Izanagi and Izanami my way

[TheVaron]

See that is the kind of comment I would like. Its actually helpful tells me what im missing too. THANK YOU!!!

[hollowmaster999]

First new card is UP, but it's okay since anything else would probably kill it 8/10

Second card OCG:

When this card is Summoned Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned Special Summoned, specify if needed it gains 200 ATK and DEF for each non-DARK monster in your opponent's Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by battle remove from play all non-DARK monsters in your opponent's Graveyard.

Uh, terribly OP unless they're running strict BW, or something of the sort. Sorry, but fix it up a bit, less OP kudasai, ne? 5/10 (for now)

[TheVaron]

Made changes. 2nd support is now much less over powered. Thinking of making tuners for each of these and final forms of the gods as Synchros. rate comment?

[hollowmaster999]

I don't see the edits made, but anyway, don't post your newer cards in a new post, just edit the original post and put them there, that way you wont have to keep searching the thread for cards... Synchros would be meh, maybe something like contact fusions would be cool...

[Nisian]

wow those look like real playing cards, how long did it take you to reach to that point?

[TheVaron]

Not too long. But the advantage I have is that I read through A LOT of cards because I am serious about Dueling so i get a feel for more realistic cards. But THE BIGGEST help is all the people on YCM. Well the helpful ones who arent angry 10 year olds

[TheVaron]

Finished the set for now. Rates and comment please thank you

[hollowmaster999]

(11-06-2009 11:42 PM)TheVaron Wrote:  Not too long. But the advantage I have is that I read through A LOT of cards because I am serious about Dueling so i get a feel for more realistic cards

And yet you still have OCG errors...

The Tuner: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 of your Level 4 or lower DARK Fiend-type monsters that is removed from play.

That one was just sentence structure, and you DO NOT (REPEAT: DO NOT) SPELL OUT NUMBERS. Seems pretty meh since the synchro is a LV8 not LV7, cuz it would be instant tuning right there. 7.8/10

The Synchro: "Concubine of Yomi" + 1 or more non-tuner Fiend-type monsters
What's with this GIANT space right here? Have you ever seen this on a real card? If the anser is yes, then you have some dumb-fake cards, lol
This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. Once per turn place one Yomi Counter on this card. When? Standby Phase, Main Phase, End Phase, Draw Phase YOU NEED TO SPECIFY!Apply the corresponding effect equal to the number of Yomi Counters on the field: ● 0: This card's ATK and DEF becomes 0. ● 1 or 2: This card inflicts piercing damage. ● 3 or 4: IncreaseNO. Just NO. this cards ATK by 500. This card GAINS 500 ATK. ● 5 or More: This cards ATK and DEF become 1000. Once per turn, you can select 1 of your opponent's monsters and equip it to this card. (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card)What kind of english is this? It looks like you're learning to type for GOGES, gosh. USE=This card can only be equipped with 1 monster at a time. And then what? You just equip a monster and that's it? How fun[/sarcasm]

The synchro doesn't look very thuper-special, but I guess it's alright for your first one. 7.2/10

EDIT= I see more cards so more help:

The LIGHT tuner: Finally a card with only 1 OCG errror: blah blah blah Normal Summoned[COMMA->], you can blah blah blah

Looks fairly plain, but it's your first card with very little OCG error, so it's a milestone. HOWEVER, why would it be a "Child f the Storm" if it's a LIGHT and not a WIND? Fix pl0x ->8/10

The LIGHT synchro:

"Child of the Storm" + 1 or More non-tuner LIGHT Fairy-type monsters
Oh hello! Here's that extremely needed giant space again[/sarcasm]
When this card attacks or is attacked, you can remove this and and your opponent's monster battling this card from play. You can Special Summon this card during the End Phase of the turn this card was removed from play by paying 1000 life points.GOGES SPEECH Use=During the End Phase of a turn this card was removed from play BY ITS OWN EFFECT you can pay 1000 Life points to Special Summon it. That's correct sentence structure.

LIGHT synchro looks meh, it's a D.D. Surviver with an added effect and unneeded cost, so it's not so great.6.8/10

Work harder, desu.

[TheVaron]

Recheck D I noticed the Oh you equip it then.... fixed already. Got the others. That space was my mistake when i was copying the effect for the lore

PS I never said my OCG was good I know its crappy. I said i got an idea for more realistic kinds of cards so i dont go 50000000 ATK level 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EDIT I for got to add VANILLA!!!!!!!!!

[TheVaron]

OK PUT UP THE LAST CARDS In these for a while. Rate and comment

[ragnarok1945]

Only Priestess of the Storm should have another effect rather than just how its atk is determined

9/10

[TheVaron]

Thanks for the rate/ comment any tips on a new effect?