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{S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
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04-23-2009, 09:18 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-25-2009 08:16 AM by ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ.)
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{S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
I made this card just now when I checked through Father Wolf's Custom Image Archive. I checked through Omni's new images and they were further than awesome, so I chose this awesome pic. So enough talk, lets get to reason. So basically this card is a support for FIRE Decks and is a powerful 1 too. So open your eyes wide and check it out:
Pyrographic Artist, Joan ![]() - Draw 1 card from your Deck, if it is a FIRE monster, discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. - Discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent. This effect can only be activated three times during the duel. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 removed from play FIRE monster to your hand. OK, you have checked out this awesome card and you liked it (I hope XD), but remember to rate = Rate, Hate, and Comment. |
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04-23-2009, 11:58 AM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
Creative name and the effect is awesome! 9/10, that's all I have to say about that!
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04-23-2009, 01:43 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
Thanks dude, you're AWESOME
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04-23-2009, 02:25 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
good effect, good name and good picture I'll give it an 9.3/10
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04-23-2009, 02:30 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-23-2009 02:30 PM by LostLetter227.)
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 2 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. This card gains DEF equal to the combined Level of the monsters removed from play x200 by this effect. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from hand to inflict 400 damage to your opponent. This effect can only be activated three times during the duel. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 removed from play FIRE monster to your hand. As long as this card remains in your Graveyard, you can remove it from play and pay 1000 Life Points to inflict damage to your opponent by 400 for every FIRE monster you control."
A lot of unneccesary effects in there, but at least its decent. 8.2/10 |
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04-23-2009, 02:32 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-23-2009 02:34 PM by ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ.)
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
:THANNNNNKKKKKKKKS!: = To both
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04-23-2009, 02:35 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
Your trying to hard -_-' seems like a bunch of random effects. First it increase its defense? Then does other crap about inflicting damage to your opponent. The last line is useless, most monster don't stay on the field for more then 1 turn, unless you can get out a bunch of random fire monster then the cost is not worth it.
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04-23-2009, 02:39 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
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04-23-2009, 02:47 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
Well first try to get rid of random parts that don't work.
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04-23-2009, 02:52 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
Ok, I removed the last line but how can I make the effect better?
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04-23-2009, 02:53 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan {S}
Well think of an function for the card and build from there.
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04-24-2009, 03:08 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
New effect added guys!
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04-24-2009, 03:30 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
Pretty good, I suppose. Like LostLetter, I think you went a little overboard with the effect(s), plural. One or two good ones would have sufficed.
Anyways, the image is pretty good (Daddy Wolf is still at it, I see), so no problems there. Just try and work a bit more on the synergy of the card with its name and effect - I fail to see how an 'artist' works with weird effects like that. If you don't mind me asking, why did you pick artist? She doesn't look like one to me... |
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04-24-2009, 04:01 PM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
Good effect, good creativity, overall nice job on the card.
9/10 |
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04-25-2009, 06:56 AM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
Thanks for your comments.
To Cyber-Ice - The name is like a phrase, no body complained except you, Artist means like creativity because she is full of fire, get what I mean, anyways thanks for the comment. |
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04-25-2009, 07:41 AM
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
Mmmm. Pretty Damn Good. 8/10
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04-25-2009, 09:49 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-25-2009 09:49 AM by ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ.)
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RE: {S} Pyrographic Artist, Joan (New Effect) {S}
Thanks, glad you liked it
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