost would have to be big...

Some traps would be nice, perhaps a trap that prevents 'great swordsman' from being destroyed in battle for a turn, and any damage you take is gained instead.

A Great Swordsman that acts like Ha Des? when 'Great Swordsman" monsters destroy opposing monsters, their effect is negated?

There are OCG errors, but i'm no expert, so i can't help you there. Heck, most of the grammar in this post is wrong. You probably don't care too much about that anyway.

Anyway, good luck with them. 7.5/10

"Double Knifer: "But then they have to be destroyed". When? during the end phase?"

Yes I meant end phase I'll change it.

"Twin Sword: i think allowing it to attack twice without an equip is going a bit overboard..."
You're right but it's defense sucks so any card that can change him to defense position beats it.

Swords: The Field lets you get two cards a turn for no cost? A bit overpowered.
I meant to put instead of drawing so it's not overpowered.

Great Swordsman: With its effect you could really destroy a monster a turn... But its good.

which one?

I didn't use quotes because I was just writing about some parts of his/her post.

Wolf: summon wolf monsters from where? hand? deck? graveyard? Removed?
Some or all of the above?

Finding Sword: can you sacrifice a monster from your opponents monster as well?

Now for the old bits...

Great Swordsman: I meant master of Swords, silly me Smile

Twin Swords: You're right but it's defense sucks so any card that can change him to defense position beats it.
True but you could use an equip such as mage power and united we stand etc. to not only let it attack 4 (or more with further equips) times, but defend well as a bonus. Although, thinking about it, a 'flaw' is that with one card effect, that monster with a bunch of good equips is history. So i guess its ok Smile

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aside from that, the rest are noted and WOOHOO

8.6/10

getting closer Smile

Edit: Oh, and no, i didn't vote one for each... i think, my computer does do some weird stuff. I voted for... the ones that currently have more then one vote LOL (except the shaman)
Master of Swords
Gargoyle
Survivor
oh, i just noticed the star on the ones i voted for, so no, i only voted for those three.

alvarosv Wrote:Hello! This are my Great Swordsmen set. I want people to rate them give ideas for future cards etc.
I DO NOT own the artwork of my cards. They are from deviantart by these users:
Blunaa
Shamshir-BP
ajm490
uhlsdragon
dskemmanuel
arvalis
wulfiesacolyte
lukedenby
NeoCerberusX
AunShova
Treasure-Hunter
Maglot
ProjectHazoid

Some cards have long effects which i have put next to them. I hope you like my cards!Here they are (I'll do more when I have time):

When you summon this card you can get all cards in your deck that include Great Swordsman in their name and add them to your hand. As long as this card is on the field there is no card limit in the hand. This effect affects both players. As long as this card is on the field all monsters thet include Great Swordsman in their name gain 1000 attack points (not including this card). All monsters on the field which are not type Beast, Beast-Warrior, or Warrior are automatically destroyed when this card is summoned. As long as this card is on the field, no monster that is not Beast, Warrior-Beast, or Warrior can be summoned to the field
When you summon this card you can activate one of the following effects if the needed cards are on the field:
-1 monster with Great Swordsman in it's name, summon a warrior monster with 1000 attack or less from your deck to your field.
-Two monsters with Great Swordsman in their name, decrease the attack and defense of a monster on the field by 2000.
-Three monsters with Great Swordsman in their name, add a magic/trap card to your hand but you have to show it to your opponent.
-4 monsters with Great Swordsman in it's name, destroy a magic/trap card on the field.
-5 monsters with Great Swordsman in their name, destroy a monster on the field.

Too much.

sweet cards dude. I would suggest making Great Swordsman:Ultimate blader.

card_creater Wrote:sweet cards dude. I would suggest making Great Swordsman:Ultimate blader.

Nice idea but I have to find a picture which is pretty hard. Thank you and your rating is?
If you comment please say ways to improve and at least rate and vote in the poll.

good cards

Please rate these cards so I know what to improve. When I can I'll do more of them and I'll try to do more trap cards.

BUMP

Nice cards 8/10 but the Survivor is Ike from fire emblem path of radiance

Nice pics and ideas, but too over powered.

which ones overpowered?

how do you make the card packs?

In stores.

BUMP and new cards coming soon.

Good cards. I like a few of the pics. A lot of OCG errors in your effects. Plus pics need backgrounds. my rate is 6/10 cause you gave it a shot.
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