My DOOM set

[Dmaker]

here they are please rate.

[GunMetalDevil]

wow where do i start
um, ur spell card types are WAY off for what you want to be doing. ritual cards dont work by using 4 ritual spells at once. u should have made them continuous spell cards and made the monster an effect card. your ocg could use a lil work too. its not a bad idea, u just need to make it all work right.

3/10

[Dmaker]

(11-03-2009 04:07 PM)GunMetalDevil Wrote:  wow where do i start
um, ur spell card types are WAY off for what you want to be doing. ritual cards dont work by using 4 ritual spells at once. u should have made them continuous spell cards and made the monster an effect card. your ocg could use a lil work too. its not a bad idea, u just need to make it all work right.

3/10

typical, i was going to make them continous at the start but o well, ill change em.

[Gijinka]

lOl, man. You have made a lot of threads and i commented almost all, i think. But even so, you keep with the same errors. Try to read the suggests :/. Anywayz, you can't make 4 Ritual Spell Cards to Ritual Summon a monster. You have some OCG errors. Make only 1 Ritual Spell Card or make the monster effect.
C.

[PlasmaTheHero]

well not bad 6.9/10
EFF should be:
If this card is attacked by a non-beast-warrior type monster it gains 200 ATK, and it's level is increased by 1.
If you put good OCG ill give 7.5/10

[Dmaker]

(11-03-2009 04:49 PM)DHPlasma Wrote:  well not bad 6.9/10
EFF should be:
If this card is attacked by a non-beast-warrior type monster it gains 200 ATK, and it's level is increased by 1.
If you put good OCG ill give 7.5/10

thanks ill change it.

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(11-03-2009 04:49 PM)DHPlasma Wrote:  well not bad 6.9/10
EFF should be:
If this card is attacked by a non-beast-warrior type monster it gains 200 ATK, and it's level is increased by 1.
If you put good OCG ill give 7.5/10

Ive changed it, ps i just brung out 2 more threads.LOL

[Creator92182]

(11-03-2009 04:07 PM)GunMetalDevil Wrote:  wow where do i start
um, ur spell card types are WAY off for what you want to be doing. ritual cards dont work by using 4 ritual spells at once. u should have made them continuous spell cards and made the monster an effect card. your ocg could use a lil work too. its not a bad idea, u just need to make it all work right.
3/10

Wow look whos talking last time i checked normal type monster cards dont get 7000 attack and defense points.Even with compicated effect(which sux btw)it shouldnt get 7000 attak points blue eyes whit dragon is 2500 and its a great card so 7000 is a little big k so dont be critizing this guy.for you .5/10 for him 7.5/10

[Dmaker]

thanks.

[Axel Bind]

its just a bad version of the letters in the ygo tcg but they are hard to do so they are still good but dont use fuzzy pics

[Dmaker]

i used google for these so dont blame me, but now i use deviantart.

[Sychoshadows]

um. so basicly...if you have the four cards in hand and the ritual monster. if you have them in hand you just summon it...kinda like exodias win condition? you might as well just play exodia lol!
make it a fusion? so it doesnt have to be in the deck and hand, instead maby a more playable poly and you can use it to fuse the four spells for the fusion monster? that would be epic
6.10

[Dmaker]

ok thanks

[sephiran1]

Maybe you could reword it sort of like the destiny board. This card just isn't worth summoning OCG aside.

[Leo2]

4/10

[Dmaker]

(11-04-2009 10:31 PM)Sychoshadows Wrote:  um. so basicly...if you have the four cards in hand and the ritual monster. if you have them in hand you just summon it...kinda like exodias win condition? you might as well just play exodia lol!
make it a fusion? so it doesnt have to be in the deck and hand, instead maby a more playable poly and you can use it to fuse the four spells for the fusion monster? that would be epic
6.10

done it, ps the cards have been edited.