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Full Version: Chaos Universe: The Unknown Past Ch. 1 - 56 (Chapter 47: The Lion, the witch, and the Duel!) has arrived
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Here's Chapter 23 & 24 everyone. Enjoy.

Chapter 23 (Click to View)
Chapter 24 (Click to View)

It appears the gang has now suffered 4 great losses. Nick, Z, Yubel, and now Brad. What will become of the group now? "Next Chapter!" Haou goes hunting for a certain all powerful dragon in another dimension, but in order to defeat the dragon he must defeat its five great warriors. Will the dragon come out alive, or will it also become a slave to Haou's reign? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!
they're all still morning over him?

He's not gone, he'll be just fine.
Chapter 23 is updated. Please read and comment.
interesting duel so far. I'm liking this chap
The duel is interesting. I thought he would actually use the Death Spirit cards.
that will probably come in the later chap
Chapter 23 is finished and a little of Chapter 24 is up. Please read and comment.
Too little of chap 24 is written for me to give a review for now.
I might not update Chapter 24 this week because of testing at my school, so until I can get a chance to, keep reading more people Fan Fics.
I'm too busy right now myself, so it's perfectly ok with me
Chapter 24 is updated. Please read and comment.
It's only a 2000 pt lead. Hopefully Nick will come to his senses soon enough
Chapter 24 is finished. Please read and comment.
well done of a duel, I'm sure Nick and Brad will be just fine in the next few chaps to come
Here's Chapter 25 everyone. Enjoy.

Chapter 25 (Click to View)
You heard them. This isn't just a rescue mission anymore. This is now an all-out war! "Next Chapter"! Rein and the others found the tunnels of where the resistance hide and Rein thought that maybe they might help them with getting Nick, Brad, Yubel, and Z back. The leader of the resistance did not trust them, so he challenged Rein to a Duel. Will Rein and the others get new allies, or will they have to go at it alone? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!
5 on 1 duel. This seems a little TOO unbalanced unless I see the duel take a different turn next chap
BTW, Ragnarok, have you found anymore people to look at this Fic?
sorry I've been WAY too busy with academics.

Finding a time to read your fic lately is hard enough as it is
I know how that feels. Trust me.
Good, then I hope you'll understand this is going to last at least another month and a half before the situation can even begin to improve.
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