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This story will probably make more sense if you've read the original Yu-Gi-Oh: The third legacy fan fic, however if you haven't you can still enjoy this one.

This is a three part story that marks the end of third legacy. It's set about five years later when Jamin and his friends have split up to follow separate careers. As I said there are only three episodes, but they're longer than the ones in third legacy so I'll be posting them up here in parts to make it all easier to take in. enjoy:

episode 1 (Click to View)
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Page 1 updated with part 2
I kinda skimmed through the second part, but the 1st part was really good. I'd like to see more Insect-Type monsters as they don't get used in the anime that often.

Part 2 was also good, I just didn't really "read" the whole thing.
[Star Wrote:]
I kinda skimmed through the second part, but the 1st part was really good. I'd like to see more Insect-Type monsters as they don't get used in the anime that often.

Part 2 was also good, I just didn't really "read" the whole thing.

C'mon Star isn't he your friend be honest. Tell the true.
xDTAxCarnage Wrote:I have to be honest, this fan-fic bored the hell outta me. You probably won't listen to me but, my advice is add some, Violence, Nudity Pevasive Language & Drug use.

You know, add all these things that are banned from this forum.

If you didn't get the sarcasm, the fanfictions on this site are intended for all ages. Things such as nudity and drug use aren't allowed.
xDTAxCarnage Wrote:I have to be honest, this fan-fic bored the hell outta me. You probably won't listen to me but, my advice is add some, Violence, Nudity Pevasive Language & Drug use.

Hm, maybe if I ever get the inkling to get booted off the forum I might consider it, now quit spamming.



To be honest I'm not happy with most of part 2, it's not exactly the sort of stuff I normally do and I was extremely reluctant to put Kaiba in, plus I don't think I got his personality right either ><...
xDTAxCarnage Wrote:
[Star Wrote:]
I kinda skimmed through the second part, but the 1st part was really good. I'd like to see more Insect-Type monsters as they don't get used in the anime that often.

Part 2 was also good, I just didn't really "read" the whole thing.

C'mon Star isn't he your friend be honest. Tell the true.

He is my friend and I was being Honest (no pun intended).

TO's a great Fan-Fic writer and you shouldn't be spamming this thread with your ridiculous suggestions.

I've used Kaiba in Hidden Legacy Season 1 and I don't know how well I did with his personality.

You should check it out to get an idea.
I know you can get banned.. chill out. I was kidding. You don't have to get all girly. Truthfully, I feel the same way Star does. To make the story more exciting maybe you can add more life to the character. Develop them a little. Maybe add pics for them like God Kaze or even write them Bio. Those things are what attract me to a Fan-Fic.


[Star Wrote:]
xDTAxCarnage Wrote:
[Star Wrote:]
I kinda skimmed through the second part, but the 1st part was really good. I'd like to see more Insect-Type monsters as they don't get used in the anime that often.

Part 2 was also good, I just didn't really "read" the whole thing.

C'mon Star isn't he your friend be honest. Tell the true.

He is my friend and I was being Honest (no pun intended).

TO's a great Fan-Fic writer and you shouldn't be spamming this thread with your ridiculous suggestions.

I've used Kaiba in Hidden Legacy Season 1 and I don't know how well I did with his personality.

You should check it out to get an idea.

Stop Crying... I was only joking... I know what Spam is..
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You haven't read the original Third Legacy, have you? All their development is in there....And if you want images look here....
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Page 1 updated with part 3
its good but after 2 words i fell asleep, woke up and found out this fanfic rocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DUDE!




no way...

and just when i thought this story had a good ending.


lol

and I like the fact that at the end of the main series, you didn't bring all the dead guys back to life, like GX did with 'sent to the stars'
Lol, I hate it when that happens, if you're gonna put in the drama of killing people then you're totally gonna kill it by bringing them back to life, I mean how many times did Goku die and come back again? I've only played the games and he's died at least five times, and not when I was beating him Razz...
Wow what a great ending
What, you think that's it? I'm nowhere near done yet Razz....

Episode 2 (Click to View)
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Episode 2, part 2 updated. Enjoy...
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Episode 2, part 3 added. One episode left Razz...
Episode 3 part 1 is up, first part of the final episode, enjoy.

Episode 3 (Click to View)