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Dylan 101 · (This post was last modified: 11-28-2009 12:10 AM by Dylan 101.)

Name: Zenaku Takumi
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Appearance(Pic or 4+ sentence description):

Personality: He cannot stand company. He only follows the dark because it shows him the way he wants to follow. He thinks that anyone that follows him on missions will only hold him back, so he does everything in his power to go at it alone. He will never back out of a fight unless he deems his opponent ‘unworthy’, in that case he will flee and hunt his foe down like assassin later. Back out and prepare to be pursued.
Bio(4+ sentences): A true assassin at heart. Zenaku has never known the true meaning of light. He uses his cloak to help him manipulate the shadows around him, allowing him to sneak up to his target. Neither seen nor heard he strikes his foe with his 'hidden blade'. He grew up in a family with a long history of stelthy assassins, knowing he would be the next in line. If caught somehow or just playing around he will swap to his sword, using his amazing agility to give him an advantage. His athletic ablility allows him to silently jump from rooftop to rooftop, gaining him access to places others could never reach. He claims to be evil but that doesn't stop him from doing his own thing, he always says: 'I don't care if your good or evil, get in my way and I won't hold back'.
Weapon(Pic or 4+ sentence description):

Sword (Click to View)

He wields this sword in his right hand and has concealed a 'hidden blade', that looks similar to the ones on this man's wrists:

Hidden Blade (Click to View)

on his left wrist. He can make his sword transform into a Shadow Keyblade:

Shadow Keyblade (Click to View)

which he only uses if he absolutely needs it (or occaisonally if he really wants to). He uses his power to manipulate the shadows around him to stealthily assassinate targets with his 'hidden blade'. Sometimes he will swap to using two of these short blades he carries:

Short Blades (Click to View)

If he needs to attack someone from a long distance he can create guns from the shadows that fire lasers.
Element: Darkness
Creature(Pic + 2+ sentences explaining power and weapon, add a name)(You may have a Partner [can be as strong as a weak boss] and a species [can only be as strong as a regular creature]. Both need to use the same kind of attacks that you do):

Partner (Click to View)

A beast named Garron. It is an unversed that Zenaku created from the shadows. It use the shadows in a similar but less powerful way to Zenaku. He can create guns from the shadows just like Zenaku only the lasers are smaller and less pwoerful. Its giant claws make the perfect close range weapons.

Species (Click to View)

A laser Unversed that fires lasers from its tail. It can also sting with its tail and headbutt if it needs close range attacks.
Team: Final XIII
Team Rank: Team Leader

Rules! (Click to View)

Teams & Ranks! (Click to View)

Smeargle · (This post was last modified: 11-23-2009 03:45 AM by Smeargle.)

Name: Eisaka Torimino.
Age: 16.

Appearance: (Click to View)

Personality: Kind, Respecting, A joker, Responsible at times & Happy.
Bio: Eisaka's father choked his mother to death, infront of him when he was 3 years of age. Eisaka went on a trip to hawaii when he was 14. On the way, the wing started to break off and eventually it did. The plane smashed into a remote island. Eisaka was forced to live there with his new found friends. After surviving the Wilderness, his sister got sick and passed away. His sister looked out for Eisaka so much, that when she died, darkness consumed his heart and turned him into a Heartless. But Eisaka still maintains this form because he has enough light in his heart. Eisaka found that he has the power to shoot ice through his fingertips. He can also concentrate the ice through his body, while his body temperature melts the ice, so Eisaka can shoot hot water out of his fists.
Weapon: Eisaka's main weapons are either ice knives or an ice sword. He creates these weapons swiftly while in battle. He also enjoys freezing people. The main way he does this is he floods the floor then freezes his opponent.
Element: Ice & Water

Creature: (Click to View)

Team: Chaos XIII
Team Rank: Team Leader.

Dylan 101 · 11-19-2009, 01:55 AM

Accepted!

magnet soldier · (This post was last modified: 11-22-2009 11:48 AM by magnet soldier.)

Name: Kurix
Gender: male
Age:17
Appearance: similar to Riku But abit different because its his nobody. Similar to this

just with shorter hair.
Personality: Dark and Mysterious but not totally evil like xemnas.
Bio:The nobody of Riku But as powerful as riku and Xemnas/Xehanort mixed be cause since riku turned into xehanort when he turned into a heart less he is a bit of xehanorts nobody too. The new leader of the organisation but was a sort of member before. Was unknown to every one except the founding memebers of the origanal organisation, he was in charge of a special group of nobodys called the ninjas who had mastered speech and were the most intellegent group of lackey nobodys. Was reffered to as the ninja of the organisation before they were destroyed.
Weapon: Normally he uses a katana with the power to control dark and light (or yin and yang as he calls them). When in trouble the katana changes to reveale OathBreaker, a mix of oathkeeper and oblivion it has the same power as the katana just enhanced.
Element: Dark and light
Creature: Ninja nobodys. Look like a mix between samurai nobodys, dusks and normal ninjas. Uses a katana an is the only nobody lakey capable of speech.
Team: Organisation XIII
Team Rank:Team leader/Number I

Dark Lightning · (This post was last modified: 11-22-2009 12:32 PM by Dark Lightning.)

Name: Jarred
Gender: M
Age: 17
Appearance(Pic or 4+ sentence description): [Image: Anime-pics-anime-guys-6478884-240-320.jpg]

Personality: Clam, Quiet, Not good at expressing feelings
Bio(4+ sentences): PM to you
Weapon(Pic or 4+ sentence description): See Creature
Element: Lightning
Creature(Pic + 2+ sentences explaining power and weapon, add a name): http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs45/f/2009/1...y_noot.jpg
A wolf named Zain. Zain carries Jarred's weapon, the lightning blade. If Jarred fuses his sword with his creature, it would become the Lightning Saber (Zain can be changed back).
Team: Organization 13
Team Rank: Leader

Marsuvees Black · (This post was last modified: 11-22-2009 01:42 PM by Marsuvees Black.)

Umm... Can I Be a Heartless? If so, I'll apply as Hertless leader.

magnet soldier · 11-22-2009, 12:57 PM

(11-22-2009 12:26 PM)Dark Lightning Wrote: Name: Jarred
Gender: M
Age: 17
Appearance(Pic or 4+ sentence description):
Personality: Clam, Quiet, Not good at expressing feelings
Bio(4+ sentences): PM to you
Weapon(Pic or 4+ sentence description): See Creature
Element: Lightning
Creature(Pic + 2+ sentences explaining power and weapon, add a name): http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs45/f/2009/1...y_noot.jpg
A wolf named Zain. Zain carries Jarred's weapon, the lightning blade. If Jarred fuses his sword with his creature, it would become the Lightning Saber (Zain can be changed back).
Team: Organization 13
Team Rank: Leader

Just want to know but whos nobody is he???

Dark Lightning · 11-22-2009, 12:59 PM

Can I say that Roxas somehow became human and Jarred is his nobody

magnet soldier · (This post was last modified: 11-22-2009 01:17 PM by magnet soldier.)

That would be quite weird as A. Roxas is a nobody and B. Roxas is now a part of sora.
If you want it to be like roxas make it Ven's nobody just dont ask me what he is like i haven't played birth by sleep. He Actually looks more like riku. abit like i want my kurix to look like just a bit different.

Also Dylan whos boss of The organisation me or dark lightning???

Dylan 101 · (This post was last modified: 11-23-2009 02:34 AM by Dylan 101.)

Magnet, you are the leader and I just added Co-Leader and took out one if the captains so Dark you are Co-Leader. Sorry if you don't like it dark but Magnet posted first. Dark, sorry but Roxas can't have a Nobody but Jarred doesn't have to be a Nobody of someone from the story. Kasekage, Codey is the leader of the heartless (I know he hasn't finished my post but he's already told me the rest of it) you can apply to be Co-Leader. Also Dark, I may not have explained this very well but the creature isn't a single one with a name, it is a type of Nobody that should match the powers and weapons of your character. Magnet, could you try and find a pic of your nobodies. Also, is Oath Breaker a keyblade or a sword? I'm trying to make it a little more even for the two groups where keyblades don't fit so if you didn't see already I made a rule saying no keyblades.
EDIT: Dark, jumble up the name jarred and add an X into it to make it a proper organisation name. If you can't do that Codey is good and it and I'm sure he'd be glad to help.

Marsuvees Black · (This post was last modified: 11-28-2009 01:01 AM by Marsuvees Black.)

Name: Black
Gender: Male
Age: ??? but looks 25. Same age he became a heartless.
Personality: Black is snide and sneering, and he loves to tell confusjng Riddles. He could be called evil incarnate from how he acts.
Bio(4+ sentences): A man who was Evil in life. Darkside took his heart in a dream, since he was supposed to be the initial Keyblade user, before he turned evil. Now he is a very Strong Heartless, who is above even Ansem. He is able to maintain a Human Form. He is covered in black, everything from hair to clothes. Everything Except his eyes, whuch stay Blue all the time, are Black. He plans to fill everything in DArkness, so he has to open Kingdom Hearts, but certain Criteria has yet to be met.
Weapon(Pic or 4+ sentence description): Black's Weapon is also his defense, a leather bound book. When he writes in the book, he can summon lower Heartless, and he can create weapons. Only this book can be harmed, because Black's body is fake, and he lives in the book. If it is destroyed, Black dies. He can either summon many low level Heartless, or a few Strong ones, depending on Strength.
Element: Dark and Fire.
Creature:
http://sparrowstar.deviantart.com/art/Alucard-132849234
A black bat Heartless, also known as a Shataiki. It prefers to be called Marsuuv for some reason. It flies around with him everywhere, unless he sends it to scout ahead. It can hear things from up to a mile away, and it can talk. It Guards his book when he is not paying attention or is asleep. The bat can shoot sonic waves and use weapons summoned by Black.
Species: Black commands the Shataiki, a race of Heartless that resemble LArge Bats. They have the ability to suck out blood and hearts, long distance hearing, and Shoot sonic waves from their mouths.
Team: Chaos XIII
Team Rank: II/Co-leader

jeroukoo · (This post was last modified: 11-27-2009 08:26 PM by jeroukoo.)

Name: Jason
Gender: M
Age: 2400
Appearance(Pic or 4+ sentence description): http://images.google.com/images?hl=en&so...uy&aqi=g10 First guy that shows up
Personality: Reckless, Aggressive
Bio(4+ sentences):
Weapon(Pic or 4+ sentence description): Black weapon in picture
Element: Fire
Creature(Pic + 2+ sentences explaining power and weapon, add a name): [Image: wolf-1.jpg]

This wolf is the final project in the Prefect Wolf ZZY Sereis of the last one to be made. Its has almost uncomparable Intellect, Strength, Speed, and Battle Skills and has one flaw. The lack of the abilty to speak. Since it cannot speak, its name was given by its corupt appearance, Tan'o.
Team: Final XIII
Team Rank: Co Leader II

magnet soldier · (This post was last modified: 11-23-2009 02:11 PM by magnet soldier.)

(11-23-2009 02:32 AM)Dylan 101 Wrote: Magnet, could you try and find a pic of your nobodies. Also, is Oath Breaker a keyblade or a sword? I'm trying to make it a little more even for the two groups where keyblades don't fit so if you didn't see already I made a rule saying no keyblades.

Really i would like it to be A keyblade as riku is a keyblade weilder so it would fit. And I cant find a pic of the nobody but its like a samurai nobody mixed with a dusk. Like this dusk http://images.wikia.com/kingdomhearts/im...Nobody.jpg
Just with a White ninja mask or this samurai's mask http://media.giantbomb.com/uploads/0/916..._super.jpg . It also has a katana.

Also your team ranks The co-leader of the organisation is actually VII Saix in the origanal. II is Xigbar. The numbers are the order of joining. Plus in the original organisation XIII the co-leader isn't a founding member.

By the way jeroukoo why is he IX thats a really low rank you could make him co-leader.

Jarred could be called darjexr (pronounced dur-jex-ur) or sommat like that.

(11-23-2009 01:37 PM)magnet soldier Wrote:
(11-23-2009 02:32 AM)Dylan 101 Wrote: Is Oath Breaker a keyblade or a sword? I'm trying to make it a little more even for the two groups where keyblades don't fit so if you didn't see already I made a rule saying no keyblades.

Really i would like it to be A keyblade as riku is a keyblade wielder so it would fit.

You could say that if it's a nobody or heartless it has to be the nobody/heartless of a keyblade wielder in the original storyline of the games. I dont know what an unversed is so dont know about them.

magnet soldier · (This post was last modified: 11-23-2009 03:32 PM by magnet soldier.)

(11-23-2009 07:48 AM)Kazekage-------Gaara Wrote: Name: Black
Gender:Male
Age: ??? Black is snide and sneering, and he loves to tell confusjng Riddles. He could be called evil incarnate from how he acts.
Bio(4+ sentences): A man who was Evil in life. Darkside took his heart in a dream, since he was supposed to be the initial Keyblade user, before he turned evil. Now he is a very Strong Heartless, who is above even Ansem. He is able to maintain a Human Form. He is covered in black, everything from hair to clothes. Everything Except his eyes, which stay Blue all the time, are Black. He plans to fill everything in Darkness, so he has to open Kingdom Hearts, but certain Criteria has yet to be met.
Weapon(Pic or 4+ sentence description): Black's Weapon is also his defense, a leather bound book. When he writes in the book, he can summon lower Heartless, and he can create weapons. Only this book can be harmed, because Black's body is fake, and he lives in the book. If it is destroyed, Black dies. He can either summon many low level Heartless, or a few Strong ones, depending on Strength.
Element: Dark and Fire.
Creature: http://sparrowstar.deviantart.com/art/Alucard-132849234
A black bat named Marsuuv. It flies around with him everywhere, unless he sends it to scout ahead. It can hear things from up to a mile away, and it can talk. It Guards his book when he is not paying attention or is asleep.
Team: Chaos XIII
Team Rank: II/Co-leader

This is a reply to the Bold things.
First the initial keyblade wielder was supposed to be Riku.
Second Ansem is not nor has ever been a heartless that was his apprentice Xehanort.
And Third I highly doubt he would try open kingdom hearts A. He would be the third person to try and probably fail and B. He is not the leader and he would have to get permission from codey's character.

(11-23-2009 01:37 PM)magnet soldier Wrote:
(11-23-2009 01:37 PM)magnet soldier Wrote:
(11-23-2009 02:32 AM)Dylan 101 Wrote: Is Oath Breaker a keyblade or a sword? I'm trying to make it a little more even for the two groups where keyblades don't fit so if you didn't see already I made a rule saying no keyblades.

Really i would like it to be A keyblade as riku is a keyblade wielder so it would fit.

You could say that if it's a nobody or heartless it has to be the nobody/heartless of a keyblade wielder in the original storyline of the games. I dont know what an unversed is so dont know about them.

Or you could say that only Leaders/co-leaders can have keyblades

As for pic of oath breaker try imagine this oath keeper just black http://www.kh2.co.uk/assets/kh/artwork/179.jpg .
And anyway he doesn't use his keyblade often just when he thinks that if he doesn't he will die.

Marsuvees Black · 11-23-2009, 03:31 PM

(11-23-2009 03:19 PM)magnet soldier Wrote:
(11-23-2009 07:48 AM)Kazekage-------Gaara Wrote: Name: Black
Gender:Male
Age: ??? Black is snide and sneering, and he loves to tell confusjng Riddles. He could be called evil incarnate from how he acts.
Bio(4+ sentences): A man who was Evil in life. Darkside took his heart in a dream, since he was supposed to be the initial Keyblade user, before he turned evil. Now he is a very Strong Heartless, who is above even Ansem. He is able to maintain a Human Form. He is covered in black, everything from hair to clothes. Everything Except his eyes, which stay Blue all the time, are Black. He plans to fill everything in Darkness, so he has to open Kingdom Hearts, but certain Criteria has yet to be met.
Weapon(Pic or 4+ sentence description): Black's Weapon is also his defense, a leather bound book. When he writes in the book, he can summon lower Heartless, and he can create weapons. Only this book can be harmed, because Black's body is fake, and he lives in the book. If it is destroyed, Black dies. He can either summon many low level Heartless, or a few Strong ones, depending on Strength.
Element: Dark and Fire.
Creature: http://sparrowstar.deviantart.com/art/Alucard-132849234
A black bat named Marsuuv. It flies around with him everywhere, unless he sends it to scout ahead. It can hear things from up to a mile away, and it can talk. It Guards his book when he is not paying attention or is asleep.
Team: Chaos XIII
Team Rank: II/Co-leader

This is a reply to the Bold things.
First the initial keyblade wielder was supposed to be Riku.
Second Ansem is not nor has ever been a heartless that was his apprentice Xehanort.
And Third I highly doubt he would try open kingdom hearts A. He would be the third person to try and probably fail and B. He is not the leader and he would have to get permission from codey's character.

(11-23-2009 01:37 PM)magnet soldier Wrote:
(11-23-2009 01:37 PM)magnet soldier Wrote:
(11-23-2009 02:32 AM)Dylan 101 Wrote: Is Oath Breaker a keyblade or a sword? I'm trying to make it a little more even for the two groups where keyblades don't fit so if you didn't see already I made a rule saying no keyblades.

Really i would like it to be A keyblade as riku is a keyblade wielder so it would fit.

You could say that if it's a nobody or heartless it has to be the nobody/heartless of a keyblade wielder in the original storyline of the games. I dont know what an unversed is so dont know about them.

Or you could say that only Leaders/co-leaders can have keyblades

A. About the first bold, He existed BEFORE Sora and Riku.
B. I mean the Heartless known as Ansem.
C. Well, it's the plan for the Character.
D. I said CO-Leader/II not Leader. Dylan said I could be co-leader.
E. Why are you poking holes in my app?

magnet soldier · (This post was last modified: 11-23-2009 03:42 PM by magnet soldier.)

(11-23-2009 03:31 PM)Kazekage-------Gaara Wrote: A. About the first bold, He existed BEFORE Sora and Riku.
B. I mean the Heartless known as Ansem.
C. Well, it's the plan for the Character.
D. I said CO-Leader/II not Leader. Dylan said I could be co-leader.
E. Why are you poking holes in my app?

Soz i don't know why i do it it's mainly because im a big fan of kh and dont like it when people get things about it wrong. But you should make him have an age then we could see he existed before riku/sora.

[Quote]I said CO-Leader/II not Leader.[quote]
I meant to say "so he couldn't without permission"
Sorry again.

Marsuvees Black · 11-23-2009, 03:43 PM

It's all fine... but age.... He's middle aged, but he's also ageless since he's a heartless... I'll put how old he seems.

magnet soldier · (This post was last modified: 11-23-2009 03:50 PM by magnet soldier.)

Actually Heartless aren't ageless.
Xehanort was a teen when he became a heartless. When you see him and battle him he looks 30-40 years old which is how old he would be.

BTW when you said certain criteria has to be met, what criteria was that.

Marsuvees Black · 11-23-2009, 03:52 PM

Oh really? Huh. Never noticed that.

And I just put that to flesh it out a bit. I'd say along the lines of being more powerful.

magnet soldier · 11-23-2009, 03:56 PM

(11-23-2009 02:32 AM)Dylan 101 Wrote: Also, is Oath Breaker a keyblade or a sword? I'm trying to make it a little more even for the two groups where keyblades don't fit so if you didn't see already I made a rule saying no keyblades.

the two groups being heartless and unversed i presume. Actually th heartless do have keyblades mainly the dark keyblade, king mickey's dark kingdom key from the realm of darkness and riku's 2 the first one he had the souleater and his current the way to the dawn. I dont know about the unversed but you could make them 3-4 keyblades of their own. Any way there are only 2 keyblades in the organisation which are roxas'.