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The Opening Curse - Archangel of destiny - 01-13-2009 03:41 PM

Hello everyone this is my first attempt at a fan-fic,so here is the prologue and the first chapter,every comment is appreciated,i hope that you will like this fan-fic


Chapter 1;The Mysterious Woman (Click to View)



RE: The Opening Curse - Kuro no Keiyakushu - 01-13-2009 03:44 PM

Nice, but put spaces next time.


RE: The Opening Curse - ragnarok1945 - 01-13-2009 04:25 PM

Good beginning, but can you double space next time to make reading easier?


RE: The Opening Curse - Soul Legacy - 01-14-2009 01:01 PM

Agree'd


RE: The Opening Curse - ragnarok1945 - 01-14-2009 02:00 PM

it would make reading it less disorienting