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looks like you spent alot of time on this... i'll read it when i'm not feeling lazy and rate the first two chapters!

Bump.

Episode 3 Up.

Good plot. Keep it up!

Instead of:

Card Name (Link), do
It would make it much more readable. Good plot, and I can't wait to see more!

(11-15-2008 02:09 PM)KillerxKid Wrote: [ -> ]Instead of:

Card Name (Link), do

Code:

[url=Link]Card Name[/url]

It would make it much more readable. Good plot, and I can't wait to see more!

Sorry, but I don't want to start all over.

Episode 4 Up!

It's good ^_^
Although there could be some Character Development and some Suspense instead of 100% Cards
-Yoshi

A little of just talking about themselves happened in Episode 4. A lot more will happen later.

Episode 5 Up.

Episode 5 was pretty Good!
Keep it up ^_^
-Yoshi

(11-16-2008 01:11 PM)Lazer Yoshi Wrote: [ -> ]Episode 5 was pretty Good!
Keep it up ^_^
-Yoshi

Thanks Yoshi! I guess you're my new Fan.

Episode 6 is up, it seems short but it is 3 huge paragraphs then some little ones.