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Pokémon Onyx

Pokémon Onyx will take place in the Serlinn Region. In the Serlinn Region, certain Pokémon will be available from 1 – 386. Not all 386 Pokémon will be available, and they also won’t be in the correct order. The main hero will be me, but the sprite used will be Gary’s from FireRed/LeafGreen. Normally the hero will have a rival, but instead of becoming rivals, the hero and the heroine (Yes, it’s a girl) will become close friends and will have friendly battles on occasion.

Characters:
Kieran: [Image: 11c4ohu.png] - - Steph: [Image: 2z4a9uu.png] - - Prof. Lightspear: [Image: v6lstg.png] - - Daniel: [Image: xomoe9.png] - - Miora: [Image: 29zt1ra.png]

Pokédex: (Click to View)
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Chapter 1 <Fralyth Town> (Click to View)
Chapter 2 <The Journey Begins> (Click to View)
Chapter 3 <Twin Eggs> (Click to View)
Chapter 4 <Trouble?> (Click to View)
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x3 very good and interesting. By the recent PM I got you're hidden =D but that's ok. It's nice and long =D I'll check back another time.
(11-08-2008 06:38 PM)「Synthiea」 Wrote: [ -> ]x3 very good and interesting. By the recent PM I got you're hidden =D but that's ok. It's nice and long =D I'll check back another time.

Thanks, but what do you mean I'm hidden?
Pretty good, but is there going to be an evil organization. Team Rocket, for short? Any legends? Random occurances. I rate this a 8/10, since it was a great introduction. Although, Mudkip? Torchic would have been better. But it is not your fault. Wink
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Pretty good, but is there going to be an evil organization. Team Rocket, for short? Any legends? Random occurances. I rate this a 8/10, since it was a great introduction. Although, Mudkip? Torchic would have been better. But it is not your fault. Wink

Hehe. I know, but I love the fact that when Mudkip evolves into Marshtomp, it's unnaffected by Electric-Type moves. Smile But thanks anyway.

P.S. I'm not going to give out much information yet because we're not even at the second town, but there will be A LOT of random occurances, etc, and possibly heart-break. Razz
Well, heart-break is almost always guaranteed when the main character likes a girl within the first few minutes in arriving at a new place.

I like it. Can't wait for more. I probably would have picked Mudkip also.

8/10
(11-17-2008 05:35 PM)Aximil Wrote: [ -> ]Well, heart-break is almost always guaranteed when the main character likes a girl within the first few minutes in arriving at a new place.

I like it. Can't wait for more. I probably would have picked Mudkip also.

8/10

Smile Thanks. The second chapter should be up by tomorrow...
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Oh, just a heads up everyone - I'll be editing the first chapter too and making the whole thing look a bit nicer.
YAY! I'll be waiting.
(11-18-2008 12:28 AM)Aximil Wrote: [ -> ]YAY! I'll be waiting.

ATTENTION!

Chapter 2 is up!

I have also renamed the hero from Diableos to my real name and I've slightly edited the layout of the fan fic.
Awesome. This is one of the few good fan-fics. Most of the Poke'mon ones are bad. Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. By the way, would the eggs happen to be Eevees? Most eggs in these turn out to be.
This fan-fic is awesome. Really awesome. keep up the good work. ^_^
(11-18-2008 04:37 PM)Aximil Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome. This is one of the few good fan-fics. Most of the Poke'mon ones are bad. Anyways, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. By the way, would the eggs happen to be Eevees? Most eggs in these turn out to be.

Hehe. I don't want to ruin it by saying anything, but I'll only say that they find out the eggs are both yellow. Razz

(11-18-2008 04:39 PM)Ancient Gear Wrote: [ -> ]This fan-fic is awesome. Really awesome. keep up the good work. ^_^

Thanks. ^___^
(11-18-2008 04:45 PM)Diableos Auros Wrote: [ -> ]
(11-18-2008 04:37 PM)Aximil Wrote: [ -> ]By the way, would the eggs happen to be Eevees? Most eggs in these turn out to be.

Hehe. I don't want to ruin it by saying anything, but I'll only say that they find out the eggs are both yellow. Razz

Okay. Now I'm almost positive what the eggs will be. I'll stop guessing though.
(11-18-2008 04:52 PM)Aximil Wrote: [ -> ]
(11-18-2008 04:45 PM)Diableos Auros Wrote: [ -> ]
(11-18-2008 04:37 PM)Aximil Wrote: [ -> ]By the way, would the eggs happen to be Eevees? Most eggs in these turn out to be.

Hehe. I don't want to ruin it by saying anything, but I'll only say that they find out the eggs are both yellow. Razz

Okay. Now I'm almost positive what the eggs will be. I'll stop guessing though.

Heh, yeah, it's a tad obvious now. Lol.
999999999999999/9999999999999998 score
Awesome fan fic! <3 it! +rep for ya Very Happy
(11-23-2008 05:27 AM)kingofgames569 Wrote: [ -> ]999999999999999/9999999999999998 score

Thanks. ^____^

(11-23-2008 09:40 AM)BlackLusterSoldier76 Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome fan fic! <3 it! +rep for ya Very Happy

Thanks a bunch! Smile

I'll hopefully be able to finish Chapter 3 sometime soon.
BUMP!

Chapter 3 has been added! Be prepared for a long read! Very Happy
Ahh... done
Awesome again
10/10
+rep
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