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Chapter One: Blaze (Click to View)
Chapter Two: Sworn to the Light (Click to View)
nice opening chapter
finally...

a decent start, but since i haven't followed the last few chapters of Volume 1, i don't know how this fits into the story...

you have some competition now with Kale (where is that guy anyways), Raviel Priest WYHE and Aelsthla-Mental, so you better come up with something really special this time around...

good luck...
Everyone needs a bit of competition. However, I'm the only one of them that has been trained by the very best.

This first chapter doesn't really fit with Legends, but it will be unraveled in due time, trust me.
Do u have a link to vol. 1?
I haven't read volume one, or the discontinued volume two... But I like where this seems to be going. So yeah, good job and good luck!
(11-08-2008 08:03 PM)YRPOtaku169 Wrote: [ -> ]Do u have a link to vol. 1?

A link to both vol. 1 and previous backstory Inheritance of the World added. (I suggest you start with Inheritance.)
Interesting. Hope to see how this ties in with Legends. Also, how come you never finished IotW?
(11-09-2008 05:17 PM)Phantom Roxas Wrote: [ -> ]Interesting. Hope to see how this ties in with Legends. Also, how come you never finished IotW?

The plans I had for IotW's future, going in depth with Jack's and Rick's adventure into the past (It can't really be spoiler anymore, I posted it god knows how long ago) and what happens at the corp. However, I think I summed it up pretty neatly in Legends. At least, you know what you need to know.

Also, the new chapter's up.
Well, there was actually quite the gap between Inheritance and Legends, particularly DM2. I might have to read it again, but the story is so long compared to this.

Anyway, the new chapter was interesting. Suzie made a smart move switching to Lightsworn.
The gap between the two was barely six months, story-time.

And I suggest you check up on your dates again.
The chapter was... Short, but quality over quantity hey?

The D-Body is an interesting device...

And yay, The first duel is about to begin!
Well, I notice there was 48 Year difference between this and Legends. I don't think a time difference between Inheritance and Legends was established, unless I missed that minor detail.

Do you have any intention of bringing back The Dark Doorway, even though not enough people posted?
(11-11-2008 11:59 AM)Phantom Roxas Wrote: [ -> ]Well, I notice there was 48 Year difference between this and Legends. I don't think a time difference between Inheritance and Legends was established, unless I missed that minor detail.

Well, I didn't say it explicitly, but through the dates I set IotW to roughly six months before the start of Legends. Around the same time as Abbi's incident, actually, but that's irrelevant.

(11-11-2008 11:59 AM)Phantom Roxas Wrote: [ -> ]Do you have any intention of bringing back The Dark Doorway, even though not enough people posted?
Define "bring back".

TDD was a particular storyline: That storyline will be ignored for now. Hour of Twilight will pick up the story from Legends, not Dark Doorway. So, the plot events I had in mind for TDD will have to wait. Maybe they'll be added to HoT later on: We'll see about that.

Aelsthla-Mental Wrote:The chapter was... Short, but quality over quantity hey?

Yeah, I'd like to keep them short for now. Hurries up the production rate a bit.
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