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All right. If you can't, we can wait it out. Hopefully you can put one more chap up
I hope so too.
if you have to make the chap shorter, that's fine too if we can get it today
Chapter 4 is now complete, so everyone viewing this page, please comment.
Now it's time Nick had to live up to his promise to protect
Here's Chapter 5. Enjoy the story.

Chapter 5 (Click to View)

You heard him. He swore Pyro Fang will be avenged along with keeping his promise to protect the Duel Monster Realm. "Next Chapter"! Nick is treated as a hero in his School and town, but he still feels bad about what happened to Pyro Fang. Suddenly, at his house someone mysterious was waiting for him and to Duel him. Will Nick come out victorious, or mourn over the incident with Pyro Fang? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!
Now for Nick's life to be on the line. Well done of a chapter
Yes, definitely.
I'm glad though you didn't make him TOO gung-ho like the anime did for ygo in DM
Chapter 5 is now done. Please read and comment please.
Acknowledged, Haou Devil 12.

Anyways, it was a great chapter. Looks like Pyro Fang wasn't really evil at all, merely trying to save his own place.
Here's Chapter 6 everyone. Please read and comment.

Chapter 6 (Click to View)

Still keeping his promise to Pyro Fang and his promise to protect the Duel Monster Realm. But what did the Dark one mean by "Nick better be ready to pay for what he did to me."? Only time will tell. "Next Chapter"! Nick's School is closed for 2 days after the incident with Pyro Fang. On the same day he recieves a package with a Duel Disk inside with a Duel Monster card inside. The card's spirit came to life and now Nick is forced to Duel the Dark spirit in a shadow game. Will Nick reign supreme, or will the spirit send his soul into the shadows? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!
too short to comment. Can you extend the chap please?
Sorry, I was up late last night. I didn't have any time. I'm kind of an Insomniac meaning I have Insomnia almost like every night.
as long as you extend the next chapter that'll be just fine
Chapter 6 is updated. Please comment.
I can see he got on Travis's nerves. And a well done duel so far
Of course he got on Travis's nerves. Travis is one of the ones that picks on him.
hey, I never said it was a bad thing. And hopefully this'll pop his ego
I know. I'm just pointing out that Travis is one of the ones that picks on him.
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