"Bloodstained" An Original Story CHAPTER [4] IS OUT! (Update:10/29/09)

[Blamonchesix]

@shadow-zero - I'm not overly humble. I just know that there are a lot of people out there who are better than me. (^_^)

@Twin Seed - I might get banned if I do that. XD

[Kuroda Naoki]

The first 6 was pr0n? POSTPOSTPOST!

Last chapter was awesome ^^

[Blamonchesix]

(10-31-2009 05:15 PM)Kuroda Naoki Wrote:  The first 6 was pr0n? POSTPOSTPOST!

Last chapter was awesome ^^

Correction: The first 3 were ecchi. XD And no. I can't post them. I lost them somewhere. (T_T)

Thanks. (^_^)

[shadow-zero]

uh-huh. whatever you say blamo-san.

[Star Child]

Show meh teh first 3!

[Blamonchesix]

I can't promise that. (><)

And even if I found them, I wouldn't show it because its all too lovey-dovey and stuff. XP

[Fuzzie]

Great new chapter, glad you gave the demon more detail.

[Fog38]

We haven't meet yet, but I'm a member of ALD. Fuzzball told me about your manga. And I have a lot to say.
-Character design and art is by far the best part, they look professional. Amazing work. The sisters were wearing the same clothing in chapter 1 but you fixed that. Other then that they are all great.
-The comedy parts are great, I couldn't help but laugh. Loved them. Also the paneling is high quality, if you're trying to be professional you are really close.
-As for the story telling, chapter one is a little bland, I don't find my self caring for any of the characters. But as the story progresses the characters become slightly less bland. Still need alittle work on that though.
-Backgrounds need more work, but there is improvement in the later chapters.
-Inking is nonexistent.

I own a small online company that publishes English manga, if you're interested in getting payed doing what you love send me a im, other wise I love your work. And I hope you keep it up.

[Blamonchesix]

@Fuzzie:
- Well, the other demons were just small fry anyway. XD Thanks.

@Fog38:

- (LOL Fuzzball XD)
- Thanks
- Glad you like the comedy. Professional? Or are you just pulling my leg? (^_^)
- Yeah, Chapter 1 is kinda short. But I wanted it to end in a cliff hanger and it'd be too long if I combine it with Chapter 2.
- I suck in backgrounds.
- What's Inking?

You own a publishing company? Nice. Hmm... I'll think about it. (I'm not very confident with my work because my siblings often murder it with their critical reviews) (T_T). Btw, what's an "im"?

[Saikano]

(11-02-2009 09:15 PM)blamonchesix Wrote:  @Fuzzie:
- Well, the other demons were just small fry anyway. XD Thanks.

@Fog38:

- (LOL Fuzzball XD)
- Thanks
- Glad you like the comedy. Professional? Or are you just pulling my leg? (^_^)
- Yeah, Chapter 1 is kinda short. But I wanted it to end in a cliff hanger and it'd be too long if I combine it with Chapter 2.
- I suck in backgrounds.
- What's Inking?

You own a publishing company? Nice. Hmm... I'll think about it. (I'm not very confident with my work because my siblings often murder it with their critical reviews) (T_T). Btw, what's an "im"?

Instant Message?

[Fuzzie]

(11-02-2009 09:15 PM)blamonchesix Wrote:  @Fuzzie:
- Well, the other demons were just small fry anyway. XD Thanks.

@Fog38:

- (LOL Fuzzball XD)
- Thanks
- Glad you like the comedy. Professional? Or are you just pulling my leg? (^_^)
- Yeah, Chapter 1 is kinda short. But I wanted it to end in a cliff hanger and it'd be too long if I combine it with Chapter 2.
- I suck in backgrounds.
- What's Inking?

You own a publishing company? Nice. Hmm... I'll think about it. (I'm not very confident with my work because my siblings often murder it with their critical reviews) (T_T). Btw, what's an "im"?

Siblins will be siblings. My mom's sister used to steal her Barbie coloring books, scribble all the pictures out with a big fat "UGLY" over each one. My dad's brother used to flush my dad's Hot-Wheels down the toilet, but that's a completely different story of my family's.

[Blamonchesix]

@Saikano - Thanks. (^_^)

@Fuzzie - Whoa. Harsh.

@all - I'll give anyone a rep if they can say which chapters and pages has a Gundam in it. XD

[shadow-zero]

chapter 4, page 3. the gundam is on a poster or large piece of paper taped on the boys door. i think his name is kaoru?

by the way, i think inking has to do with shading, (which is actually a pencil technique) or more likely, has more to do with the fact that you don't 'color in' the different areas of your manga.

and they're suppposed to be critical. deal with it. listen to what they say, and if any of what they have to say is valid, try to incorporate it into your techniques. if not, then hit them with an invalid picture. for example...

see?

p.s. snake = epically awesome!

[Blamonchesix]

(11-03-2009 02:48 AM)shadow-zero Wrote:  chapter 4, page 3. the gundam is on a poster or large piece of paper taped on the boys door. i think his name is kaoru?

by the way, i think inking has to do with shading, (which is actually a pencil technique) or more likely, has more to do with the fact that you don't 'color in' the different areas of your manga.

and they're suppposed to be critical. deal with it. listen to what they say, and if any of what they have to say is valid, try to incorporate it into your techniques. if not, then hit them with an invalid picture. for example...

see?

p.s. snake = epically awesome!

You found the 2nd Gundam. XD
(Kaoru is a girl. The boy is Naru)

Oh, don't worry. I follow all the useful advice I can get. My only problem is that I don't actually have professional materials.

I use:
- HB pencil
- PILOT Ball point pen
- PILOT Permanent Marker
- Orion Ruler
- My head.
- I draw on the floor. I got no table (T_T)

(I like MGS too. )

[Saikano]

If you want, I can help you with the final inking, like I did in that image I gave you (but only the lineart. It can stay without color). The classes are about to end and maybe I'll have time to help you with that.

[shadow-zero]

wait, you use your head??? XD oh, and i thought i saw a gundam looking monster in chapter 2 page 14. perhaps that was the first one as to which you had alluded to before blamo-san?

[Blamonchesix]

@Saikano - Oh, I don't want to trouble you. And besides, I want to make it as traditional as possible so I'll probably just use a permanent marker.

@shadow-zero - Of course I use my head. My hands however aren't as active ( ^_^'). And no. That's not a Gundam. Whoever finds it gets a rep. XD

[shadow-zero]

meh. i gotta keep looking. XD ah well.

edit: the first gundam is on chapter 1 page 9. the second gundam is on chapter 4 page 3.

[Blamonchesix]

Nice. I think I unconsciously made a game/contest. XD
Anyway, Congratulations. (^_^)


Oh yeah, Chapter 5 will temporarily be on hold due to stress. (T_T)

[shadow-zero]

darn. ah well. anyway, that was cool. ^^