05-06-2009, 10:39 PM
05-08-2009, 09:00 PM
Chapter 21 is finished. Please read and comment.
05-08-2009, 09:07 PM
I'll expect Brron to lose quickly to Nick.
Plus I want to know how Nick's relationship with Rachel is developing, or if he's too blind to see there is one
Plus I want to know how Nick's relationship with Rachel is developing, or if he's too blind to see there is one
05-09-2009, 03:56 AM
Chapter 21 was awesome. Love the FTK.
Who wouldn't expect that?
Most, if not all heroes, are too oblivious to see a relationship. That's just how the Yu-Gi-Oh! heroes usually are.
(05-08-2009 09:07 PM)ragnarok1945 Wrote: [ -> ]I'll expect Brron to lose quickly to Nick.
Who wouldn't expect that?
(05-08-2009 09:07 PM)ragnarok1945 Wrote: [ -> ]Plus I want to know how Nick's relationship with Rachel is developing, or if he's too blind to see there is one
Most, if not all heroes, are too oblivious to see a relationship. That's just how the Yu-Gi-Oh! heroes usually are.
05-09-2009, 10:54 AM
Here's Chapter 22 everyone. Enjoy.
This... This can't be happening. The hero of this story was... or is he? "Next Chapter!" Everyone mourns over the loss of the person they admired so much. Well almost everyone. Then Haou starts wreaking havoc over the valley with his Darkwing fiends, so Brad challenges him to a Duel. Will Brad end Haou's reign of terror, or will he subcumb to the darkness as well? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!
Chapter 22 (Click to View)
Duel!
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Brron/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Brron: Turn 1
I draw. First I'll summon my Knight "Zure, Knight of Dark World"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/ATK/1800 DEF/1500) then I'll equip him with the spell created for me known as "Dark World Aura" This gives him and other "Dark World" monsters on my field 500 extra ATK for every monster with "Dark World" in their name in my Graveyard. Now I play "Graceful Charity", so I draw 3 cards (Brron: Hand: 6) and discard 2. (Brron: Hand: 4) Now I activate "Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World"(s)(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1300) effect, if it was discarded from my hand by a card effect, I can Special Summon it to my field, so come forth, "Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1300) Now I activate "Broww, Huntsman of Dark World"(s)(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1400 DEF/800) effect, if it was sent to the Graveyard by a card effect, I can draw 1 card. (Brron: Hand: 5) Now by discarding "Mawwve, Priest of Dark World"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/500) I can select 3 "Dark World" monsters from my Deck and send them to the Graveyard, but they're treated as being discarded from my hand. Now I activate the effects of 3 "Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World" monsters I sent to the Graveyard, so their Special Summoned to the field as well. A leader is nothing without his soldiers. Now the effect of "Dark World Aura" is activated, so all of my monsters gain a total of 1000 ATK. (Zure: ATK: 2800) (Beiige x4: ATK: 2600) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.
"So how do you intend to get out of this one, Cunningham?!" yelled Brron. "I have Darkness on my side and you have nothing!"
"You're wrong, Brron." said Nick. "I have my family and my friends behind me no matter what and that's why this Duel is over."
"What?!" yelled Brron.
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Brron/ 3 cards/ LP 8000
Nick: Turn 2
I draw. (Brron says: How do you expect to beat me in one move?!) Like this. I summon "Winged Kuriboh"(LV1/LIGHT/Fairy/Effect/ATK/300 DEF/200) Next, I activate the spell "Transcendent Wing", so I sacrifice "Winged Kuriboh" in order for it to become "Winged Kuriboh LV10"(LV10/LIGHT/Fairy/Effect/ATK/300 DEF/200) Now I activate his effect. By tributing him, I can destroy all monsters on your side of the field and you take damage equal to the combined ATK of all your monsters. Ready Kuriboh? (Kuriboh says: (purrs) Alright go! Celestial Light! (Brron says: NOOOOOOOOO!!!)
Nick: LP: 8000/ Winner
Brron: LP: 0/ Defeated
"Nooooooo!!" said Brron as he faded away.
Brron then turned into his card.
"You have defeated our King." said the first gatekeeper.
"And as a result..." said the second gatekeeper.
"You shall pass." said both gatekeepers.
"I would like to bring my friends along." said Nick.
"As you wish." said the gatekeepers.
Nick and the group headed for the door of the castle until...
"That is far enough." said a person.
"Who are you?"
"I am the king's mistress, the Supreme Queen." said the S.Q.
"The Supreme Queen?" asked Nick.
"And if you want to pass through here, then you must defeat me in a Duel." said the S.Q.
"Now what?" said Z. "That's Haou's mistress, meaning she could be stronger than us."
"I accept." said Nick.
"What?!" yelled everyone.
"If it means saving my family, then I'll do whatever it takes." said Nick.
"Then we are in agreement." said the S.Q. as she took out a card.
She took a blank white card from her pocket and the card rose to the air with a dark aura around it.
"What's that?" asked Nick.
"You'll find out soon enough." said the S.Q. "Are you ready?"
"Right." said Nick.
"Let's Duel!" shouted Nick and the S.Q.
Duel!
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
S.Q./ 5 cards/ LP 8000
S.Q.: Turn 1
I draw. I summon "Puppet Piece - Head"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/0 DEF/0) (Nick says: What good is that?) When "Puppet Piece - Head" is successfully summoned to the field, I can discard 3 monsters from my Deck with "Puppet Piece" in their name to my Graveyard, then my monster gains 1000 ATK for each "Puppet Piece" monster in my Graveyard, so that's a total of 3000. (1000 + 1000 + 1000 + 0 = 3000 ATK) (Nick says: A 3000 ATK monster on the first turn?!) It gets even better. I play the spell "Puppet Part", when this card is activated, if I control 1 "Puppet Piece" monster on my field, I can Special Summon 1 "Puppet Piece" monster from my hand, Deck, or Graveyard, so I Special Summon from my Graveyard "Puppet Piece - Chest"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) Now I play another "Puppet Part", so I can Special Summon "Puppet Piece - Right Arm"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) from my Graveyard. (Nick says: But you just decreased the ATK of your "Puppet Piece - Head".) (3000 - 1000 - 1000 = 1000 ATK) On the contrary. (Nick says: Huh?) I equip both my "Puppet Piece - Chest" and "Puppet Piece - Right Arm" to "Puppet Piece - Head". When a "Puppet Piece" monster is equipped to "Puppet Piece - Head", the equipped "Puppet Piece - Head" gains 1000 ATK and since there is 2, it gains 2000 ATK. (2000 + 1000 = 3000 ATK) (Nick says: Crap!) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
S.Q./ 2 cards/ LP 8000
Nick: Turn 2
I draw. (S.Q. counters: I activate my Continuous Trap "Ventriliquist's Mind".) What does that do? (S.Q. says: You'll find out soon enough.) I activate the spell "Double Summon", so I summon both "Chaos Spirit Searon"(LV3/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/800) and "Chaos Spirit Lava"(LV4/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1000) Now "Chaos Spirit Searon" and "Chaos Spirit Lava" use "Spirit Cross Fusion" to Fusion Summon "Chaos Spirit Inferno"(LV6/FIRE/Spirit/Fusion/Effect/ATK/2100 DEF/1500) Now I activate his effect, once per turn, I can select 1 Spell or Trap Card from my Deck and set it face-down on the field and while he's on the field, he gains 300 ATK & DEF for every Spell & Trap Card on the field and since there's 4, he gains 1200 ATK & DEF which is just enough to take out that puppet. (2100 + 1200 = 3300 ATK) Now "Chaos Spirit Inferno" destroy her "Puppet Piece - Head". (S.Q.: LP: 7700) Wait, how come it wasn't destroyed? (S.Q. counters: It's the effect of my "Ventriliquist Mind". When 1 "Puppet Piece - Head" I control is targeted as an attack target, I can destroy 1 "Puppet Piece" monster equipped to it to prevent it from being destroyed. Although, it lowers its ATK. (3000 - 1000 = 2000 ATK) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn. (S.Q. counters: Now thanks to "Ventriliquist's Mind"(s) effect, during the End Phase, I can Special Summon the "Puppet Piece" monster that was equipped to "Puppet Piece - Head" to the field and you take 800 points of damage, so I Special Summon "Puppet Piece - Right Arm"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) (Nick: LP 7200)
Nick/ 2 cards/ LP 7200
S.Q./ 2 cards/ LP 7700
S.Q.: Turn 3
I draw. I equip "Puppet Piece - Right Arm" to "Puppet Piece - Head", so now "Puppet Piece - Head"(s) ATK go back to 3000. (2000 + 1000 = 3000 ATK) Now I summon "Puppet Maker"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/500) Now I activate its effect, once per turn, select 1 "Puppet Piece" monster from my Deck and equip it 1 "Puppet Piece - Head" on my side of the field, so I select "Puppet Piece - Left Arm"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) and "Puppet Piece - Head"(s) ATK go up to 4000. (3000 + 1000 = 4000 ATK) (Nick thinks: Great, now what?) Next, I play the spell "Puppet Draw" when this card is activated, I can draw card from my Deck equal to the number of "Puppet Piece" cards I control, so I draw 4. (S.Q.: Hand: 6) Now I play the spell "Missing Piece" when this card is activated, I can discard 1 "Puppet Piece" monster from my hand to the Graveyard, so I discard "Puppet Piece - Left Leg"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) (S.Q.: Hand: 4) Now "Puppet Piece - Head"(s) ATK go all the way up to... (4000 + 1000 = 5000 ATK) (Nick says: 5000 ATK!!?) Next, I activate the spell "Trojan Puppet" when this card activates, it Special Summon 1 "Trojan Puppet Token"(LV4/EARTH/Machine/Token/ATK/0 DEF/0) to your side of the field, then I select 1 monster on the field. If the selected monsters ATK are higher than your "Trojan Puppet Token", then the "Trojan Puppet Token" is destroyed and you take damage equal to half of the selected monsters ATK, so I select "Puppet Piece - Head" and now your token is destroyed and you take 2500 points of damage. (Nick: AAAAAHHH!!/ LP 4700) Now everything is in place for the summoning. (Nick says: What?) I play the spell "Finishing Touches" when this card is activated, I can sacrifice "Puppet Piece - Head". (Nick says: What?! But that's your strongest monster!) That thing was just dead weight anyways. Those that were weak are still weak. Now with the effect of "Finishing Touches" I Special Summon "Mannequin Knight"(LV7/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2200) Now his effect activates, when this card is Special Summoned successfully, it destroys all cards on the field except itself. (Nick says: No! Inferno!!) And upon being summoned he gains 1000 ATK until the End Phase. (2500 + 1000 = 3500 ATK) Now my knight show your loyalty to your queen and attack him directly! (Nick: AAAAAAAAAGHHH!!!/ LP 1200) And when he deals damage, he can inflict another 1000 points to you. (Nick: LP 200)
Nick was in serious pain, but he managed to endure it, then he looked up at the card floating in the air.
"(gasps) What the...?" said Nick.
"So you finally noticed it have you?" asked the S.Q. "The card you see before you feeds on pain, anguish, sadness, anger, and the darkness of peoples hearts. Just like what I did to your family."
Nick was shocked in what he heard.
"Wha... What did you say?" said Nick.
"Would you like to see what hap... excuse me. I mean what's gonna happen right now?" asked the S.Q.
The Supreme Queen used her powers of darkness to show the images of Nick's family.
"Let's start with Tarik." said the S.Q. "The anguish in his heart in his heart."
"No!" yelled Nick.
"Nick, help!" yelled Tarik as he fades away. "I can't take much more of this! AAAAAHHH!!"
"TARIK!!" yelled Nick.
"Up next is Caleb." said the S.Q. "The anger in his heart."
"Why didn't you save us?!" yelled Caleb. "We needed you the most and you ditched us! AAAAAHHH!!" screamed Caleb as he faded away.
"CALEB!!!" yelled Nick.
"And last, but not least, Peter." said the S.Q. "He was an interesting one. There was some sadness in his heart, but there was a lot of darkness in his heart as well."
"No! Don't! I beg you, please!!" yelled Nick.
"Nick, you didn't come here to save me. Why?" said Peter as he was fading away. "Tell Dria and the others... I'm sorry!!!"
Then a huge amount of darkness from Peter was transferred to the white card.
"No... No... PETER!!!!!" screamed Nick with agony.
Nick then fell to his knees with him looking like he was nothing but a failure.
"Yes! With all that darkness, it will unleash the most powerful card that ever existed!" yelled the S.Q. "Come to me, "Immortal Polymerization"!!"
The white card then started to take its form, but alas it wasn't enough to unleash the card.
"No! It wasn't enough!" yelled the S.Q. "Then I guess it needs one more helping of darkness. So, how does it feel to have lost people you care about?"
Nick stood on his knees in silence. Bowing his head, mourning over the loss of his cousins.
"Oh well." said the S.Q.
Nick/ 2 cards/ LP 200
S.Q./ 2 cards/ LP 7700
S.Q.: Turn 3 (cont.)
I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.
"I'm waiting for an answer." said the S.Q.
"They may be gone, but..." said Nick angrily. "That doesn't mean I'm not out!" yelled Nick furiously.
Nick's eyes then turned red. A giant red ring in his eyes first, then a yellow ring inside the red ring of his eyes. Then a giant dark aura surrounded Nick's body, then he let out with a yell...
"IT'S PAYBACK TIME!!!" yelled Nick.
Nick/ 2 cards/ LP 200
S.Q./ 1 card/ LP 7700
Nick: Turn 4
I draw! I play the Continuous Spell "Spell Economics", which means I don't have to pay any LP to activate a Spell Card. Now I activate the spell "Level Draw", by paying 500 LP, I can select 1 monster on the field and draw cards from my Deck equal to half the level of the selected monster, but since "Spell Economics" is on the field, I don't have to pay any LP, so I select "Mannequin Knight". Since its level is 7, I can draw 3 cards. (Nick: Hand: 4) Now I summon "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) But don't worry, because I'm sacrificing him to Special Summon "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"(LV7/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2200) Next, I play another "Level Draw", so I choose "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" and draw 3 cards. (Nick: Hand: 4) Now I activate the spell "Spirit Burst" By paying 1000 LP, I can select 1 monster on my field and you take damage equal to double the ATK of the selected monster and since I don't have to pay any LP, I select "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"! Now feel the same pain that you made me feel! (S.Q.: AAAAAHHH!!/ LP 2700) Now I equip "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" with "Assault Armor", so he gains 300 ATK. (2500 + 300 = 2800 ATK) Now "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" crush the puppet to dust! And when "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" attacks he gains 500 ATK during damage! (2800 + 500 = 3300 ATK) (S.Q.: LP 1900) (S.Q. counters: When "Mannequin Knight" is destroyed, I can return all "Puppet Piece" monsters from my Graveyard to my Deck.) Now by getting rid of "Assault Armor", "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" can attack again! (S.Q. counters: I activate the Quick-Play Spell "Good as New!", if 1 "Mannequin Knight" I control was destroyed this turn, I can Special Summon it from my Graveyard and he gains an extra 500 ATK, so come back, "Mannequin Knight"(LV7/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/2500 + 500 = 3000 ATK/ DEF/2200) YOU THINK I CARE?!! Thanks to "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"(s) effect, he also gains 500 ATK! (2500 + 500 = 3000 ATK) (S.Q. thinks: A suicide attack?! No matter. Once I activate this card next turn, It'll all be ove...) I activate the Quick-Play Spell "Spirit Unleashed" when this card is activated, we can Special Summon monsters that were just destroyed and their ATK are doubled until the End Phase, so that means my "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" will knock down your "Mannequin Knight" over and over. Until then, I'll finally have my vengence upon you. Sure some of my family is gone, but watching you suffer makes me feel better. So what are you waiting for?! Summon your monster! (S.Q. says: Due to the effects of "Good as New!", I can't summon or activate any card this turn.) Then I guess this is GOODBYE! "ZEO"(2500 x 2 = 5000 ATK) Avenge my family! Destroy her with "Chaos Waves of Fury"!!
Nick: LP 200/ Winner
S.Q.: LP 0/ Defeated
"AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!" screamed the S.Q. "Nick." said the S.Q. with a familiar voice.
"(gasps) That voice. It can't be." said Nick as he ran to the S.Q.
Nick, along with Z and Yubel, ran over to the Supreme Queen. Nick removed her helmet and saw her face.
"(gasps) No. Not you." said Nick.
"Thanks for freeing me, Nick." said the person.
"No! Kris!" said Nick tearing up. (Kris is Nick's older sister. Kris is short for Kristen. She was also transported here the same as him, but she was controlled by the Dark one and became the Supreme Queen.)
Nick heart was full of regret, anger, sorrow, sadness, anguish, doubt, and most all hatred. He couldn't take it anymore.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Nick with agony, anguish, and regret.
Just then, Nick's scream somehow triggered a trap on the ground beneath them. A dark red circle encircled them, but at the last minute, Nick saved his sister and pushed her out of the circle.
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" screamed Nick with agony and pain.
"Nick! No!!!" screamed Kris.
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!" screamed Yubel.
"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!" screamed Z.
Then both Yubel and Z dispersed into bits of light
"AAAAAAHHH!!! Kris! Get everyone out of here!" screamed Nick.
"I'm not leaving you!" yelled Kris.
"You have to, before it's too LAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!" screamed Nick as he dispersed.
Then after that last sentence, Nick dispersed into particles of light and was sucked into the tower of Haou's castle.
"Nick?" said Rein.
"No way." said Cody.
"No. Not him." cried Rachel.
"Please not him." cried Alice.
"There's no way that happened." said Travis.
"This isn't happening. It can't be happening." said Zane.
"NICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!" cried out Kris.
Card of the Day: "Battle of Sleeping Spirits"
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Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Brron/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Brron: Turn 1
I draw. First I'll summon my Knight "Zure, Knight of Dark World"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/ATK/1800 DEF/1500) then I'll equip him with the spell created for me known as "Dark World Aura" This gives him and other "Dark World" monsters on my field 500 extra ATK for every monster with "Dark World" in their name in my Graveyard. Now I play "Graceful Charity", so I draw 3 cards (Brron: Hand: 6) and discard 2. (Brron: Hand: 4) Now I activate "Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World"(s)(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1300) effect, if it was discarded from my hand by a card effect, I can Special Summon it to my field, so come forth, "Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1300) Now I activate "Broww, Huntsman of Dark World"(s)(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1400 DEF/800) effect, if it was sent to the Graveyard by a card effect, I can draw 1 card. (Brron: Hand: 5) Now by discarding "Mawwve, Priest of Dark World"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/500) I can select 3 "Dark World" monsters from my Deck and send them to the Graveyard, but they're treated as being discarded from my hand. Now I activate the effects of 3 "Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World" monsters I sent to the Graveyard, so their Special Summoned to the field as well. A leader is nothing without his soldiers. Now the effect of "Dark World Aura" is activated, so all of my monsters gain a total of 1000 ATK. (Zure: ATK: 2800) (Beiige x4: ATK: 2600) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.
"So how do you intend to get out of this one, Cunningham?!" yelled Brron. "I have Darkness on my side and you have nothing!"
"You're wrong, Brron." said Nick. "I have my family and my friends behind me no matter what and that's why this Duel is over."
"What?!" yelled Brron.
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Brron/ 3 cards/ LP 8000
Nick: Turn 2
I draw. (Brron says: How do you expect to beat me in one move?!) Like this. I summon "Winged Kuriboh"(LV1/LIGHT/Fairy/Effect/ATK/300 DEF/200) Next, I activate the spell "Transcendent Wing", so I sacrifice "Winged Kuriboh" in order for it to become "Winged Kuriboh LV10"(LV10/LIGHT/Fairy/Effect/ATK/300 DEF/200) Now I activate his effect. By tributing him, I can destroy all monsters on your side of the field and you take damage equal to the combined ATK of all your monsters. Ready Kuriboh? (Kuriboh says: (purrs) Alright go! Celestial Light! (Brron says: NOOOOOOOOO!!!)
Nick: LP: 8000/ Winner
Brron: LP: 0/ Defeated
"Nooooooo!!" said Brron as he faded away.
Brron then turned into his card.
"You have defeated our King." said the first gatekeeper.
"And as a result..." said the second gatekeeper.
"You shall pass." said both gatekeepers.
"I would like to bring my friends along." said Nick.
"As you wish." said the gatekeepers.
Nick and the group headed for the door of the castle until...
"That is far enough." said a person.
"Who are you?"
"I am the king's mistress, the Supreme Queen." said the S.Q.
"The Supreme Queen?" asked Nick.
"And if you want to pass through here, then you must defeat me in a Duel." said the S.Q.
"Now what?" said Z. "That's Haou's mistress, meaning she could be stronger than us."
"I accept." said Nick.
"What?!" yelled everyone.
"If it means saving my family, then I'll do whatever it takes." said Nick.
"Then we are in agreement." said the S.Q. as she took out a card.
She took a blank white card from her pocket and the card rose to the air with a dark aura around it.
"What's that?" asked Nick.
"You'll find out soon enough." said the S.Q. "Are you ready?"
"Right." said Nick.
"Let's Duel!" shouted Nick and the S.Q.
Duel!
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
S.Q./ 5 cards/ LP 8000
S.Q.: Turn 1
I draw. I summon "Puppet Piece - Head"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/0 DEF/0) (Nick says: What good is that?) When "Puppet Piece - Head" is successfully summoned to the field, I can discard 3 monsters from my Deck with "Puppet Piece" in their name to my Graveyard, then my monster gains 1000 ATK for each "Puppet Piece" monster in my Graveyard, so that's a total of 3000. (1000 + 1000 + 1000 + 0 = 3000 ATK) (Nick says: A 3000 ATK monster on the first turn?!) It gets even better. I play the spell "Puppet Part", when this card is activated, if I control 1 "Puppet Piece" monster on my field, I can Special Summon 1 "Puppet Piece" monster from my hand, Deck, or Graveyard, so I Special Summon from my Graveyard "Puppet Piece - Chest"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) Now I play another "Puppet Part", so I can Special Summon "Puppet Piece - Right Arm"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) from my Graveyard. (Nick says: But you just decreased the ATK of your "Puppet Piece - Head".) (3000 - 1000 - 1000 = 1000 ATK) On the contrary. (Nick says: Huh?) I equip both my "Puppet Piece - Chest" and "Puppet Piece - Right Arm" to "Puppet Piece - Head". When a "Puppet Piece" monster is equipped to "Puppet Piece - Head", the equipped "Puppet Piece - Head" gains 1000 ATK and since there is 2, it gains 2000 ATK. (2000 + 1000 = 3000 ATK) (Nick says: Crap!) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
S.Q./ 2 cards/ LP 8000
Nick: Turn 2
I draw. (S.Q. counters: I activate my Continuous Trap "Ventriliquist's Mind".) What does that do? (S.Q. says: You'll find out soon enough.) I activate the spell "Double Summon", so I summon both "Chaos Spirit Searon"(LV3/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/800) and "Chaos Spirit Lava"(LV4/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1000) Now "Chaos Spirit Searon" and "Chaos Spirit Lava" use "Spirit Cross Fusion" to Fusion Summon "Chaos Spirit Inferno"(LV6/FIRE/Spirit/Fusion/Effect/ATK/2100 DEF/1500) Now I activate his effect, once per turn, I can select 1 Spell or Trap Card from my Deck and set it face-down on the field and while he's on the field, he gains 300 ATK & DEF for every Spell & Trap Card on the field and since there's 4, he gains 1200 ATK & DEF which is just enough to take out that puppet. (2100 + 1200 = 3300 ATK) Now "Chaos Spirit Inferno" destroy her "Puppet Piece - Head". (S.Q.: LP: 7700) Wait, how come it wasn't destroyed? (S.Q. counters: It's the effect of my "Ventriliquist Mind". When 1 "Puppet Piece - Head" I control is targeted as an attack target, I can destroy 1 "Puppet Piece" monster equipped to it to prevent it from being destroyed. Although, it lowers its ATK. (3000 - 1000 = 2000 ATK) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn. (S.Q. counters: Now thanks to "Ventriliquist's Mind"(s) effect, during the End Phase, I can Special Summon the "Puppet Piece" monster that was equipped to "Puppet Piece - Head" to the field and you take 800 points of damage, so I Special Summon "Puppet Piece - Right Arm"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) (Nick: LP 7200)
Nick/ 2 cards/ LP 7200
S.Q./ 2 cards/ LP 7700
S.Q.: Turn 3
I draw. I equip "Puppet Piece - Right Arm" to "Puppet Piece - Head", so now "Puppet Piece - Head"(s) ATK go back to 3000. (2000 + 1000 = 3000 ATK) Now I summon "Puppet Maker"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/500) Now I activate its effect, once per turn, select 1 "Puppet Piece" monster from my Deck and equip it 1 "Puppet Piece - Head" on my side of the field, so I select "Puppet Piece - Left Arm"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) and "Puppet Piece - Head"(s) ATK go up to 4000. (3000 + 1000 = 4000 ATK) (Nick thinks: Great, now what?) Next, I play the spell "Puppet Draw" when this card is activated, I can draw card from my Deck equal to the number of "Puppet Piece" cards I control, so I draw 4. (S.Q.: Hand: 6) Now I play the spell "Missing Piece" when this card is activated, I can discard 1 "Puppet Piece" monster from my hand to the Graveyard, so I discard "Puppet Piece - Left Leg"(LV1/DARK/Fiend/Union/ATK/0 DEF/0) (S.Q.: Hand: 4) Now "Puppet Piece - Head"(s) ATK go all the way up to... (4000 + 1000 = 5000 ATK) (Nick says: 5000 ATK!!?) Next, I activate the spell "Trojan Puppet" when this card activates, it Special Summon 1 "Trojan Puppet Token"(LV4/EARTH/Machine/Token/ATK/0 DEF/0) to your side of the field, then I select 1 monster on the field. If the selected monsters ATK are higher than your "Trojan Puppet Token", then the "Trojan Puppet Token" is destroyed and you take damage equal to half of the selected monsters ATK, so I select "Puppet Piece - Head" and now your token is destroyed and you take 2500 points of damage. (Nick: AAAAAHHH!!/ LP 4700) Now everything is in place for the summoning. (Nick says: What?) I play the spell "Finishing Touches" when this card is activated, I can sacrifice "Puppet Piece - Head". (Nick says: What?! But that's your strongest monster!) That thing was just dead weight anyways. Those that were weak are still weak. Now with the effect of "Finishing Touches" I Special Summon "Mannequin Knight"(LV7/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2200) Now his effect activates, when this card is Special Summoned successfully, it destroys all cards on the field except itself. (Nick says: No! Inferno!!) And upon being summoned he gains 1000 ATK until the End Phase. (2500 + 1000 = 3500 ATK) Now my knight show your loyalty to your queen and attack him directly! (Nick: AAAAAAAAAGHHH!!!/ LP 1200) And when he deals damage, he can inflict another 1000 points to you. (Nick: LP 200)
Nick was in serious pain, but he managed to endure it, then he looked up at the card floating in the air.
"(gasps) What the...?" said Nick.
"So you finally noticed it have you?" asked the S.Q. "The card you see before you feeds on pain, anguish, sadness, anger, and the darkness of peoples hearts. Just like what I did to your family."
Nick was shocked in what he heard.
"Wha... What did you say?" said Nick.
"Would you like to see what hap... excuse me. I mean what's gonna happen right now?" asked the S.Q.
The Supreme Queen used her powers of darkness to show the images of Nick's family.
"Let's start with Tarik." said the S.Q. "The anguish in his heart in his heart."
"No!" yelled Nick.
"Nick, help!" yelled Tarik as he fades away. "I can't take much more of this! AAAAAHHH!!"
"TARIK!!" yelled Nick.
"Up next is Caleb." said the S.Q. "The anger in his heart."
"Why didn't you save us?!" yelled Caleb. "We needed you the most and you ditched us! AAAAAHHH!!" screamed Caleb as he faded away.
"CALEB!!!" yelled Nick.
"And last, but not least, Peter." said the S.Q. "He was an interesting one. There was some sadness in his heart, but there was a lot of darkness in his heart as well."
"No! Don't! I beg you, please!!" yelled Nick.
"Nick, you didn't come here to save me. Why?" said Peter as he was fading away. "Tell Dria and the others... I'm sorry!!!"
Then a huge amount of darkness from Peter was transferred to the white card.
"No... No... PETER!!!!!" screamed Nick with agony.
Nick then fell to his knees with him looking like he was nothing but a failure.
"Yes! With all that darkness, it will unleash the most powerful card that ever existed!" yelled the S.Q. "Come to me, "Immortal Polymerization"!!"
The white card then started to take its form, but alas it wasn't enough to unleash the card.
"No! It wasn't enough!" yelled the S.Q. "Then I guess it needs one more helping of darkness. So, how does it feel to have lost people you care about?"
Nick stood on his knees in silence. Bowing his head, mourning over the loss of his cousins.
"Oh well." said the S.Q.
Nick/ 2 cards/ LP 200
S.Q./ 2 cards/ LP 7700
S.Q.: Turn 3 (cont.)
I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.
"I'm waiting for an answer." said the S.Q.
"They may be gone, but..." said Nick angrily. "That doesn't mean I'm not out!" yelled Nick furiously.
Nick's eyes then turned red. A giant red ring in his eyes first, then a yellow ring inside the red ring of his eyes. Then a giant dark aura surrounded Nick's body, then he let out with a yell...
"IT'S PAYBACK TIME!!!" yelled Nick.
Nick/ 2 cards/ LP 200
S.Q./ 1 card/ LP 7700
Nick: Turn 4
I draw! I play the Continuous Spell "Spell Economics", which means I don't have to pay any LP to activate a Spell Card. Now I activate the spell "Level Draw", by paying 500 LP, I can select 1 monster on the field and draw cards from my Deck equal to half the level of the selected monster, but since "Spell Economics" is on the field, I don't have to pay any LP, so I select "Mannequin Knight". Since its level is 7, I can draw 3 cards. (Nick: Hand: 4) Now I summon "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) But don't worry, because I'm sacrificing him to Special Summon "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"(LV7/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2200) Next, I play another "Level Draw", so I choose "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" and draw 3 cards. (Nick: Hand: 4) Now I activate the spell "Spirit Burst" By paying 1000 LP, I can select 1 monster on my field and you take damage equal to double the ATK of the selected monster and since I don't have to pay any LP, I select "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"! Now feel the same pain that you made me feel! (S.Q.: AAAAAHHH!!/ LP 2700) Now I equip "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" with "Assault Armor", so he gains 300 ATK. (2500 + 300 = 2800 ATK) Now "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" crush the puppet to dust! And when "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" attacks he gains 500 ATK during damage! (2800 + 500 = 3300 ATK) (S.Q.: LP 1900) (S.Q. counters: When "Mannequin Knight" is destroyed, I can return all "Puppet Piece" monsters from my Graveyard to my Deck.) Now by getting rid of "Assault Armor", "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" can attack again! (S.Q. counters: I activate the Quick-Play Spell "Good as New!", if 1 "Mannequin Knight" I control was destroyed this turn, I can Special Summon it from my Graveyard and he gains an extra 500 ATK, so come back, "Mannequin Knight"(LV7/DARK/Fiend/Effect/ATK/2500 + 500 = 3000 ATK/ DEF/2200) YOU THINK I CARE?!! Thanks to "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"(s) effect, he also gains 500 ATK! (2500 + 500 = 3000 ATK) (S.Q. thinks: A suicide attack?! No matter. Once I activate this card next turn, It'll all be ove...) I activate the Quick-Play Spell "Spirit Unleashed" when this card is activated, we can Special Summon monsters that were just destroyed and their ATK are doubled until the End Phase, so that means my "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" will knock down your "Mannequin Knight" over and over. Until then, I'll finally have my vengence upon you. Sure some of my family is gone, but watching you suffer makes me feel better. So what are you waiting for?! Summon your monster! (S.Q. says: Due to the effects of "Good as New!", I can't summon or activate any card this turn.) Then I guess this is GOODBYE! "ZEO"(2500 x 2 = 5000 ATK) Avenge my family! Destroy her with "Chaos Waves of Fury"!!
Nick: LP 200/ Winner
S.Q.: LP 0/ Defeated
"AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!" screamed the S.Q. "Nick." said the S.Q. with a familiar voice.
"(gasps) That voice. It can't be." said Nick as he ran to the S.Q.
Nick, along with Z and Yubel, ran over to the Supreme Queen. Nick removed her helmet and saw her face.
"(gasps) No. Not you." said Nick.
"Thanks for freeing me, Nick." said the person.
"No! Kris!" said Nick tearing up. (Kris is Nick's older sister. Kris is short for Kristen. She was also transported here the same as him, but she was controlled by the Dark one and became the Supreme Queen.)
Nick heart was full of regret, anger, sorrow, sadness, anguish, doubt, and most all hatred. He couldn't take it anymore.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Nick with agony, anguish, and regret.
Just then, Nick's scream somehow triggered a trap on the ground beneath them. A dark red circle encircled them, but at the last minute, Nick saved his sister and pushed her out of the circle.
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" screamed Nick with agony and pain.
"Nick! No!!!" screamed Kris.
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!" screamed Yubel.
"AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!" screamed Z.
Then both Yubel and Z dispersed into bits of light
"AAAAAAHHH!!! Kris! Get everyone out of here!" screamed Nick.
"I'm not leaving you!" yelled Kris.
"You have to, before it's too LAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!" screamed Nick as he dispersed.
Then after that last sentence, Nick dispersed into particles of light and was sucked into the tower of Haou's castle.
"Nick?" said Rein.
"No way." said Cody.
"No. Not him." cried Rachel.
"Please not him." cried Alice.
"There's no way that happened." said Travis.
"This isn't happening. It can't be happening." said Zane.
"NICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!" cried out Kris.
Card of the Day: "Battle of Sleeping Spirits"
05-09-2009, 11:45 AM
not even a single LP lost. That was TOO easy.
05-09-2009, 11:51 AM
Sorry. I just wanted to get to the Duel with the Supreme Queen.
05-09-2009, 11:53 AM
that's fine too, as long as the Supreme Queen duel is longer and harder
05-11-2009, 10:06 PM
Chapter 22 is updated. Please read and comment.
05-11-2009, 10:24 PM
Defeat a king just to pass a gate?
That's not something I've seen before........
That's not something I've seen before........
05-12-2009, 05:06 AM
That puppet deck is pretty strange. It's actually quite different from the Doll Parts.
05-12-2009, 09:37 AM
I still found it interesting nonetheless though
05-14-2009, 08:18 PM
Thanks for the support. Hey guys, I've just been thinking that you guys are the only ones reading my fic while other people look at other Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fics, but I keep thinking that they think this is not a Yugioh Fan Fic. I mean the IS misleading, but it's a Yugioh Fan Fic, so I was wondering can you guys help me get more readers?
05-14-2009, 08:53 PM
I could try if I have the spare time to squeeze out
05-17-2009, 08:43 PM
Chapter 22 is finished. Please read and comment.
05-17-2009, 09:11 PM
Oh I'm sure Nick is just fine.
In a few chaps you'll probably confirm that anyway
In a few chaps you'll probably confirm that anyway
05-18-2009, 04:32 AM
Kinda sounds like that duel between Jaden and Brron. Sounds like next Nick will get the power of the Immortal Polymerization and become either the Supreme King or an Ultimate Czar or something.
05-18-2009, 12:13 PM
I just hope he doesn't go psycho with power like all the rest.
05-18-2009, 09:10 PM
(05-18-2009 04:32 AM)Mystery guest Wrote: [ -> ]Kinda sounds like that duel between Jaden and Brron. Sounds like next Nick will get the power of the Immortal Polymerization and become either the Supreme King or an Ultimate Czar or something.
Well, Nick is okay, but he does get a little mad with power, so he becomes what you say an Ultimate Czar.
ragnarok1945 Wrote:I just hope he doesn't go psycho with power like all the rest.
No he doesn't go psycho. Not yet anyway.
05-18-2009, 11:07 PM
that's good. Then I look forward when he DOES go insane