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RavenArchangel · (This post was last modified: 10-31-2009 03:25 PM by RavenArchangel.)

Basically, in here all I ask is, post some cards that you made, and if I like them..I will use them for my Yugioh Fanfic (which yes, I'm considering posting here) It hasn't officially started yet obviously, but I've got a lot planned for it ahead of time, but it has room to expand and grow in different directions.

The setting of the story is simple.
There are alot of secondary Main characters here and there, but 4 very central Main characters, whose decks I already have planned out.
One is the most main character, who is not yet named. He uses a Blue Eyes+Red Eyes based Deck. Then there's his freind/rival, a user of a Wind/Crystal Beast based Deck. Then there's the former Champion that my main character beat in the first arc, he's a Archfiend Deck user. Then there's a Space Dragon user.

All four are sent to a special competition on a Duel Island. These decks will be for the second arc. Which starts as such: The Entrance Duels are first. Basically, everyone at the island is either one of the Finalists of a Yugioh Tournament somwhere in the world, or the one freind they are allowed to invite. Everyone at the Island has 1 entrance duel. The losers of the duels go home. The winners stay. The Winners are then given All new-rare cards by Pegasus, who is a sponsor of the tournament. (The Made up Decks that are made for the story, and the cards I request of you guys. Some of your made up cards don't have to be these rare cards he gives us, but I'm trying to limit those as much as possible.) This still leaves a large number of people on the island for the competition. I haven't decided what all happens in the second arc, just that in the third Arc, the Dragon God Cards are revealed and the main Villans of the story as well, some of which are people who didn't appear to be evil in the second arc.

That's the jist of story so far, I know, a bit Cliche, but if it ends up doing well, I may or may not make more. Yugioh Fanfics are a crap ton of work compared to the SCI-FI/Fantasy Actions Stories I usually write lol (This is my first time writing one, and so far the only duel I've written out is the first one in the story and its still in the rough stages lol)

There you go, post away if you are interested. I'll try to answer questions you have best I can, so long as they aren't questions being asked just to torment/patronize me or something of course =p
EDIT: To make things more clear, yes, I'm requesting cards to use for random opponents that my characters will fight in the story. Doesn't have to be an entire deck, but must be at least 5 cards you made up. I can always just mix those cards with real Yugioh Cards, so long as you make it clear what they would go well with.
Anywho, here's the decks of three of the main characters:
Main Characters Deck (So far):

Spoiler (Click to View)

His Best Freinds Deck (Unfinished, still in rough stages):

Spoiler (Click to View)

Main Character's Rival's Deck (Unfinished):

Spoiler (Click to View)

Stoopid1 · (This post was last modified: 10-31-2009 06:34 AM by Stoopid1.)

So basically, you are looking for entire decks that the hero's opponents will be using? Not sure how serious they should be, but as far as an entire deck goes, this is all I got. I guess you could just say that some fat kid is using these cards.

cards (Click to View)

RavenArchangel · (This post was last modified: 10-31-2009 03:00 PM by RavenArchangel.)

(10-31-2009 06:18 AM)Stoopid1 Wrote: So basically, you are looking for entire decks that the hero's opponents will be using? Not sure how serious they should be, but as far as an entire deck goes, this is all I got. I guess you could just say that some fat kid is using these cards.

cards (Click to View)
In addition to my cards, the deck requires the following real-life yugioh cards: Hungry Burger, Hamburger Recipe. Great Angus and possibly UFO Turtle would be there too, with other good cards thrown in like Mirror Force, Heavy Storm etc... etc...

The Burger King (Click to View)
The Burger Queen (Click to View)
Angus the Short Order Cook (Click to View)

Not-so-Great Angus (Click to View)
Help Wanted (Click to View)
Corporate Downsizing (Click to View)
Supersizer (Click to View)
Have it Your Way! (Click to View)

I suppose those cards can be in it possibly. Might or might not make slight alterations, but the basic jist of the cards will be the same if they are placed in it. Try to keep humorous cards as suggestions to a minimum as most of the new cards in this will be srs business.

Stoopid1 · (This post was last modified: 10-31-2009 07:25 PM by Stoopid1.)

Ya, you're right. Card games are serious business.
- Yugioh the abridged series, episode 14.

RavenArchangel · 11-01-2009, 01:09 AM

haha good reference...so..anyone else got suggestions for cards to put in?..er..well..you know what I mean lol

TheCreator9464 · 11-01-2009, 01:33 AM

Well I don't have any cards per se but I do have a sub-type you might want to introduce as those rare cards.

RavenArchangel · 11-01-2009, 03:15 AM

uhm Okay..well shoot..I'm listening

TheCreator9464 · 11-01-2009, 10:33 AM

I've been working on a sub-type I call Reborn. These cards begin the duel in your Graveyard and can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. They can have any effect you want them to, but they must be Special Summoned from the graveyard.

RavenArchangel · 11-01-2009, 02:35 PM

(11-01-2009 10:33 AM)TheCreator9464 Wrote: I've been working on a sub-type I call Reborn. These cards begin the duel in your Graveyard and can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. They can have any effect you want them to, but they must be Special Summoned from the graveyard.

Interesting..well its a neat idea..hmm..care to make a few for me here? I figure such things should be unique cards lol

TheCreator9464 · 11-01-2009, 03:11 PM

Sure give me some time, I'll get some for you.

RavenArchangel · 11-02-2009, 02:11 PM

I may be making some changes or a new version to the Main Characters, deck. I realized, I'm not very good with an almost ALL Dragon Deck. I feel I might be more of the Warrior type, but with Dragons as my trump cards. So I'm going to give that a try with my IRL deck and then see if I might use that in some way for my main characters deck...

Nicky-whyte · 11-02-2009, 02:19 PM

This can be used in a DARK counter part deck that rely on DARK mons being used in the grave and the dark armed dragon removing mons in the graveyard from play. I consider this to be the Ace of the deck, most likely can be used by the opponent.
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Increase the ATK of this monster by 600 for each DARK monster removed from play. This monster cannot be destroyed by card effects while you control another DARK monster the field. Once per turn, you can special summon 1 DARK monster that is removed from play. During your end phase remove play this monster and all other monsters that were special summoned by this monsters effect. During your end phase remove play all cards in your hand. Skip your draw phase to special summon this monster while it is removed from play.

This is for an Earth deck that deals damage by forcing your opponent to attack high defence mons.
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Your opponent must summon their monsters in attack as long as this monster is face up on the field. When this monster is summoned or changed to attack switch it to defense. During your opponent's turn they must select one monster on their side of the field and attack this monster. As long as you have one other EARTH monster on your side of the field this monster cannot be destroyed by card effects. During your opponent's end phase take damage equal to this monsters DEF points. Skip your draw phase to increase the ATK points of this monster by 800.

RavenArchangel · 11-03-2009, 02:08 PM

Awesome cards, they are definitely likely to be in the fic when it starts up lol

Nicky-whyte · 11-03-2009, 02:35 PM

your welcome I have a LIGHT one aswel but no one commented on it so I dont kno if its good or bad :S

RavenArchangel · (This post was last modified: 11-04-2009 04:54 PM by RavenArchangel.)

(11-03-2009 02:35 PM)Nicky-whyte Wrote: your welcome I have a LIGHT one aswel but no one commented on it so I dont kno if its good or bad :S

@Nicky: I'm willing to look at it. Lets have a look ^^

BTW: @ person who made Reborns: See Yugioh R..I think you're idea has something simliair already done, except its equip cards being ressurected from the Graveyard as monsters. Interesting isn't it? Tho I still like your Reborn Idea so go ahead with it lol

Nicky-whyte · 11-04-2009, 05:24 PM

Heres that LIGHT monster ^_^
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Once per turn, reveal all cards on your opponent's side of the field and in there hand. Declare a type of card (Monster, Spell or Trap) and Destroy all cards of the declared type of card on your opponents side of the field and hand. This monster cannot be destroyed by effects as long as there is one other LIGHT monster on your side of the field. During your End phase, reduce the ATK points of this monster to 0. Skip your draw phase to special summon this monster from your Graveyard.

RavenArchangel · 11-04-2009, 05:31 PM

(11-04-2009 05:24 PM)Nicky-whyte Wrote: Heres that LIGHT monster ^_^

Once per turn, reveal all cards on your opponent's side of the field and in there hand. Declare a type of card (Monster, Spell or Trap) and Destroy all cards of the declared type of card on your opponents side of the field and hand. This monster cannot be destroyed by effects as long as there is one other LIGHT monster on your side of the field. During your End phase, reduce the ATK points of this monster to 0. Skip your draw phase to special summon this monster from your Graveyard.

The effects are OP. I like the type of effect it is, but its way over powered so if you bring that down some then It'll probably be fine. Otherwise cool card. As it is atm I'd give it a 6/10, but it'll change depending on what the new effect is.

TheCreator9464 · 11-04-2009, 05:32 PM

(11-04-2009 04:54 PM)RavenArchangel Wrote: BTW: @ person who made Reborns: See Yugioh R..I think you're idea has something simliair already done, except its equip cards being ressurected from the Graveyard as monsters. Interesting isn't it? Tho I still like your Reborn Idea so go ahead with it lol

Sorry I haven't posted here in a while, I don't know what Yugioh R is but I've never heard of that.

This thread will show you all my Reborns so far
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-164071.html

RavenArchangel · 11-04-2009, 05:40 PM

(11-04-2009 05:32 PM)TheCreator9464 Wrote:
(11-04-2009 04:54 PM)RavenArchangel Wrote: BTW: @ person who made Reborns: See Yugioh R..I think you're idea has something simliair already done, except its equip cards being ressurected from the Graveyard as monsters. Interesting isn't it? Tho I still like your Reborn Idea so go ahead with it lol

Sorry I haven't posted here in a while, I don't know what Yugioh R is but I've never heard of that.

This thread will show you all my Reborns so far
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-164071.html

Hmm not sure but two of those are definately not going to be in it..at least not in that form, If they're good enough (I just glimsped at them) I might use a version of them with a dif pic and description.

TheCreator9464 · 11-04-2009, 05:41 PM

(11-04-2009 05:40 PM)RavenArchangel Wrote:
(11-04-2009 05:32 PM)TheCreator9464 Wrote:
(11-04-2009 04:54 PM)RavenArchangel Wrote: BTW: @ person who made Reborns: See Yugioh R..I think you're idea has something simliair already done, except its equip cards being ressurected from the Graveyard as monsters. Interesting isn't it? Tho I still like your Reborn Idea so go ahead with it lol

Sorry I haven't posted here in a while, I don't know what Yugioh R is but I've never heard of that.

This thread will show you all my Reborns so far
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-164071.html
Hmm not sure but two of those are definately not going to be in it..at least not in that form, If they're good enough (I just glimsped at them) I might use a version of them with a dif pic and description.

Oh no no no no no no, those are just examples. I'm saying that when it comes time to make the fan-fic I'll make you some like this except better.