JARD - plz read...

[cacnea]

Notice: my yugioh fic Yu-Gi-Oh! Go!, i might re-post it after the summer if i add more chapters...

JARD

[Intro]

JARD Ep 1: Geo-Convex Ability! (Click to View)

"Hey, Why are you arresting me, I haven't broken my order or anything else, LET ME GO!!!" a guy protested as he was taken away by the police, since he was getting no where with the yelling, he reminisced what had happened that day...
[intro]
As the bell rang aa 18 year old, 6ft-something, brunette guy walked into class, "Mr.Yokoy your 5 minutes late, come back here when I'm talking to you..." but Kayn just sat down in his seat, unlike most of the other pupil's clean cut uniforms, his tie was loosley undone, and one side of his blazer's collar was sticking up, his shirt hanging out of his trousers, and his black and blue trainers sticking out from the other pupil's smart black shoes. "That's it, you've turned up late 3 times already this week and you're never in the right uniform, now go to the heads office now!" his form tutor belowed, and with that he just walked off. This happened through the rest of the day, he turned up late to lessons and got told off. When school finished he just hung around, in the town center, which didn't technically break his order which stated he wasn't allowed to loiter in any recreational areas of interest to the public.
Soon the police car was being driven down a wierd tunnel into what looked like a military bunker. Then he was taken from the car and led to a side room where a man was waiting for him, " Welcome Kayn Yokoy, I am Chief Sergeant. De'Lahn, and we want to do some tests on you" CS.De'Lahn stated,
"Why?" Kayn Snappily shot back,
"The incident at your school 6 days ago..." CS.De'Lahn stated again, Kayn remembered he was on the top of the school's highest tower, that was about 5 stories high, he slipped and fell but somehow landed perfectly on both of his feet. "Ok then, what are these tests, like maths tests and stuff?" Kayn asked, which made CS.De'Lahn chuckle, the next thing Kayn knew he was strapped into a circular ring. The next thing Kayn new he was being spun around at great speeds, "It's reached 5 G's and still no effect on his mental or physical sate Sir" a woman typing away at a monitor screen told CS.De'Lahn. "Boost it to 10 G's" CS.De'Lahn ordered, and still all the stats read normal, "Boost it to 40 G's" he ordered in a voice that was more curious than commanding,
"But Sir we've never gone past 30 G's on any person!" the woman exclaimed, "That's an order!" he commanded, and so the woman boosted the machine to 40 G's. "I don't believe it, he is only just beginning to feel the stress, and it is very minimal..." the woman trailed off,
"Well, well looks like wev'e found are pilot" CS.De'Lahn happily said.
As Kayn got out of the ring CS.De'Lahn walked into the room, "Well done, you've passed" CS.De'Lahn told Kayn,
"Passed what?" Kayn asked,
"Your body has a Geo-Convex, which means you can handle immense G force, and other gravitational properties, so we have chosen you to pilot JARD-F" CS.De'Lahn explained,
"What's JARD-F?" Kayn asked,
"JARD-F is a humanoid fighting mecha, one of three mecha that combine to become JARD, the other two mecha are JARD-J1 and JARD-J2, which are jet mecha piloted by Eyam and Maye, twins who also have the Geo-Convex" CS.De'Lahn explained further. All of a sudden an alarm started ringing, "There here, Zayn now we'll see how you fare in a battle" CS.De'Lahn stated, "Now get in JARD-F!" CS.De'Lahn shouted. The next thing Kayn knew he was being pushed down a chute by some women who looked like maids, then he was in a cockpit of what he assumed was JARD-F, next CS.De'Lahn's face appeared on a monitor, "Kayn JARD-F is controlled via the remotes in front of you, you should pick up how to use them quite quickly, so good luck" CS.De'Lahn said. Then Kayn inside JARD-F, was launched out into the air, "How do I LAND!" Kayn yelled as he started to fall out of the air, without thinking his hands flew to both of the hand controlls either side of him, and he then pulled them back allowing him to land without any harm. JARD-F was about 3 stories high, human in shape, mainly greenish black in colour and it had two oversized shoulder plates. "Ok, so what am I doing exactly?" Kayn asked one of the women at the monitor via intercom, "A Bimeto has been seen entering the atmosphere, it is a Warrior-Class, you have to destroy it." the women replied,
"What is a Bimeto?" Kayn asked confused,
"It is a bilogical metallic being, like a mecha but alive" the women replied again, all of a sudden there was a massive crashing sound as, what Kayn geussed was, a Bimeto landed at the side of him. A black humanoid creature with purple lines running across it's body, all going to a circular point on its lengthy head. As it tried to strike Kayn with it's pointed claws, without thinking he brought up JARD-F's hands and blocked the strike easily. "So now lets see what else this thing can do" Kayn said with a smirk. Then JARD-F started attacking the Bimeto, throwing punch after punch hitting the Bimeto with each strike. Then Kayn heard what sounded like jet engines above him, when he looked up he saw JARD-J1 and JARD-J2, fly over him with mighty roar, "Front lasers ready, you ready sis?" Eyam asked via intercom,
"Yeah, I'm ready sis" Maye replied. Then both JARD-J1 and JARD-J2 started firing lasers at the Bimeto, there was hardly any difference between JARD-J1 and JARD-J2 they both looked like elongated jets with far back wings and two engines built into the tail of each of them.

JARD Ep 2: Second Encounter, JARD Sword! (Click to View)

JARD Ep 3: Sky Attack, 100! (Click to View)

JARD Ep 4: New Class, Golem Rise! (Click to View)

JARD Ep 5: New Class, Activate Jumbo! (Click to View)

I know this is not a fan fic, but it is an idea i've had for about 2 months now, and the story does get better...

Pronunctiations (Click to View)

Kayn Yokoy's name is pronounced Cain Yo-Koy (as in Yo-toy), CS.De'Lahn's name is pronounced De'Lane, Eyam's name is pronounced Eem and Maye's name is pronounced May-e...

If any one can translate these chapters into french or german please pm me...
RATE or HATE???

[Kale]

The way you have it laid out makes it so that the spoiler doesnt open. edit your post and move the /align tag after the beginning spoiler tag so that it can be read.

i quoted the post and was able to read it.

it is an interesting start, but i cant tell what type of fic it will be. YGO? Something else?

the part about the landing on his feet seems rushed, but it is interesting. we'll see if it is a good one. I bet with extra stuff you can get this one going with no problem.

~Kale.

[cacnea]

The idea for this i got from watching Gravion, so if you've seen that imagin it crossed with Gundam 00 and you've got JARD...
And i've fixed the problem...

[cacnea]

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