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here is my fanfic. i don't think its too great, but my real life friends really like it. i hope my ycm friends will like it just as much

*one thing* the main character's main finishing card, "great maju garzett", is a little different in my fanfic than it is in real life. sometimes it can be used in combos that you could not really use it in. this is because i wanted the card, in the world of my fanfic, to be something with greater power than the average card, just like every main character's main card. sorry if this bothers anyone ^_^
*another thing* in my story, since it is supposed to take place in the same world as the original yugioh anime, the monster card "Larva Moth" is played using the effect that it had when played in the anime by weevil/haga. this effect essentially lets it be treated as "Petit Moth" for the summoning of "Great Moth" or "Ultimate Great Moth", only two turns ahead in its evolution. sorry if this pisses you off. that's you're right i guess...
*also* there is the issue of "Card of Sanctity", the card that was most changed between the anime and the card game. this card is played using its anime effect in my fanfic. i don't think anyone will have a problem with this one Smile


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Introduction:
3000 years ago in the prosperous and magical land of Egypt there lived a powerful and noble nomad, acquaintance to the legendary Pharaoh Atemu. When this man's dark side took form, he sealed the darkness away, at the same time cursing himself to be forgotten by history, sealing his life force away in the twelve Duelist's Souls until the day that he returned to this earth and his dark side could finally be destroyed.

Chapter One (Click to View)
Chapter Two (Click to View)
Chapter Three (Click to View)
Chapter Four (Click to View)
Chapter Five (Click to View)
Chapter Six (Click to View)

for further chapters, look at my posts further down on the page^__^
Well. Its definitely not dark like my story. Yours seems to be a kids dream adventure. That expresses youth. But some of the parts seemed a little sloppy. Your expressing something from the old yugioh series, which their cards werent very good. Though it was the same for GX. So its descent. But the concept. It feels like if somethings missing...
I dont know what, but I guess it will no longer be when you make the 2nd episode. Smile
Yeah,I am the one that rushed him to post as quickly as possible,...
^_^
For introduction>>>You've got my attention!!!Really well done!!!
its not that. the story spans several "books" which are essentially just about twenty or so chapters as long as this one. the first one is about them becoming less naive. the second is about john realizing that he is not perfect, and that his destiny actually scares him. the third reveals that john's path is a little different from the others as he is the one that will unite their destinies. the fourth is about the forgotten duelist's dark side finally being sealed away, but introduces the concept of a darkness inside every hero. the fifth and sixth are lighthearted and tie up the whole thing and make way for the sub-stories that i am still working on even now. all the while, new characters are introduced who are all brought together by the duelist's legacy, and together the characters become stronger and more serious, and ten finally go their separate ways. the entire thing spans three years of their lives, and above all the most interesting thing is to see how much the characters have changed by the end of the core series, while still retaining who they really are. the fun is just as much the journey as it is the destination. also, don't worry. not only do the characters' decks get a serious overhaul soon, they are also set off on a mission and start to grow up a little as soon as chapter 5. and fear not, they don't have duel disks now, because duel disks are still relatively hard to find,especially in the US, but that will change soon too ^__^
you are right though, the beginning of the story is more like gx than anything else. the latter installments become more like the original yugioh though, with plenty of evil creatures and dark magic.
chapter two is finished
Hmm,...Interesting,...Looking forward to part 3!!!
Great job!!!^_^
special update:

in my fanfic, even though many of the cards used by the characters are real cards, they also use a few cards that i created for their decks specifically. here are a few:

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Promising. I've only read the first chapter but its far better than a lot of fan-fics I've read, good job...

That and Fiend Megacyber is probably one of my favourite cards too, I just don't use it XD...
thanks totalobelisk. chapt 3 should be up today.
C'mon!!!
I am waiting for this for toooo long!!!
I'm like soooo looking forward to chapter 3!!!
^_^
chapter 3 up!
Like WoW!!!
This is great!!!
But,I would prefer a bit longer duels,...
And perhaps you could use some of my cards?!?
I would be honored,...
^_^
i'll try to fit some of your cards in, but the decks have already pretty much been set in stone. I have been thinking about writing a special edition sometime not too far down the road, and i do need some decks for that, so sure! i'll use your cards for that!
and don't worry, longer duels are coming. this was just a way to introduce the characters' decks without giving too much away, and to introduce Christopher Johnson as John's rival,who does not appear again for quite awhile.
Oh yeah,you have already told me about short duels,...
(stupid me!!!)
And for my cards being used in your Fan Fic,...ME-HAPPY!!!
I have a few tactics with them,...So,when you decide making special series,give me a call(or message actually,...)
^_^
this is cool. this is my 400th post, used to announce that chapter four of my fanfic, by far the best thing i've ever posted on this site, is up. that means i'm now a level four. what a great day four me! (pun intended ^_^)

sorry that chapter four is short. it is one of those necessary evil installments that don't have any relevance to the narrative other than to set up the next series of events and built mystery and suspense. don't worry, chapter five will be up before long.
chapter five is up. another short chapter. don't worry, the next one will be out before long, and is much more exciting.
Brilliant!!!
You got my attention!!!
I'm looking forward to seeing Chapter 5!!!
^_^
bump
Nice chapters.
thank you
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