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Just wait. In one of my future chapters he goes from bad to worse. And I don't mean School Bully worse. I mean Power-hungry maniac worse.
(01-19-2009 07:34 PM)Haou Devil 12 Wrote: [ -> ]Just wait. In one of my future chapters he goes from bad to worse. And I don't mean School Bully worse. I mean Power-hungry maniac worse.

Well that fits Zane just fine
Chapter 11 is finished. Please read and comment.
you know one of these duels between Nick and Zane is going to turn out VERY violently........
Here's Chapter 12 everybody. Enjoy.

Chapter 12 (Click to View)

Cody finally survived his first monster Duel against one of the Dark one's servants, but who is the person that has arrived in town to see Nick? "Next Chapter"! The person finds Nick and Nick discovers he's an old friend from the Duel Monster Realm, but he's human. Then they flashback on the day they first met and there was an attack when they first met, so they had to Duel to stop the menace. Will they come out victorius, or will the creature wreak havoc again? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!
interesting beginning of a duel. Can't wait to see how this turns out
Cool chapters. This fan-fic is looking pretty good. I just wonder how this duel will turn out.
Chapter 12 is finished. Please read and comment.
you mean chap 12. And at least Cody was smart enough to know that's the most he'll get out of Rachel and accepted it
Thanks for pointing that out.
my point with Cody still stands unless you intend to prove me wrong
No I mean when you said "You mean chap 12". I went back and changed it. I'm not saying anything about the thing you said about Cody.
Yeah I saw that part already. As for Cody I guess we'll just have to see
Here we are with Chapters 13 & 14 everyone. Enjoy.

Chapter 13 (Click to View)
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There ends a 2 part Duel of friends. "Next Chapter"! Nick and Rein Duel their hearts out in the next chapter, but a jealous Zane tries to stop and ruin their popularity and tries to win the heart of Rachel once again. Will Nick & Rein's Duel go on as planned, or will Zane finally put an end to their popularity? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!
there's Zane with his jealousy problem again. Typical
Interesting flashback so far. I wonder if Rein or that explosion has anything to do with The Dark One.
Rein may not, but I suspect the explosion does
(01-25-2009 08:17 AM)ragnarok1945 Wrote: [ -> ]Rein may not, but I suspect the explosion does

That's mainly what I was thinking.
well why did you suspect Rein initially?
I suspected Rein because he randomly appears out of nowhere conveniently after the Dark One says "Now I know where Nick lives." Plus, in the flashback, Nick might put Rein in mortal danger and leave scared, thus Rein later turning into the Dark One and having motive against Nick. I see this as a possibility, but not as much as the explosion being related to the Dark One.
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