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Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Four is Up!!
10-17-2009, 05:43 AM (This post was last modified: 11-19-2009 12:07 AM by legendhiro.)
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Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Four is Up!!
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Introduction:
Join John and Karen, two Duelists and former members of the well known Duel Force as they attend the first three years of Duel Academy. Duel Monsters or its equivalents have been closely associated with the dangerous and often deadly Shadow Games for thousands of years, but not everyone knows this. Who would have realized that bringing an entire island's worth of Duelists together would bring the Shadow Games closer than ever? Our heroes and there new friends must quell evil forces, battle gangs, free possessed teachers, and fight against a dark Duelist possessing greater skill than any before him. All the while there lives and the lives of everyone around them hang in the balance! Can they prevail against such odds?

This story is the continuation of my first series Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Force (DF). You can read this without reading the other, but reading the other is recommended. They are not, however, the same series.

As many chapters as possible will be posted here:


Chapter One (Click to View)
Chapter Two (Click to View)
Chapter Three (Click to View)
Chapter Four (Click to View)
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10-18-2009, 04:43 AM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Intro Up!
chapter one is up.
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10-18-2009, 08:16 AM (This post was last modified: 10-18-2009 08:18 AM by Nexev.)
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter One is Up!!
Hiro, from what I see chapter one looks unfinished.

Maybe a glitch or something?

This is probbaly what you want:


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Even so the chapter is cut off mid sentence, I'm afrid this does not bode well for you.
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10-18-2009, 01:04 PM (This post was last modified: 10-18-2009 01:14 PM by legendhiro.)
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter One is Up!!
odd. i'll repost it and see what happens. i know it was working when i put it up.

fixed. must have been a glitch like you said

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Next Chapter Orientation

When a student makes a scene at orientation, it's up to the schools best professor to put him in his place.
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10-19-2009, 08:58 AM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter One is Up!!
Great chapter 1, well done. The guy with the fire deck was powerfull.
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10-19-2009, 05:54 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter One is Up!!
that he is. he's also very smart, but you'll see that he has trouble taking things seriously.
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10-24-2009, 01:50 AM (This post was last modified: 10-24-2009 01:52 AM by legendhiro.)
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter One is Up!!
chapter two is up.


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Next Chapter The First Days

John and Karen begin taking classes at the academy.
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10-24-2009, 07:28 AM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Two is Up!!
Chapter 2 was good. Grey Eyes got owned.
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10-24-2009, 11:10 AM
Post: #9
RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Two is Up!!
wow..o.O...
the best fic I read ever...Very Happy
your description is perfect..not too long not too short...
and the made up card are nice..few OCG errors on them...
I like your style of writing..Very Happy
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10-24-2009, 11:56 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Two is Up!!
thanks.
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10-25-2009, 03:57 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Two is Up!!
Why didn't John use Double Summon instead of Quick Summon? LP cost too high?
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10-25-2009, 09:51 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Two is Up!!
they do essentially the same thing, but quick summon can be used during the battle phase or the opponent's turn. it's just a better card to run in your deck overall.
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11-05-2009, 02:06 AM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Two is Up!!
bump. i'll be posting chapter three sometime in the next day or so.
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11-06-2009, 10:44 PM (This post was last modified: 11-07-2009 05:21 AM by legendhiro.)
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Two is Up!!
chapter three is up. it's mostly a plot building chapter, so don't expect a huge amount of excitement.


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Next Chapter Challenge of the Card Takers

John, Thomas and Karen confront the Card Takers
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11-07-2009, 07:48 AM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Three is Up!!
Great Chapter, The Ojamas are overlooked aren't they!
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11-07-2009, 11:24 AM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Three is Up!!
yeah, and i figured that since they are used years later by chazz, one of the schools strongest duelists, that they should get some face time. i might try to work in an e-hero deck somewhere too.
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11-07-2009, 06:41 PM
Post: #17
RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Three is Up!!
Chapter 3 reminded me of both the 'Duel Giant' episode and Harry Potter. Bit I think it'd be too soon to judge this book.
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11-07-2009, 07:39 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Three is Up!!
the school aspect will become less and less important to the plot as time goes by. and the card takers are different from the duel giant in a fundamental way; they're actually powerful.
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11-07-2009, 07:57 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Three is Up!!
So they are like Marik's goons the Rare Hunters?
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11-07-2009, 11:32 PM
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RE: Yu-Gi-Oh! DA, Book One; The Phantom Seal. Chapter Three is Up!!
that's what john thinks, but its not exactly true. you'll have to wait to find out for sure.
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