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First FanFic - Please Comment
01-12-2009, 05:25 AM
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RE: More wrong effects - sorry :P
(01-11-2009 05:22 PM)VWXYZ Wrote:  I didn;t notice this but my friend did, who told me, so i thought i'd point it out.
When Alex summoned Fairy Guardian whilst Athena was face-up on the field, Josh SHOULD have lost, because Athena deals 600 points of damage to the opponent when you summon a Fairy-type monster and seeing that Josh was on 100, well yeah.
Sounds harsh that, sorry, but it was my friend who noticed it, the first time he read it.
Chapter 3&4 of Machine Wars up btw Smile

lol no need to apologise, it was my mistake. Thank you for pointing it out though. Against some people's I shall continue with chapter 3 and hope to iron out any mistakes before posting.
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RE: First FanFic - Please Comment - VWXYZ - 12-18-2008, 06:42 PM
RE: First FanFic - Please Comment - VWXYZ - 12-26-2008, 12:56 PM
More wrong effects - sorry :P - VWXYZ - 01-11-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: More wrong effects - sorry :P - WhinstonKnight - 01-12-2009 05:25 AM

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