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[Koramore's Akatsuki Organization][7]*Sasori Added*
07-06-2009, 07:01 PM (This post was last modified: 07-11-2009 06:09 PM by koramore.)
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[Koramore's Akatsuki Organization][7]*Sasori Added*
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Hello people it's me Koramore again. I'm starting a set about the Akatsuki Organization from Naruto. I've also created Akatsuki as a new Arch-Type of a way to make them powerful in a fair way using a different summoning to get different effects. I'll update this whenever I have time. Thank you for reading please enjoy.- Koramore Smile
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07-06-2009, 07:02 PM
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Damn good, bro.
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07-06-2009, 07:04 PM
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Thanks Twisted
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07-06-2009, 07:04 PM
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super awsome dude 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000​00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000​00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000​000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
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07-06-2009, 07:07 PM
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wow thanks
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07-06-2009, 07:08 PM
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10/10
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07-06-2009, 07:09 PM
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welcome your real good at it,cant wait for more
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07-06-2009, 07:11 PM (This post was last modified: 07-06-2009 07:12 PM by ¤Sun Rise¤.)
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Really nice job dude,
the only thing that could be better are the bullets.
If you want to, PM me the card and I'll fix it Razz
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07-06-2009, 08:31 PM
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RE: [Koramore's Akatsuki Organization][1]
Traitor sounds more awesome and realistic than Betrayer. Just saying.

I don't see why you need to use Photoshop for the bullets. Making "Akatsuki" an archetype is better than making it a Sub-Type. The effect based on the Mangekyo Sharingan doesn't really match what Itachi's does in the series.

I would like to see Kakuzu next.
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07-06-2009, 08:33 PM
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add some more please
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07-06-2009, 08:41 PM
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[Bullets look strange on card-needed to say that]

Awesome card!-10/10-[I think this is my first 10/10]
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07-06-2009, 08:48 PM (This post was last modified: 07-06-2009 08:48 PM by koramore.)
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Thanks everyone I like my bullets actually and Roxas I made Akatsuki a sub-type because sub-types have specific effect or use and I'm not sure about the name I might consider it. I haven't watched the show for awhile and I forgot what mangekyou sharingan does.
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07-06-2009, 08:52 PM
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Great cards so far, but theres only 1 error:
When this card is Summoned place it into the Spell & Trap Card Zone as a face-up Continuous Spell Card. During your Battle Phase if your opponent activates an *xxxxxx*, you can negate the effect and Special Summon this card to 1 unoccupied Monster Card Zone. Depending on what card you negated, this card gains 1 of the following effects:
● Monster Card: Each time this card attacks your opponent, place 1 Chakra Counter on this card (max.3). You can remove 3 Chakra Counters from this card to activate 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand.
● Spell or Trap Card: Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to have your opponent skip his/her next Draw Phase.
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07-06-2009, 08:57 PM
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I do not see a specific use this hypothetical sub-type can generate. Archetypes also tend to have a specific use, and I believe the Akatsuki would be better as an archetype, such as the Lightsworn, Gladiator Beasts, and Blackwings.

Quote:With the Mangekyo Sharingan, Itachi is able to use at least three (and the most, as of yet) of the most powerful jutsu. The first is Tsukuyomi, an extremely powerful genjutsu which allows him to torture opponents for what seems like days in a matter of moments. The second technique is Amaterasu, a powerful ninjutsu, which creates virtually inextinguishable black flames at the user's focal point that continue to burn until the target is reduced to ash. The last of these techniques is Susanoo, which allows Itachi to summon a massive ethereal warrior, which then fights on behalf of Itachi and shields him from all attacks, and rendering Itachi essentially invincible.

All of these techniques use massive amounts of Itachi's chakra and, in addition to damaging his eyesight, put a great deal of strain in his body. During his battle with Sasuke, Itachi's eyes are even shown bleeding after using the Mangekyo. He also tells Sasuke that he wants to take his eyes so that he can restore his eyesight to its former glory. During the resulting battle, Zetsu notes that Itachi's "Left Mangekyo" possesses the Tsukuyomi, while the "Right Mangekyo" possesses the Amaterasu.
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07-06-2009, 09:02 PM
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(07-06-2009 08:52 PM)Yuri Lowell Wrote:  Great cards so far, but theres only 1 error:
When this card is Summoned place it into the Spell & Trap Card Zone as a face-up Continuous Spell Card. During your Battle Phase if your opponent activates an *xxxxxx*, you can negate the effect and Special Summon this card to 1 unoccupied Monster Card Zone. Depending on what card you negated, this card gains 1 of the following effects:
● Monster Card: Each time this card attacks your opponent, place 1 Chakra Counter on this card (max.3). You can remove 3 Chakra Counters from this card to activate 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand.
● Spell or Trap Card: Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to have your opponent skip his/her next Draw Phase.

Thanks I meant to put effect and Roxas thanks for the touch up on the Mangekyou but my Akatsuki Sub-type does have a specific use as you can see you can also fill up your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone with it to block out any Sets they might set down and then their 2nd summoning to get there different abilities but some Spell and Trap Cards I'm making are gonna involve their sub-type and plus I didn't want to put Akatsuki in their name because it would be too long
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07-06-2009, 09:03 PM
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wana be freinds
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07-06-2009, 09:04 PM
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Sure
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07-06-2009, 09:06 PM
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okey
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07-06-2009, 09:31 PM
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(07-06-2009 09:02 PM)koramore Wrote:  Thanks I meant to put effect and Roxas thanks for the touch up on the Mangekyou but my Akatsuki Sub-type does have a specific use as you can see you can also fill up your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone with it to block out any Sets they might set down and then their 2nd summoning to get there different abilities but some Spell and Trap Cards I'm making are gonna involve their sub-type and plus I didn't want to put Akatsuki in their name because it would be too long

Again, that can just be done as an archetype, since Crystal Beasts do something similar. The wording made it seem like you can only place it in your Spell & Trap Card Zone. Now that you mention second summoning, I just had an idea. "Akatsuki" was the archetype name, you could make Hidan a Gemini.

If you're worried about names, you could try this:

- Akatsuki - Itachi the Traitor
- Akatsuki - Kisame of the Hidden Mist
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07-06-2009, 09:46 PM
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RE: [Koramore's Akatsuki Organization][2]
Unique images, and very nice effects. I really like 'em. Keep them comming. There isn't really much else to say besides nice work, and keep it up, but a little tip I can give you is to not use the big ol' circles for the options. Instead use the regular - symbol.

If I'm wrong, someone please correct me, I'd love to be corrected over my mistake. But I just think the - symbol looks better for it on the card.
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