Yu-Gi-Oh! X Episode 003 - Narrow Escape

[DDRGHKH]

Previously, on Yu-Gi-Oh! X, Kidd escaped Sector Security and out of the pipeline into New Domino City.

5 Days later...

Kidd: How did Sector Security get guns?
Mito: Why the hell are you asking me?
Kidd: Because you know almost every single arms dealer in the freakin world.
Mito: Right, but not a single arms dealer I know would ever sell guns to Sector Security.
Kidd: So we don't have a single clue of how Sector Security ever got guns?
Mito: Pretty Much.
Kidd: Dammit! Are you sure?
Mito: Yep.
(Explosion Sound)
Kidd: What the hell was that?
Mito: That sounded like an RPG going off.
Kidd: Oh don't tell me.
Kidd looked behind him to find out that Sector Security actually has RPG's.
Kidd: Aw, s***.

To Be Continued...
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[legendhiro]

this is in script format and is a new chapter in a separate thread instead of in the same thread. this is two times that you broke the forum rules. i don't have anything against you or your fic, but you have to do much better.

[destruction hero]

legendhiro said it better than I was going to say it and advice check other peoples fan fics like check the one that made you want to make one then you will know what to do.

[Merciful Idiot]

NO SCRIPT FORMAT!

In other words don't do stuff like:
Bob: I like cake.
Billy: Me too!

Something like that should be like:
"I like cake." Bob said.

"Me too!" Billy replied.

But the first example is a bit boring. But I'm too bored to do anything half as good as I'm suppose to do.

[DDRGHKH]

Don't worry, I make Yu-Gi-Oh! X so awesome, that it will blow you away.

[destruction hero]

Legendhiro's fan fics are great.You could look at it well I looked at his yugioh DA.

[Merciful Idiot]

Nothing can blow me away*.

Script Format is banned. Your first chapter was a little OK but the chapters you're posting now are bad.

*= Except a 1000000 word chapter.

[Cephus]

(11-07-2009 08:57 AM)Merciful Idiot Wrote:  Nothing can blow me away*.

Script Format is banned. Your first chapter was a little OK but the chapters you're posting now are bad.

*= Except a 1000000 word chapter.

Is this a challenge?

I'm sorry, but, not worth the 15 seconds I wasted reading this. Script format also was banned a few months ago by the whims of fellow members.

[marshmallon]

how do you make a post mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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[LarryCotter]

TC: me thinks i r awsum
Larry: I don't. Get lost.

[destruction hero]

Lol everyones posting here more because of the thing.

[LarryCotter]

(11-08-2009 06:29 AM)destruction hero Wrote:  Lol everyones posting here more because of the thing.

Flaming can have 2 different outcomes:
-TC gets better at writing.
-TC leaves YCM.
Both outcomes are good.