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Hi guys, here's my first attempt at a fanfic. A yugioh one, at least.
That said, I'm not very experienced in this field, and this is bound to have more than a couple of flaws, but bear with it if you can.

I will not, under any circumstances, feel pressured to put new chapters up, as that is entirely dependent on my schedule, and a lot of other things come before this. So if I do happen to have a couple of devoted readers, my apologies beforehand for any eventual enormous delays.

The story takes place in Domino City, however, it's a city pretty much like any other in the real world. Well, not really. I intentionally blended manga with reality here, giving characters anime looks, behavioural patterns and occasionally subtle references, but real world-like surroundings. They're not playing with duel disks, for one. At least, not yet. Very Happy

Here we go!

Chapter 1 - Song of Domino (Click to View)
Chapter 2 - "Ganbatte...Hino-san." (Click to View)
Chapter 3 - "Die." (Click to View)
Chapter 4 - "Try to humble me." (Click to View)
Chapter 5 - "Lesson in Humility" (Click to View)
Chapter 6 - "Improve, Rai..." (Click to View)
Chapter 7: "Wrong again, maggot." (Click to View)
Thanks. Smile

I'm using cards from my database, I made them all quite some time ago, and felt like using them instead of going for real cards all the time. There'll be actual cards being played every now and then (even as signature cards), but for the most part, I like creating cards as much as creating characters. Smile
Chapter 2

"Whoa! In a record-setting 4 minutes, Gen Kodashi defeats another opponent! Kodashi qualifies for the semifinals!"

The man with wild black hair got up slowly, his dark red eyes glowing with anticipation.

"Yudou Shinji... I'm coming for you next."


Chapter 2:


"Yudou-senpai!" called somebody from a distance. Lost in thought, he didn't hear it.
"Yudou-senpai!" screamed the little boy when he got close. "Why are you here? The semifinals will begin in less than an hour! Do you wanna lose by default? Yudou-senpai, are you even listening?!"
Yudou turned his attention to the boy. "Levin, stop screaming. I can hear you fine. I was trying to find a quiet place to eat and relax before my next match, and it was going fine until 2 minutes ago."
"But, Yudou-senpai! You just blasted another guy, why aren't you happy? You seemed happy during the duel, I saw the whole thing! It was awesome! But now you're all cranky and stuff! You taught me to always enjoy myself when dueling, that it was all about having fun!"
"Levin... I know, I'm sorry. You're right, I'm going against what I told you. I'm just tired, if you don't mind can you go back now? I'll meet you there, I just wanna rest for a bit." said Yudou, trying his best to smile.
"Hum... sure, Yudou-senpai." Levin was obviously not convinced, but they were friends, he'd get the message."Just make sure you're fully recovered when you start your next duel!" added the boy, as he started to head back to the duel site.

Yudou layed down on the ground, looking up, thinking about Rai's words. To be honest, he wanted to face Rai just as much, if there was something you could call the relationship between them, it'd have to be a rivalry. An unorthodox one, though; they never actually had a match. Rai always refused friendly duels, saying he didn't want to face Yudou unless it was a sanctioned duel. It was a sort of Kaiba complex: the desire to beat Yudou in front of everybody, to beat him where it counts. He understood Rai's ambition, perhaps he felt the same. Or maybe his own desire to beat his rival was stronger than Rai's - it didn't really matter where, all he wanted was to defeat him.
But now... he knew it was true. He knew Rai was right, he was playing worse than he ever did. He enjoyed dueling so much that sometimes he aimed for drawn-out confrontations, other times, such as his duel with Batto, he tried to get inside his opponent's heads, manipulate them like puppets. The endless possibilities of dueling were intoxicating to the point where he ended up nearly sacrificing victory... and in that condition, he would never be able to beat Rai Satake.

"Well... about time I get back."

His mind was totally away from his upcoming match. The semifinals wouldn't be a problem as long as he had a higher goal. The same two people always made it to the finals every year, and one of them had already fallen to Yudou in an earlier round; the other one was Rai. This was Yudou's first time at a Locals tournament, as he didn't particularly enjoy the spotlight. He was well known as one of the top duelists in the region, but never actually took part in official matches. This time, Levin had convinced him to sign up, and the thought of Rai accepting a duel in an official tournament helped.

He bumped into somebody.

"My apologies, I..."
"Yudou Shinji, are you not?..."
"Wh.. who are you?"

A tall, middle-aged man stood in front of him. The clearest skin he'd ever seen, combined with jet-black hair and short beard, made him look like a ghost.

"Come with me."
"I'll have to refuse. I'm late for something."
"That is not your choice to make." he said, swiftly delivering a blow to the side of Yudou's head, knocking him out.

---

He woke up inside what appeared to be an old, abandoned warehouse. if they were close to where the man struck him down, then he knew exactly where they were.

"My head is killing me... uh? What's this thing in my arm?... No way! It can't be..."

"Get up, boy." The ghost-man was standing in the dim light of the warehouse. He also had the same thing on his arm... "Get up so I can make you fall again. Let us duel."

"What? Are you insane?... You kidnapped me so we could have a duel?!"

"Indeed... but a duel unlike any other you ever had. A duel like the ones you always dreamed about. Remember when they all told you Yugi Mutou was a myth?" he asked with a slow, deep voice. "And remember how a part of you knew they were lying?..."
The man was smiling.

"What are you talking about? Who are you?"

"You can call me Hino. Now, let us begin. I will start."

"But... how? Where do you intend to..." Then he heard a sound. It came from the machine stuck to his left arm. The small screen on it flashed, indicating... "4000 LP".
"A... duel disk?!"

Yudou: 4000 LP
Hino: 4000 LP

"Yes, boy. They are real. But not available to the... general public; the ignorant fools, uneducated in the art of dueling, clueless of its history, oblivious of its potential... and of its dangers." he said, an ominous tone in his voice, a mix of delight and insanity.
"I draw... and I summon Firebrand Mystic in Attack Mode."
The monster did, as Yudou expected, materialize in a spectacular sight, dancing flames around the beast's body. Under any other circumstances, that would be a dream come true.
"I set a card... and it is your move."

Yudou: 4000 LP
Hino: 4000 LP

"I can't believe this... this is insane! Duel disks, kidnappers that duel you instead of hurting you... and I'm going to lose by default if I don't show up at the tourney site!"

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"It's ten past 2 already... Are you hiding from me, Shinji?!" muttered a visibly infuriated Kodashi. He was sitting at the table where he was supposed have his semifinals duel against Yudou. 5 more minutes and he would win by default.

"You want him badly... why is that?"

The voice came from a table nearby. Kodashi looked up to find Rai gathering his cards - he'd qualified for the finals already.
"None of your business, Satake..."
Rai smiled. The kind of smile that annoys pretty much everybody, his lips forming an arrogant curve. "You're right, it doesn't really matter to me.. since it seems I'll be facing you in the finals instead of Yudou. See you later." he said, as he got up and walked away.

As he wandered without a destination, Rai clenched his fists in anger. "Yudou... how could you just disappear? Are you too scared to face me?! I won't let you get away with this... I'll find you and drag you back if I must!"

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Yudou: 4000 LP
Hino: 4000 LP

"Damn it... Is a duel really the only way out of this whole thing?!".. He found himself smiling. "...So be it."
"My turn. Draw!"
He didn't know his opponent's monster's effect. But being of FIRE Attribute, it would be best to expect burn damage. And in that case, he had to dispose of it quickly.
"I summon Water Knight Nautilus in Attack Mode!" and in an instant, it was actually there, in front of him. Just like in the stories... "Now, Nautilus, attack Firebrand Mystic!"
As the undine lunged forward to attack, a wall of flames stopped erupted from the ground between the two monsters.

"My trap card... First Art - Firecall. By discarding 1 Spell Card and 1 FIRE monster from my deck to the Graveyard, your attack is negated and Nautilus loses 1000 attack points. Now, end your t... Hm?"

Yudou was smiling. In a minute, he was laughing. "I happen to be loving this. Rai can wait... I'm going to beat you first!" Hino could swear a shade of red crossed the young man's green eyes for the briefest of moments.
"I'm not stopping just yet. I activate Foolish Burial, and I send Fire Knight Nero from my Deck to my Graveyard. Now I set a card... and I end my turn."

Yudou: 4000 LP
Hino: 4000 LP

"Now boy... don't be so sure of yourself. Draw! Firebrand Mystic's effect activates... I lose 1000 Life Points and it gains 1000 attack points, making it 2400. And since your Nautilus is 1000 points down, making it 600... prepare for a painful blow. Literally..." he said, as the temperature somehow began to... rise?
"I begin by activating Dian Keto the Cure Master, regaining the Life Points that I lost, then Double Summon. Now I summon Crimson Berserker, which I now Tribute to bring out... Maos the Inferno."

"It just got hotter in here... what's going on?!"

"Now... Maos the Inferno, crush Nautilus." The wizard hurled a large fireball at Yudou's monster, and it was promplty consumed by the flames. Furthermore...
"Urgh... it burns! My arm..." muttered Yudou as sparks from the blast flew toward him and landed on his skin.

"Let's see now... Maos 2200 attack points crashed into your Nautilus, whose attack was lowered by 1000 points, making it 600... Adding to that, Maos's effect, which inflicts 200 damage when it destroyes a monster by battle... You lose 1800 Life Points."

"Think again... Trap Card, Defense Draw! I only lose 200 Life Points by Maos's effect, since this card nullifies this attacks' Battle Damage, and lets me draw 1 card."
"The pain was real... My skin feels burned! What on earth is going on?..."

"Heh, not bad, boy. However... each time Maos destroys a monster by battle from here on out, the effect damage it inflicts doubles each time... Will you handle the pain? Oh, why don't we find that out right now? Since Firebrand Mystic still hasn't attacked... But that is about to change. Attack him directly, my monster... Hellfire Storm!"
A tower of fire headed straight for him... and got him. The pain was excruciating, his body engulfed by the flames. When it was over, no visible marks were left, but Yudou was on the floor, writhing in pain.

"Hahaha... I set a card... turn end!"

Yudou: 1400 LP
Hino: 4000 LP

"This... can't be happening... the pain is real, but it's... impossible... Damn you. I'll kill you!"
Yudou got up slowly. His eyes weren't green anymore, but bright red.
"My turn. Draw."

"What... happened to him? He's not scared, and he seems recovered already... and what is this aura I'm feeling?!" thought Hino.

"Now... I remove the Fire Knight Nero and Water Knight Nautilus in my Graveyard from play, and I Special Summon Dragon Knight Paladrake. Now, I reveal my face-down card... Burial from a Different Dimension. Thus I return Nero and Nautilus to my Graveyard. Now, another Spell Card... Harmonious Destruction. By removing 1 WATER and 1 FIRE monster in my Graveyard from play, I can destroy 1 card on the field... I select Maos the Inferno and your face-down card."

A giant whirl of water and fire rose and spun towards Hino's monster.
"Nice try... I chain my Trap Card, Jar of Greed! It allows me to draw a card before my cards are destroyed! Hah!"
Soon thereafter, the whirl surrounded Maos and Jar of Greed, destroying them in a violent explosion. The building seemed to shake.

Yudou chuckled. "Such.. emotion. Nothing like you were acting before... Hino-san. You should experience fear more often. It makes you feel... warm on the inside... Dragon Knight Paladrake's effect. It destroys 1 non-LIGHT or face-down monster on the field... I select Firebrand Mystic."
The dragon's eyes glowed, as a sort of mandala appeared below Hino's last monster. Then, from that mandala rose a pillar of light, destroying Firebrand Mystic.
"Hino-san... You're wide open..."
Yudou had a wicked smile on his face, his eyes glowing brighter than before.
"I summon Blackland Knight to the field in Attack Mode. Now, Paladrake, Blackland Knight... Show him death's doors."
The two monsters attacked in a row, A beam of light followed by a vicious sword slash, that tossed the ghostly man to the floor. He screamed in pain, as his Life Points dropped to a mere 200.
"I set two cards. Turn end. Ganbatte... Hino-san."

Yudou: 1400 LP
Hino: 200 LP

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Cards used in this chapter:
- By Yudou:
- By Hino: