First FanFic - Please Comment

[WhinstonKnight]

(12-18-2008 06:42 PM)VWXYZ Wrote:  it was pretty cool, i'll admit, but be aware of Junk Warriors power, because it wuda been a better idea (just for canonicity and proper effect) that Josh summoned Copycat BEFORE Junk Warrior because Junk Warrior's effect only works when he's Synchro summoned, but still pretty cool.
I am gonna keep reading in the future.
Maybe you could check mine out I only have a prologue at the moment.......

Thank you for the great feedback. And thanks for the advice on Junk Warrior's effect, I must admit that was the one bit i was a bit unsure of. I'll keep it in mind for the future though.

I look forward to checking yours out.

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(12-18-2008 06:21 PM)***Rapscallion*** Wrote:  

(12-18-2008 05:41 AM)WhinstonKnight Wrote:  Thank you for your help Rapscallion, it worked a treat! And thank you for the kind words too.

no problem, I think this is the of best fan-fic I've read from someone that that was they're first post (or even a two-star), great job

(but it gets people intrested if they can make characters, my friend says he did it once and people were checking back everyday for the next chapter)

Wow thank you! I have read some of the other stories on here and although good some of them lacked a bit of character development. So i wanted to get people into the Duelists as well as the duels.

I hope the second chapter, for which i have just finished planning the duel, is equally as enjoyable!