First FanFic - Please Comment

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I didn;t notice this but my friend did, who told me, so i thought i'd point it out.
When Alex summoned Fairy Guardian whilst Athena was face-up on the field, Josh SHOULD have lost, because Athena deals 600 points of damage to the opponent when you summon a Fairy-type monster and seeing that Josh was on 100, well yeah.
Sounds harsh that, sorry, but it was my friend who noticed it, the first time he read it.
Chapter 3&4 of Machine Wars up btw