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Hi this is gonna be my first fan fic so please help me if you can, my grammer as you know aint so good, but please be nice, and no scolding at me for n00b cards, it adds more fun.

Season 1: Duel Island

Episode 1

Yuki looks out the window while on the plane to the dueling tornerment ground, He grips his lucky deck he made with the best cards he could affort.
“The duelist’s here would be more of a challenge than the ones back home” thought Yuki, as the plane went down a few more feet.
Yuki had Brown eyes and short Black Hair, he also wore glasses.

Just then the Announcer on the plane said “The Tourney plane will be landing in a few minutes, make sure your decks are ready, because once you get off this plane, there’s no going back. Have fun.”
Soon enough the plane land’s, Yuki gets off along with what seemed like a thousand people.

They are told to go into a big building, In side the building was full of dueling platforms, Yuki felt intimidated by the size of the place.
“Now you will be paired into dueling groups, Go to the list at the far side of the room to see who you will be paired up against. Once again good luck to all.”

Yuki goes to the list and sees who he is paired up agenced, it was someone called Deepai. Deepai had Brown eyes, glasses, dark skin, and had black hair, his hair was sort of messy.
“Alright find the person you are paired up with and get onto one of the dueling platforms.” Said the Announcer.
“Good luck to you, this will be my first duel in this torney, I hope I do well.” Says Deepai.
Yuki says nothing and puts his deck into the deck holder.

Deepai goes first he draws, “My move first, I’ll start things off with Great White in attack mode (ATK 1600), and play 1 card face down, I end my turn”

Yuki draws, without saying anything Yuki summons La-Jin The Mystical Genie Of The Lamp in attack mode (ATK 1800). “Hold it I activate my trap, Trap Hole.” Deepai shouts.
La-Jin gets sent to the grave yard and Yuki ends his turn.

Deepai draws, “My move now, I play the magic card monster reborn, to reborn La-Gin, I now attack your life points directly with both of my monsters. Then I sacrifice him for Dark Magician in attack mode (ATK 2500). And with doing that I end my turn.”
Deepai: 8000, Yuki: 4600

Yuki draws “Nothing in my hand can take down that monster so I better play my Card Destruction and hope that I draw something decent.” Yuki though as he plays the magic card Card Destruction, and then activates the magic card Fissure destroying Dark Magician, then summons Ryu-Kishin Powered in attack (ATK 1600) and attacks Deepai’s Life Points directly, and ends his turn.
Deepai: 6400, Yuki: 4600

“Gah, he took down my best guy and I already used monster reborn so I can’t bring him back again, oh well better use the back up plan,” Deepai thought, as he drew his card.
“I summon this monster in defence mode, and play 2 cards face down, that ends my turn.” Deepai shouts.
Yuki draws, and summon 1 monster in defence mode and attacks his face down card, it was Winged Dragon, Guardian of the Fortress #1, Deepai smiles, “I activate Castle Wall on this monster”, he says, “Increasing its defence to 1700, just enough to withstand your attack and cause you some recall”
Yuki then ends his turn
Deepai: 6400, Yuki: 4500

“My move,” Deepai says as he draws, You may have taken down my magician but I have something equally powerful, I sacrifice my Winged Dragon, to summon, Summon Skull, In attack mode (ATK 2500). Now attack his Ryu-Kishin Powered!” Deepai Commands "Lightning Strike!"
“Now I play Last will, to special summon from my deck my Mystic Clown, in attack mode (ATK 1500), and I end my turn.”

Yuki Draws, and Plays a monster in defence mode and ends his turn. “You might as well give up, you have no monster that can withstand my beast, he sneers.”

“I draw now, and I attack your 1st Face down monster with my Mystic Clown,” Yuki flips up his man-eater bug, “No way, wa-what, but that means, GOD DAMN IT!!!” Summon Skull gets destroyed and Deepai ends his turn.

Yuki draws and activates the magic card, monster reborn, reborning Dark Magician from the grave yard, and then he summons Baron of the Fiend Sword in attack mode (ATK 1550) and attacks Mystic Clown with it, “I activate my trap card Waboku, which negates your attacks.”
Yuki ends his turn

“Whats that thing Yugi has, Heart of the cards, yeah I need that right now, Heart of the cards, guide me.” Deepai Mutters to Himself as he draws, “Giant Solder Of Stone, Not to shabby, I’ll just play this in defence mode” He thought. “I play this card in defence mode and I end my turn” he says.

Yuki then draws and sacrifices Baron of the Fiend Sword, for Curse of Dragon (ATK 2000) and attacks the face down card with Curse of Dragon. “Ha Ha, I knew this guy would come in handy, it’s Giant Soldier Of Stone, Now what ya gonna do” (DEF 2000) Yuki attacks Giant Solder Of Stone with Dark Magician, “Oh yeah, you got that, damn it” He says as Giant Solder Of Stone gets sent to the graveyard.”
Yuki then ends his turn.

“I draw,” says Deepai, and as he drew a big smile goes on, his face. “This is the card I have been waiting for, I play the magic card Dark Hole, destroying all your precious monsters on your side of the field.” I then end my turn.

Yuki draws and ends his turn.

Deepai draws “Ah I see, no monsters eh, well I happen to have drawn one, it may not be much, but its better than nothing, I summon feral Imp in attack mode (ATK 1300) and attack your Life Points directly.

Deepai: 6400, Yuki: 3200

Yuki draws and plays one card face down and ends his turn.

Deepai Draws “Ah I see, again without doing anything, well then, I summon Ancient Elf in attack mode (ATK 1450) and attack your Life Points with both of em

Deepai: 6400, Yuki: 450

Yuki Draws and plays 1 card in defence mode and ends his turn.

Deepai draws, “You keep this up and my entire field would be swarming with monsters, I now summon Celtic Guardian (ATK 1400) and I attack your face down monster with Ancient Elf.” Yuki Flips up Giant Solder Of Stone (DEF 2000) “Blast, I thought it would be a weak, monster, oh well, your only prolonging your defeat,” Deepai says as he ends his turn.
Deepai: 5950, Yuki: 450

Yuki draws, and sacrifices Giant Solder Of Stone for Judge man (2200) and attacks Feral Imp, then he plays Fissure and destroys Celtic Guardian, and then ends his turn.

Deepai Draws, “no-no way, Ho-How could you take down my entire monster collection in just 1 turn? I play a monster in defence mode and switch Ancient Elf into defence (DEF 1200), and end my turn.” Deepai says.

Yuki Draws and Attacks the face down monster with Judge Man, It was Mystical Elf, which quickly got demolished.
Yuki then ends his turn.

Deepai Draws “Damn, no monster, I better end my turn.” Deepai thought “I end my turn” said Deepai.

Yuki draws and plays Great White in attack mode (ATK 1600) and attacks Ancient Elf, destroying it, Then Yuki attacks Deepai’s life points with Judge Man and ends his turn.
Deepai: 3750, Yuki: 450

“My turn, I draw” Deepai says “Well at least I drew a monster, not like it’s gonna do any good” Thought Deepai “I play this monster in defence mode and end my turn,” Deepai said.

Yuki draws and Attacks the face down card with Great White, it was Maha Vallo and then attacks his Life Points with Judge Man.
Yuki then sacrifices Great White and Judge Man to summon Dark Magician.
Then he ends his turn
Deepai: 1550, Yuki: 450

“My move I draw,” Deepai sighs “I summon this monster in defence and end my turn.”

Yuki draws and sets one monster in defence mode and attacks Deepai’s face down monster and ends his turn.
“I’m not going to win so whatever” Deepai draws and smiles, I play this monster in defence and end my turn.”

Yuki draws and flips up Hane Hane (ATK 400) and sends Deepai’s face down card back to his hand, “n-no way that was my Wall Of Illusion, the one card that could have stopped you, DAMN!!!”
Yuki then attacks his Life points and wins

The Duel Platform lowers.

“Ho-how could you have beaten my deck, I am invincible?!!” Yuki says nothing.
“And why don’t you talk, are you some kind of mute?” Deepai rudely asks
Yuki replys with “I have no need to talk, the reason you lost is that you did not pay attention to the game, I kept quiet and concentrated on what I expected you to do, you on the other hand put barly any effort into duelling it self and more effort into talking, that is why you lost.”

With saying that Yuki walked off and sat down to watch what was happening in the duel Platform next to theres.

“Dark Magician attack his Fortress Whale, Dark Magic Attack!!! Now Baron Of The Fiend Sword Attack his Life Points Directly!” One of the duelist says
“And that brings your Life points to 0, as always I win.” He says.
“But my prized card, I thought it was unbeatable” the other one said.
“Not even close now I am bored of duelling you. “Hmm you seem tough, you just beat that Deepai guy right, my names David a pleasure to meet you, and it would be a bigger pleasure to beat you.” David had streight black hair and black eyes.

“I best be off now, bye” He says as he runs off.
Yuki just looks blankly as he runs, then walks off

I enjoyed it. Nice use of starter deck cards. It reminds me of the good old days.

Nice fan-fic, best of luck with it ^_^

great fan fic SOS.

(11-05-2008 02:38 AM)「Synthiea」 Wrote: [ -> ]A Wild Synthiea appears...
It uses hug..
SOS Haruhi faints.
Synthiea uses blush.

=D GREAT SOS!!!!!!!!

Epic Quotes are Epic.

Thanks I will post next episode, same time, same day, next week

Episode 2

“Alright you have all proven yourselves worthy in the first round, and you are ready to go to the dueling section of the island, once you step in these grounds theres no going back, if you lose not only do you get shipped back you also lose your rarest card, so if you have any doubts about your deck, do not go any further, everyone else please obtain your duel disk and go ahead, if you lose a match you will be sent back, once you have beaten 5 duelists you may go into the main dueling area, where you will sort yourselves into groups by picking a partner, Oh did I mention the 1000$ reward for the winner? The duelists you beat will be kept track on your duel disk, they also have a alarm which activates if you try to tamper with it to get to the next round, so don’t even try, unless you want us to haul your sorry butt of the island, But where are my manners, my name is Kyle I am the head of this tourney, I will also participate in the tourney with all the same chances as you. Alright duelists, off you go.” With saying that he walked off, Kyle had brown hair, blue eyes and was tall, he also had hair pointing up, and a gold rod with a eye on it.

Yuki stared at his deck “It got me through to this round, but will that be enough, all these people seem powerful and level headed and I barely got past the first round, but I must trust my skills and go and just do my best, and win.” Yuki thought.
As he was walking along he heard some shouting, “Heh we won this duel now, heh heh, now give us your rarest card for the master” said one of the voices.
Yuki quickly runs over, he saw 2 people in robes weird black robes with a eye on the top which was the same as the eye on the rod, the two people in the robes also had that eye on their forehead, one of them he recognized as David, they were standing over 2 duelists who were on their knee's. “Bu-but there must be some mistake, my deck CAN’T lose, I was the champ duelist in my town” said the beaten duelist. “Not anymore your not now hand over your rarest card for the master”, the left duelist in robes said.

“Oh look what we got here, another challenger, well lets see what you’ve got,” he says while he activates his duel disk. “Hey Michael, been looking all over for you” A voice calls, Yuki then sees a duelist running over, “Hey miky, what’s with ya your quieter than usual” He said.
“Heh, heh, pathetic mortal, I am not Michael, my name right now is not important, I am using these vessels to gather more cards, so that I may have the strongest deck, duel monsters has ever seen!” Michael said

“Who did this to you, snap out of it, its me Alex, don’t you remember, child hood friend.” Alex said.
David steps up and says, “I will reveal who I trually am if you both beat us in a double duel.”

“Alrighty then” Alex says, “It’s time to duel”
Yuki activates his duel disk

“I’ll go first” Michael said as he drew “I summon Insect Solder of the Sky in attack mode, and play 2 cards face down and end my turn”

Yuki draws, Yuki summoned, Yuki plays the magic card Dark Hole and summoned Battle Ox in attack mode and attack Michael and Davids Life Points.
He then played 1 card face down and ended his turn.
Yuki/Alex: 8000, Michael/David: 6300

“My Move,” David draws, “I summon Sorcerer of the Doomed, but that’s not all, I also activate the equip card Sword of Dark Destruction, To empower it enough strength to destroy Battle Ox, I then activate monster reborn to reborn Battle Ox, then I end my turn.”

“I’ll go now”, Alex draws. “I summon Muka Muka in attack mode and,” “Hold It right there, I activate my trap card Trap Hole, to destroy your beast” David said, “Well I then activate my face down, Ultimate Offering which for the cost of 500 Life points allows me to….” “Hold it right there, I activate my trap, Seven Tools Of The Bandit, Which allows me to destroy your trap for the cost of 1000 Life Points, A small price to pay considering the deadliness of that trap.” Michael countered. “Alrighty then I end my turn.”

Yuki/Alex: 7850, Michael/David: 5300

“My move, I play the magic card, Black Pendant, to power up Sorcerer of the Doomed even more, and I play 1 card face down and attack your Life Points directly.”
And I end my turn

Yuki/Alex: 5000, Michael/David: 5300

Yuki Draws, Yuki summoned 1 card in defence mode, and ended his turn.

“My move that means,” David drew, “I play the magic card, Monster Reborn, to reborn battle ox from the grave, now I summon Neo the Magic Swordsman in attack mode and attack your face down with Neo.” Yuki flipped up Mystical Elf. “Normally I would take damage but thanks to the magic of Rush Recklessly, I make my monster strong enough to take it down. Now I attack your Life Points with my Ox and Swords Man causing a total of 4050, if you can’t calculate it yourself lets just say it practically guaranteeing our victory in this duel. I now end my turn.”

Yuki/Alex: 950, Michael/David: 5300

“It’s my turn now, so I wouldn’t be thinking to far ahead,” Alex draws, “Especially the fact that I drew this card, Dark Hole! Now I summon Freed the Matchless General in attack mode (Editors Note, Freed the Matchless General in this series has been lowered down to 4 stars to cause chaos and fun, we regret any inconvinionce that might have caused to Yu Gi Oh fans, who are addicted to the game, where they can’t have any mistakes in it.) and I attack your Life Points directly” Hold on, I activate my trap, Enchanted Javelin, causing your attack to do no damage to me” said Michael.
“I end my turn if that is the case.”

“My move, I draw” “Hmm I have nothing that can take down that guy, I guess I can stall with this card and hope to cause something at least, but I shouldn’t expect much from this puny weak mortals deck.” David thought. “I play this card in defence mode and end my turn.”

Yuki drew a card, and then summoned Skull Red Bird in attack mode and attacked his face down card with Skull Red Bird, It was Wall Of Illusion, “Ha ha, who would have known such a pathetic deck could have a card even semi useable, now your gonna attack with Marurding captain and it will go back to your hand an- wait what are you doing.” Yuki activates Fissure and destroys Wall Of Illusion. “Ah well I can’t expect too much, except for the fact that was proberly one of the only half effective cards in this weaklings deck, oh well can try the second deck, that at least seems semi helpful, if it weren’t for the lack of monsters.”
Yuki ends his turn.

“It’s my turn, and I will win with this deck for sure.” Michael drew, “Hmm not the best draw I could draw.” Thought Michael, “I play this card face down and end my turn.”

“My turn, I draw” Alex drew “This should keep them/him, whatever on their toes” “I play the magic card Gravekeepers Servant. And I summon Rogue Doll in attack mode and attack your Life Points with both of them. I now end my turn.”

Yuki/Alex: 650, Michael/David: 1400

“My turn, I draw” David drew “I play 1 card face down and 1 card in defence mode and end my turn.”

Yuki drew, Yuki summoned Skull Red Bird in attack mode and attacked David’s Face down card, “Ha you lose even more Life Points now thanks to my Giant Solder Of Stone.” Yuki ends his turn.

Yuki/Alex: 200, Michael/David: 1400

“My move” Michael Draws “Useless, Useless, Useless, Why is this card even in his deck, oh well better off play it in defense mode,” Michael thought, “I play this card in defence mode and end my turn.”

“It’s my turn, I draw, I play 1 card in defence mode and I attack your face down with Skull Red Bird,” “Wait I activate my trap Waboku, which negates your attack on my Two Mouth Dark Ruler” Countered Michael “Damn, well then I play 1 card face down and end my turn.”

“My move now” David draws “I summon Man Eater Treasure Chest in attack mode and destroy your Skull Red Bird. Now I end my turn.”

Yuki draws and sacrifices Alex’s face down Royal Magical Library to summon Judge Man in attack mode and then attacked Man Eater Treasure Chest with it. He then ended his turn.

Yuki/Alex: 200, Michael/David: 800

“My Move” Michael Drew “Damn Magic Jammer, that is praticly the end of me I guess.” Michael thought “I play 1 card face down to end my turn.


“It’s my turn, I draw” Alex drew “I play 1 card in defence mode, and attack your Life Points with Judge Man, bringing them down to 0, We win.”

“Nooooooo this cannot be” Michael and David go on there knee’s. “Since we won you have to give us your rarest card.” Alex said “Very well you will get them, and you will get to challenge me, soon enough, as in now” They both said.

Alex and Yuki get the rarist card off each of the duelists, Yuki got Michaels Butterfly Mantis (A normal insect monster with 2600 attack and 2300 defence and 7 stars) and Alex got Davids Dark Magician.

Then Michael and David both ran off in opposite directions.
Just then a Figure in the dark appeared, It was Kyle
“So you want to challenge me eh? Fine lets duel then, Yuki I want to challenge just you, because I am impressed with your skills.”
“K-Kyle, but you’re the hoster of this torney, why.” Alex asked

“Merely for the sake of testing the minds of the duelists, and to get more cards.” Kyle said. “Now if you don’t mind we might as well start dueling.”

Yuki and Kyle activated there duel disks.

Not bad.

Descriptions.
Grammar.
Format.

These words sound familiar?

(11-11-2008 03:47 AM)Umbra Wrote: [ -> ]Descriptions.
Grammar.
Format.

These words sound familiar?

whats format?

and i put SOME description, i said they were wearing robes

(11-11-2008 05:43 AM)SOS Haruhi Wrote: [ -> ]

(11-11-2008 03:47 AM)Umbra Wrote: [ -> ]Descriptions.
Grammar.
Format.

These words sound familiar?

whats format?

and i put SOME description, i said they were wearing robes

Writing out ATK.
Writing out DEF.

You know, that kind of things that people might actually care about.

SOME != enough;

Episode 3

“I will go first.” Kyle drew “I summon Battle Ox in attack mode (ATK 1700) and play 1 card face down and end my turn, your move.”

Yuki drew, Yuki summoned Battle Ox in attack mode (ATK 1700) and attacked Kyles Battle Ox, Destroying them both, Yuki then played Monster Reborn, reborning Battle Ox in attack and then played Last Will to special summon Koumori Dragon in attack (ATK 1500) and then played two cards face down to end his turn.

“My move” Kyle drew, “I end my turn without doing anything” he said.

Yuki drew Yuki attacked his life points with Battle Ox and Koumori Dragon, then he sacrificed them to summon Butterfly Mantis (ATK 2600), with doing that he ended his turn.

Yuki: 8000 Kyle: 4800

“My move” Kyle drew and smiled “I drew the card I was waiting for all along, first though, I activate my trap, Ultimate Offering, paying 1500 life points to special summon Ryu-Kishin Powered (ATK 1600), Hitotsu-Me Giant (ATK 1200) and La Jinn (ATK 1800) in attack mode, then sacrifice all 3 for the mighty, unstoppable, Obelisk The Tormentor! (ATK 4000)” Everything begins to rumble, the ground around the field cracked and broke as the great beast descended from the earth. “Now my mighty beast, Squash his little bug Fist Of Fury!” Yuki looked up in fear as his Butterfly Mantis was crushed. “hahahahaha I end my turn.”
Yuki: 6600 Kyle: 3300

Yuki drew and activated the card fissure destroying Obelisk, and then ended his turn.

“Wh-what, h-how could you have destroyed my beast, ARG, no matter you won’t take down my blue eyes.” Kyle drew “Since all the monsters in my hand are gone I better off just end my turn” Kyle said stunned.

Yuki drew and ended his turn.

Kyle drew, I summon Dokuroyaiba in attack mode (ATK 1000) and attack your life points directly. And then end my turn.”

Yuki: 5600 Kyle: 3300

Yuki drew and played 1 card in defence mode and then ended his turn.

“I draw and play the magic card Change Of Heart to take control of your face down, now I sacrifice both monsters to summon, Hyozanryu in attack mode (ATK 2200) and attack your life points directly

Yuki: 3500 Kyle: 3300
Yuki drew and summoned one monster in defence mode and ended his turn.

“My move I draw, I summon Ryu-Kishin in attack mode (ATK 1000) and attack your face down with Hyozanryu” It was Skull Red Bird “then attack your Life Points with Ryu-Kishin, and that ends my turn”

Yuki 2500 Kyle: 3300

Yuki drew “I could be easily wiped out in just this turn, still this is better than nothing” Yuki thought and he played one monster in defence mode and ended his turn.

“My move” Kyle drew “I summon La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp in attack mode (ATK 1800) and attack your face down with it” It was Mystical Elf (DEF 2000) “GAH, no matter I attack it with Hyozanryu and then attack your Life Points with Ryu-Kishin.

Yuki: 1500 Kyle: 3300

Yuki drew and played one card face down and ended his turn.

“I wonder how long it will take him to survive?” Kyle chuckled to himself whist he drew “I attack your Life Points with all my monsters!” Yuki activates his trap Waboku “Bah cheap stalling strategies won’t save you forever,” Kyle says as he ends his turn.

Yuki drew and played the magic card Dark Hole, destroying all of Kyles monsters, he then ended his turn.

“Grr I draw, BAH I have nothing good to play, I end my turn.” Kyle said.

Yuki drew and summoned Mystic Puppeteer in attack mode (ATK 1000) and attacked Kyles Life Points directly

Yuki: 1500 Kyle: 2300

“My move, I draw and summon this monster in defence mode and end my turn” Kyle said.

Yuki drew and played 1 card face down and switched his Puppeteer into defence mode (DEF 1500) and ended his turn.

“It’s my turn, I draw” Kyle smiled “I drew a card that could save me, I summon Battle Ox in attack mode (ATK 1700)” Yuki increases his Life Points by 500 points and activates his trap, Trap Hole. “You always seem to get the right trap at the right time, don’t ya, doesn’t matter I will win either way.”

Yuki: 2000 Kyle: 2300

Yuki drew and switched his Puppeteer into attack mode (ATK 1000) and summoned Rogue Doll in attack mode (ATK 1600), he then increased his Life Points by 500 points and attacked Kyles face down with Rogue Doll. The face down was Spirit Ryu, and then attacked his Life Points with Mystic Puppeteer.

Yuki: 2500 Kyle: 1300

“My move” Kyle drew “This is what will win me the duel, I summon Kaiser Sea Horse in attack mode (ATK 1700)” Yuki increased his Life Points by 500 points “and destroy your Puppeteer and end my turn.” Kyle said

Yuki: 2300 Kyle: 1300

Yuki summoned one monster in defence mode and switched his Rogue Doll into defence mode and ended his turn.

“I am going to win soon, no doubt about that” Kyle grinned as he drew “I attack your Doll with my Sea Horse and end my turn.” Kyle said.

Yuki drew “This is a long duel, Kyle is stronger then I thought he would be, my monsters don’t stand much of a chance unless I play my cards right and win.” He thought to himself as he summoned a monster in defence mode.

“My move I draw, and I summon my Lord of D in attack mode (ATK 1200) and attack your face down with Kaiser Sea Horse and then your Life Points with Lord of D, with doing that I end my turn, your move.”

Yuki: 1100 Kyle: 1300

Yuki drew and played one card in defence mode to end his turn.

“You lose my friend, you lose” Kyle said as he drew a card, I attack your pathetic face down with Kaiser Sea Horse” Yuki flips up Wall of Illusion (DEF 1850) “damn it, that means my guy goes back to my hand, no biggie I guess, I end my turn.”

Yuki: 1100 Kyle: 1150

Yuki drew and summoned Dragon Zombie in attack mode (ATK 1600) and attacked Lord of D, and ended his turn.

Yuki: 1100 Kyle: 750

“My turn I draw, I summon Kaiser Sea Horse in attack mode (ATK 1700) and attack your pitiful dragon, and I end my turn from their.”

Yuki drew and summoned La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp (ATK 1800) and attacked Kaiser Sea Horse, he then ended his turn.

Yuki: 1100 Kyle: 650

“Great, my move” Kyle drew and sighed “nothing at all useful in my hand, I end my turn.”

Yuki drew and attacked Kyles Life Points with La Jinn and won.

“Hmm your better then I thought, already it’s early and you have 2 wins on your record, as for your prize for beating me, I present you the ultrament card, Obelisk The Tormentor!

Yuki takes the card and walks off into the night.

Watching Yuki was a person in all black, watching him “This duelist has great duel skills, I better warn my boss about him.” He muttered to himself as he jumped into the night.

Just began reading this fic. Your written dueling skills are superb

Episode 4

Yuki walked though the darkness, even know it was late at night he didn’t feel at all tired, so he walked along planning duel strategies to summon his new card easily, but then remembered his lack of cards and how he mostly beat Kyle by luck, if he didn’t drew what he did, he would have lost.

He walked for awhile longer when 2 people dressed in black jumped down from above.

“Our boss hired us to take you down and out of the island.” Said the first ninja
“So we will duel you with the same deck at the same time.” Said the second
“This will give us a advantage by being able to think with 2 people, get around the limited card thing and take longer to be decked out.” Said the first
“But this also comes with it’s disadvantages, as in you gaining 2 people on your duel disk beat thing.” Said the second.

“So lets duel!” they both said

Yuki and the ninja’s activated their duel disks.

“I will go first, I summon one monster in defence mode and play 2 cards face down to end my turn, your move.” Said the first ninja.

Yuki drew and summoned Great White in attack mode (ATK 1600) and attacked his face down, it was Wall of Illusion (DEF 1850) and Yuki played one card face down and ended his turn.

Yuki: 7750 Ninja’s: 8000

I’ll go now, I activate the trap Ultimate Offering and summon one monster in defense mode and summon two monsters in face down and sacrifice Wall of Illusion and one of my face downs to summon Ryu Ran in attack mode (ATK 2200), and then I play monster reborn to reborn Wall of Illusion and then Last Will to special summon Giant Solder of stone in defence mode (DEF 2000) and attack your Life Points Directly with Ryu Ran to end my turn.

Yuki: 5550 Ninja’s: 7000

Yuki drew and activated Fissure destroying Wall of Illusion and then summoned Great White in attack mode (ATK 1600) and attacked their first face down card. It was Spirit of the Harp (DEF 2000), Yuki activated the trap Reinforcements to increase Great Whites attack to 2100, “Not so fast I activate Castle Wall to protect my monster from yours (DEF 2500)” Yuki ended his turn

Yuki: 5100 Ninja’s: 7000

It’s my turn I summon 2 face down monsters and sacrifice my Spirit and 1 of my face downs to summon another Ryu Ran in attack mode (ATK 2200) I then attack your great white and then your Life points! I then end my turn.
Yuki: 2000 Ninja’s: 6000

Yuki drew “those ninja’s are toying with me, they could beat me at any time, might as well just play this face down to stall.” Yuki thought, Yuki played 1 card face down and ended his turn.

“It’s my move now, I draw and play one card in defence mode and attack your Life Points with both my monsters.” Yuki activated Waboku “cheap stalling tatics won’t save you forever!” said the ninja.

Yuki drew and smiled as he played Dark Hole, he then played one card in defence mode and ended his turn.

“Don’t get cocky over that lucky move, I summon a monster in defence and end my turn” said the ninja.

Yuki drew and summoned one monster in defence mode and ended his turn.

“It’s my turn now I draw and play one card face down to end my turn.”

Yuki draws and summons skull red bird in attack mode (ATK 1550) and attacks his life points “your not the only one who can stall, I activate Waboku to negate your attack” Yuki ended his turn.

“My move, I play the magic card, Dark Hole and then end my turn.”

Yuki drew and summoned The Stern Mystic in attack mode (ATK 1500) and attacked his Life Points directly and then he ended his turn.

Yuki: 2000 Ninja’s: 4500

“It’s my turn” the ninja drew “damn no cards I can play” he muttered to himself “I end my turn.”

Yuki drew and sacrificed his stern mystic to summon Swordstalker (ATK 2000), and then attacked the Ninja’s Life Points and ended his turn.

Yuki: 2000 Ninja’s: 2500

“My move I draw, I summon one monster in defence mode and end my turn.” Said the ninja.

Yuki drew and played Soul Exchange to sacrifice the ninja’s face down card to summon, Summon Skull (ATK 2500) Yuki ended his turn.

“I draw now, I play the magic card Fissure to destroy your Swordstalker and end my turn”

Yuki drew and attacked their Life Points and won.

“You have done well, we see” said the first ninja.
“You may take our rarist cards as agreed” said the second.
They both presented 2 Ryu Rans and then jumped into the night sky.
Yuki paused for a second and then made camp and slept.

great duel. Enjoyed this chapter very much. I wonder who's next in store for Yuki to duel.

I read chapter 1 and all I picked up was a little grammar issue. You're starting off good also.

Episode 5

When Yuki woke up he saw someone standing over him, he looked 8 years old, had short blonde hair and blue eyes.

“Hiiiiiiiiii, I only need 1 more win to get into the finals, soooooo I feel like dueling you.” He said with a big smile on his face.
Yuki just looked with a surprised look on his face, got up and activated his duel disk.
“allllllright lets duel, get your game on” he says as he activates his duel disk.

I’lllllllllllll go firsty, I summon my monster from the realm of fiends, Feral Imp (ATK 1300) and I empower it with energys from the abyss, using my Dark Energy magic card (1600) I play one card face down and noooowwww it’s the end of my turny.

Yuki drew and played the magic card Fissure on Feral Imp “Awwwwww, you meanie, you took down my Feral Imp!” Yuki just looks at him with a confused expression and then summons Skull Red Bird (ATK 1550) and attackeds his Life Points and ended his turn.

Yuki: 8000 Oliver: 6450

Oliver drew “Awwwww I don’t have much in my hand, I can still play this in defence mode and now I end my turn.”

Yuki drew and summoned Great White in attack mode (ATK 1600) and attacked his face down with Skull Red Bird, It was Sorcerer of the Doomed (DEF 1200) “Looks like my monster is gone now, but wait I have a trap card, I will strengthen it with a entire castle, Castle Wall. (DEF 1700)
Yuki activated his trap, Reinforcements (ATK 2050) “Awwwww your army crushed my castle.” And then attacked his Life Points with Great White “ow owie ow ow ow ow owyyyyyy, that hurt.”
Yuki ended his turn.

Yuki: 8000 Oliver: 4850

“I drawwww now, awwwww all I have to play is this monster in defence mode and end my turn.”

Yuki drew and played the magic card Soul Exchange and sacrificed Oliver’s face down monster to summon Judge Man in attack mode (ATK 2200) and he ended his turn.

“IIIIIIIII gooooo nooowwwww, I summon this monster in defence mode and end my turn” said Oliver.

Yuki drew and summoned Mysical Horseman in attack mode (ATK 1300) and attacked Olivers face down monster with Skull Red Bird. “Awwwww You meanie, I will proberly lose this duel because of you!” Oliver said, Yuki ignored him and attacked his Life Points directly with the rest of his monsters.

Yuki: 8000 Oliver: 700

Oliver drew “Awwwww I am going to lose this duel, I play this card in defence mode and end my turn.”

Yuki drew and sacrificed Mystic Horseman, Skull Red Bird, and Great White to summon, Obelisk The Tormentor.
As he emerged the ground split and dirt and stuff flying everywhere.
“Yo-You have a Egyptian god card?” Oliver stood their paralyzed in awe and fear.

“Well at least that shut him up” Yuki thought to himself and he attacked his face down with Judge Man and his Life Points with Obelisk.

Yuki: 8000 Oliver: 0

“You want my rareist card now right, okay dokay here ya go” Oliver hands Yuki Slifer The Sky Dragon, Yuki looks with shock on his face.

“What? You thought you were the only one with a god card, my grandfather handed me this down, he was a expert duelist, said it could help me, but now I present it toooooooooooooooo yoooouuuuuuuu.

Yuki takes it and walks off. “Well aren’t you going to say thank you at least?” Oliver said.

Yuki stops and says.
“Thanks."

excellent dueling. Clearly a testament to Yuki's skills as his opponents get crushed so quickly. You could have at least one who takes more than 2 or 3 chaps to defeat, but I still love this fic

(11-22-2008 12:24 AM)ragnarok1945 Wrote: [ -> ]excellent dueling. Clearly a testament to Yuki's skills as his opponents get crushed so quickly. You could have at least one who takes more than 2 or 3 chaps to defeat, but I still love this fic

My friend, I am saving that for the final duel

very well then. In that case should I simply expect a ton of opponents Yuki kicks the crap out of without breaking a sweat until then?