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@ngelMoney · (This post was last modified: 03-28-2009 09:20 AM by @ngelMoney.)

First of all, welcome one and all to the Insanity™! I am your host! Let me introduce the characters to you:

Torchic (Click to View)

Larvitar (Click to View)

Machop (Click to View)

Magikarp (Click to View)

Shiny Zangoose (Click to View)

Banette (Click to View)

Episode 1: The gathering! Very Happy

(Click to View)

Episode 2: Banette appears! Twisted Evil

(Click to View)

Of course, I will be adding more of this fan-fic later. I hope you enjoy it. Please no flaming. So, read/enjoy/comment! Very Happy

Silent Omega · 03-24-2009, 07:53 PM

*Jaw opens*......WOW....I LOLed at the Magikarp scene HAaha

@ngelMoney · 03-24-2009, 07:55 PM

Thanx! I'm glad you like it! Very Happy

Kuro no Keiyakushu · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2009 08:01 PM by Kuro no Keiyakushu.)

Phail.

This is the fan fic section, not a comic one. This should be moved to show case.

Black Panther · 03-24-2009, 07:57 PM

its cool, and very funny, keep it coming !!

Kain Highwind · 03-24-2009, 07:58 PM

ROFL

"I PWNED THIS GUY!"

"SHOOP THA WOOP"

"...."

Lol, May I requests a Character??

@ngelMoney · 03-24-2009, 08:00 PM

Sure, I take requests.

Kain Highwind · 03-24-2009, 08:04 PM

Banette!

No Seriousleh Though.

Silent Omega · 03-24-2009, 08:05 PM

you might wanna listen to Fenrir.......

LiAM · 03-24-2009, 08:22 PM

not necessarily a fanfic, however, the 'shoop da whoop' scene was amusing, but you could improve you standard of comic, making the boxes smaller/ sprites bigger, enhancing art, speech bubbles etc.

Xing · 03-24-2009, 09:16 PM

Try and find Platinum Sprites. I like them better. Lol, you did the Magikarp thing for me, right? RIGHT????

Supreme Gamesmaster · (This post was last modified: 03-25-2009 05:19 PM by Supreme Gamesmaster.)

Wrong section.

Waaaay too random, and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot.

If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort.

The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores.

With all due respect,
|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac
|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM

@ngelMoney · 03-25-2009, 09:10 PM

Ok, now how about the positives? Laughing

I'll see if I can add Banette, not a bad ides. He will be the villain Twisted Evil

and I'd be pleased if a mod could move this.

ιηsaηιτy ρrevaιʟs · 03-26-2009, 12:30 PM

(03-25-2009 05:18 PM)Supreme Gamesmaster Wrote: Wrong section.

Waaaay too random, and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot.

If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort.

The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores.

With all due respect,
|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac
|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM

I lol'd there. Hard.

Anyway, I was the first one to bring sprite comics to this forum (no, really. I think. Razz

) and I have to say yours is poor. Take a look at mine and try re-making this - I see potential, you've just done it wrong. D:

Go here, take a look at mine and try and do something like that. It'll look better. PM me for more info. ^-^

@ngelMoney · 03-26-2009, 04:41 PM

Oh. Cool. I came up with the idea as well, but it was already in use... Laughing

A poor comic? How?

Supreme Gamesmaster · (This post was last modified: 03-26-2009 05:34 PM by Supreme Gamesmaster.)

(03-26-2009 12:30 PM)Snitch Wrote:
(03-25-2009 05:18 PM)Supreme Gamesmaster Wrote: Wrong section.

Waaaay too random, and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot.

If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort.

The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores.

With all due respect,
|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac
|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM

I lol'd there. Hard.

Anyway, I was the first one to bring sprite comics to this forum (no, really. I think. )

We shall see.
EDIT: No, my title works.

I don't think you had even joined when PMDung aired.
EDIT: Yeah, I was here before you. Sorry.

@ngelMoney · 03-26-2009, 06:13 PM

Yea... a 4 star to a 6 star... you've been here longer xD

@ngelMoney · 03-27-2009, 06:37 PM

Bump

ιηsaηιτy ρrevaιʟs · 03-28-2009, 02:32 AM

(03-26-2009 05:32 PM)Supreme Gamesmaster Wrote:
(03-26-2009 12:30 PM)Snitch Wrote:
(03-25-2009 05:18 PM)Supreme Gamesmaster Wrote: Wrong section.

Waaaay too random, and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot.

If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort.

The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores.

With all due respect,
|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac
|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM

I lol'd there. Hard.

Anyway, I was the first one to bring sprite comics to this forum (no, really. I think. )
We shall see.
EDIT: No, my title works.

I don't think you had even joined when PMDung aired.
EDIT: Yeah, I was here before you. Sorry.

Fair enough...but you're still not the 'master'. You can't just name yourself that. Razz

(03-26-2009 06:13 PM)*ARCEUS* Wrote: Yea... a 4 star to a 6 star... you've been here longer xD

That doesn't mean he's better. A spammer could be a 6 star - does that make them good?

@ngelMoney · 03-28-2009, 07:50 AM

Yup.

Let's not get offtopic here, gentlemen. Laughing