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Pain of Peace - Arc 1 Done! - Entry 9 up!
10-27-2009, 08:21 PM
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RE: Pain of Peace - Entry 6 Up!
I'mma following you. just keeping it secret.
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10-27-2009, 09:02 PM
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RE: Pain of Peace - Entry 6 Up!
Yay! I have a follower, I wonder what you think of this...
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10-27-2009, 09:19 PM
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RE: Pain of Peace - Entry 6 Up!
Nice. Love these Horror Diaries, & I LOVE DEATHS!
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10-28-2009, 10:02 PM
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RE: Pain of Peace - Entry 7 Up!
Entry 7 is up!
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10-31-2009, 07:51 AM
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RE: Pain of Peace - New Chapter! - Entry 8!
Entry 8 is up! Damn, no one is watching...
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10-31-2009, 09:16 AM
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RE: Pain of Peace - New Chapter! - Entry 8!
Liking the WWII-like Germany concept in Entry 8 when the main character is called a "FLITHY JEW!", Obviously his father may have a new concept of viewing after speaking with Aldof.
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10-31-2009, 10:25 AM (This post was last modified: 11-01-2009 06:05 PM by Arc.)
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RE: Pain of Peace - New Chapter! - Entry 8!
Happy birthday!

I meant that his father was yelling at Von Mises...

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Ludwig Erhard (Click to View)
Ludwig (Lionel) Von Mises (Click to View)
John Maynard Keynes (Click to View)
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11-01-2009, 06:05 PM
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RE: Pain of Peace - Arc 1 Done! - Entry 9 up!
Chapter 9 Up!
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11-01-2009, 06:31 PM
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RE: Pain of Peace - Arc 1 Done! - Entry 9 up!
It is a bit boring it sounds more like a history lesson then anything make it a bit more discriptive and edge in ways even using first person to describe how they look. e.g. I flicked my long brown hair out of my eyes gazing into the empty streets of Berlin and so on.
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11-02-2009, 07:10 PM
Post: #30
RE: Pain of Peace - Arc 1 Done! - Entry 9 up!
Thanks. I rewrote the first few chapters with more descriptions. Not gonna spend that much time on it though.
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