Halo Tag - WIP

[SirBigC94]

Here's a new Halo Tag i'm working on. I need suggestions on what to do, since i'm not that great at making Tags. Here's what I have so far:



2 C4D's, 2 Gradient Maps, Render, and a Render that's been Ocean Rippled. Help Please.

[Khaine]

Its kindaf weird because the render dos,ent fit i just dont know why.

[SirBigC94]

Ok..

[dotCUBED]

I like the background so far, you need to work on the foreground composition and depth for now, but I like it so far =]

[Lemniscate]

- Too monotone
- Little depth
- Focal doesn't fit the rest of the composition
- No flow
- Poor choice of render

Overall, it's just a misdirected attempt at a sig. Try choosing a focal with a natural sense of movement and line to it. Give it some color to highlight important sections, and try to avoid making c4ds the focus of the background. You seem okay, but could be a lot better.

[SirBigC94]

Noted.