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This is my first card.
06-15-2009, 05:22 PM
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This is my first card.
It probrobly sucks, but I havn't been here long. Please tell me if I am doing something wrong.
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06-15-2009, 05:46 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
Here's the correct OCG (official card grammar)

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned, increase the DEF of this card by 500.

Simple. I really don't see any use for this card but it's decent for a first.

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06-15-2009, 06:24 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
take out "Successfully"

change "defence" to "DEF"
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It's not too bad. The effect just needs to be more original. Maybe add some more things to it.
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06-15-2009, 06:36 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
why boost its def by 500? I'd rather boost its atk, even if it's by a smaller amount

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06-15-2009, 06:40 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned, increase the DEF of this card by 500.
OCG fix
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06-15-2009, 07:06 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
(06-15-2009 06:40 PM)al9090 Wrote:  This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned, increase the DEF of this card by 500.
OCG fix
-_- you just copied my fix...
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06-15-2009, 07:36 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
You're right: it sucks.
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06-15-2009, 07:47 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
Sorry. But it WAS my first card.
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06-16-2009, 02:13 AM
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RE: This is my first card.
Exactly what they said.
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06-16-2009, 02:19 AM (This post was last modified: 06-16-2009 02:20 AM by Jᴇcht™.)
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RE: This is my first card.
(06-15-2009 06:40 PM)al9090 Wrote:  This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is successfully Summoned, increase the DEF of this card by 500.
OCG fix

Thought u werent allowed to post just OCG fixs??

Nice card for a beginner , (well I cant say that , I'm one aswell) 7 / 10.

Oh another thing , dont put ":" in card names. Instead of "Ninja Girl: Dana" just do "Ninja Girl Dana"
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06-17-2009, 05:27 AM
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RE: This is my first card.
OK card
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06-17-2009, 05:32 AM
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RE: This is my first card.
good card 7/10
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06-17-2009, 07:52 AM
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RE: This is my first card.
that was good for a beginner but u should change the def to lower


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06-17-2009, 07:56 AM
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RE: This is my first card.
Great card for a beginner 8/10
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11-21-2009, 12:47 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
i think its actually really good i mean better than mine but wow keep going
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11-21-2009, 01:19 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
I'm new to this. How do you post cards on here?
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11-21-2009, 01:20 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
Good for your FIRST card. Nice going.
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11-21-2009, 01:23 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
Need OCG fix really bad.
Effect is OVP'd.

However, you're new. 7/10
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11-21-2009, 02:01 PM
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11-21-2009, 02:05 PM
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RE: This is my first card.
Since you already started reading you cant stop. My name is Kalena. I have black hair, and green eyes. I am 13. I was abused my whole life. I have no ears or nose, because my parents chopped them of with a rusty fork. I am dead. I will show up in your room in 13 days and kill you by chopping off your body parts with a rusty fork unless you repost this on 5 pages. THIS IS NO JOKE!!!! If you do, something good will happen to you within 13 days. If you don't believe this, just wait and see...

and it is very hard too not summon it sucseefully. 6/10
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