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stroyline (Click to View)
about the characters (Click to View)

episode one The fate of a boy (Click to View)
episode two The fate of a boyI (Click to View)
episode three The fate of a boyII (Click to View)
episode four-The return of Nathan (Click to View)
episode five- The Dark Academy part 1 (Click to View)
episode Six- The Dark Academy part 2 (Click to View)
episode seven- The Dark Academy part 3 (Click to View)
episode eight- the rematch (Click to View)
episode nine- duelling for RARES (Click to View)
episode Ten- Making the grade (Click to View)
episode eleven- Lee vs chuck (Click to View)
episode Twelve-Path to becoming top dog (Click to View)
episode thirteen-The top dog (1) (Click to View)
2 short
should be good
I know i am just writing episode one
erm.. not to sound rude, but this isnt great.

i cant read half of it, i cant understand how you write.

the town is called 'dragon'? how uncreative...

and there is a killer? XD

and Jaden still made it in the duel world... XD XD XD XD

sorry, but this really isnt that great.

please work on your english. ^_^ it helps to know grammAr to write, and to have people understand what you are saying.

-Kale™
(08-13-2008 11:55 AM)Kale Wrote: [ -> ]erm.. not to sound rude, but this isnt great.

i cant read half of it, i cant understand how you write.

the town is called 'dragon'? how uncreative...

and there is a killer? XD

and Jaden still made it in the duel world... XD XD XD XD

sorry, but this really isnt that great.

please work on your english. ^_^ it helps to know grammAr to write, and to have people understand what you are saying.

-Kale™
i know he still made it in the dueling world
episode two is out
and episode three
Why did you triple post
don't know why i tripe posted but, i only goign to do one post from now on to see if i got any replies
It needs to be much more organised and understandable. Check the main threads for help. I will comment the stroy and evertthing properly once thats taken care of.

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Sorry, all I can say is alot more work needs to be put int his fanfic.
working on trying to post more epsiode ND ,ORE SHOULD BE UP SOON AND i MAY TANSFER TO MY BACKUP ACCOUNT. SO SOZ FOR THE DELAY BUT IT WILL BE BACK UP AND RUN SOON AND THE EPSIODE WILL BE AIR AGAIN SOON AND THERE MAYBE A HOUR OR AN HOUR AND A HALF SPECAIL DUE TO THIS PORBELM.
Something that attract me to here is the word"Rise".My now fan fic is call Rise of the Dark Duelist.Your is killer.
been move to kyubi20019
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