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Blamonchesix · 10-17-2009, 12:24 AM

Saikano & Kage Katana:
You don't need to. I was just asking. But if you're willing then you guys are the best XD.
Thanks for the comments. (^_^) I'll post Chapter 3 as soon as I finish it.

Weather Report · 10-17-2009, 02:33 PM

I have a FEW criticisms with the second chapter. One: I think that the reaction to the witch's powers where he went all fanboy was odd, as he wasn't afraid at all of anything happening. If it was more realistic, he'd be like "SH*T RUN!! HELP MEH!!" Sure, he's a paranormal dude, but it's not that normal. Also, why was that halo-thing there? It could have been anywhere, but it HAPPENED to go on in the same town as the kid stayed in. The way the lady talked about it, it seemed like the first one she'd ever seen, and I hate coincidences in stories, good or bad, without a cool explanation.

So, basically, it's nice, but try to make it more normal-ish, and more like "just another day on the job, until the idiot boy messed everything up!"

And also, do the demons have sentient leaders, or do they just do random stuff? Curious.

Fuzzie · (This post was last modified: 10-17-2009 08:29 PM by Fuzzie.)

Mini rant (Click to View)

EDIT: Pretty good. I really like it. The fighting effects are awesome. It's like a combination of Nora and Kingdom Hearts.

lol Weather Report. You are making criticisms on things that have not even been revealed yet. For all we know, the demons follow her around, and they use halo rings to teleport themselves.

My only criticism is that the demons do not have very great detail. They are one color, and mostly one shade, and are definately one shade of color.

Weather Report · 10-18-2009, 01:25 PM

(10-17-2009 08:14 PM)Fuzzie Wrote: lol Weather Report. You are making criticisms on things that have not even been revealed yet.

Does this not mean I'm just detailed?! Do others not make predictions on stories they read? You, sir... are a Fuzzie, and that is all you shall ever be!! Not really, I just felt like saying that last part.

VK-Duelist · 10-18-2009, 03:01 PM

This is quite good. I'm subscribing this.

Fuzzie · 10-18-2009, 03:12 PM

(10-18-2009 01:25 PM)Weather Report Wrote:
(10-17-2009 08:14 PM)Fuzzie Wrote: lol Weather Report. You are making criticisms on things that have not even been revealed yet.

Does this not mean I'm just detailed?! Do others not make predictions on stories they read? You, sir... are a Fuzzie, and that is all you shall ever be!! Not really, I just felt like saying that last part.

You are very detailed, just overdetailed sometimes, and instead of upright assuming something, you can try asking, that's all I meant.

There is nothing wrong with making predictions, but then you criticize your predictions as if they were actually in the manga. Sometimes. Just saying that you could wait and see or ask first before criticizing something you might not know to be true. Wink

Weather Report · 10-18-2009, 03:42 PM

I get'cha, and I know my style is too over-detailed, I just like over-analyzing things since it makes me feel like I've covered anything and such, but anyways, I still understand your point 100%.

Fuzzie · 10-18-2009, 03:53 PM

Ah, I see. I know what you mean, because I might be right about what's going to happen and I don't criticize, and then I was right, but I completely forget what my criticism was. XP

Weather Report · 10-18-2009, 04:22 PM

(10-18-2009 03:53 PM)Fuzzie Wrote: Ah, I see. I know what you mean, because I might be right about what's going to happen and I don't criticize, and then I was right, but I completely forget what my criticism was. XP

AW, YEAH! WE AGREE!!
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Fuzzie · 10-18-2009, 04:51 PM

lawl.

You like using pictures, don't you? XD

Weather Report · 10-18-2009, 05:59 PM

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It's recently become a hobby of mine...?

Dokuro-chan · 10-18-2009, 07:00 PM

omfg this is amasing

Blamonchesix · 10-18-2009, 09:48 PM

Thanks for the comments! (^_^)

To Weather Report and Fuzzie: Keep in mind that I'm not an pro in making Manga. XD

Fuzzie · 10-19-2009, 08:49 PM

(10-18-2009 09:48 PM)blamonchesix Wrote: Thanks for the comments! (^_^)

To Weather Report and Fuzzie: Keep in mind that I'm not an pro in making Manga yet. XD

Fix'd.

Blamonchesix · 10-21-2009, 06:40 AM

(10-19-2009 08:49 PM)Fuzzie Wrote:
(10-18-2009 09:48 PM)blamonchesix Wrote: Thanks for the comments! (^_^)

To Weather Report and Fuzzie: Keep in mind that I'm not an pro in making Manga yet. XD

Fix'd.

Aw. I'm flattered. XD

(Chapter 3 will probably be posted tomorrow.)

Blamonchesix · 10-22-2009, 12:29 AM

BUMP.

CHAPTER 3 is OUT! COMMENT AWAY!! XD

Fuzzie · 10-22-2009, 07:07 PM

Kind of predictable that he would be able to survive it.

I lol'd when he woke up, but WTF? WTH is she naked in his bed? Confused

Other than that, good chapter. Wink

Nikkiboy029 · 10-22-2009, 09:41 PM

dude this is an awesome manga!
i was all up in the manga, and was all like naru don't do it!! run aways!! the city is not worth it
then when he said yes i was like, no!!! how will he survive!, i was really surprised when he did survive, then i loled so hard when she was naked in his bed
Very Happy

Blamonchesix · (This post was last modified: 10-23-2009 12:14 AM by Blamonchesix.)

Fuzzie and Nikkiboy29 - Glad you like it. (^_^)

Note - I have 100% confidence that [Chapter 3 - Page 16] is the page you viewed the longest. XD

Nikkiboy029 · 10-23-2009, 01:15 AM

Lol maybe