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My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
12-07-2008, 01:18 PM (This post was last modified: 06-29-2009 04:16 PM by Mystery Guest.)
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My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
Hi everybody. This is my first ever fan-fic. BTW, italics usually mean what John is thinking, but if a character is talking and they have italics, that is what they are thinking. Also, this fan-fic is done, so enjoy reading it. The second book in this trilogy is now up. To read it, click here.

Evolution of a Duelist
Chapter 1 (Click to View)
Chapter 2 (Click to View)
Chapter 3 (Click to View)
Chapter 4 (Click to View)
Chapter 5 (Click to View)
Chapter 6 (Click to View)
Chapter 7 (Click to View)
Chapter 8 (Click to View)
Chapter 9 (Click to View)
Chapter 10 (Click to View)
Chapter 11 (Click to View)
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Chapter 13 (Click to View)
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Chapter 15 (Click to View)
Chapters 16-25 are in Post #5.
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12-07-2008, 01:37 PM
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WOW!

that must of took ages that's definatly worth a rep.
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12-07-2008, 01:40 PM
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the crystal beast deck is overused. 8/10
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12-07-2008, 02:10 PM
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Awesome! +rep to you! 9/10!! Very Happy

Oh yeah, and you don't have to give me credit.....
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12-07-2008, 02:36 PM (This post was last modified: 06-29-2009 08:15 AM by Mystery Guest.)
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RE: My First Yugioh Fan-Fic please rate
The comment I overwrote was pretty much completely irrelevant, but I have a message: Thanks to Ragnarok1549's idea, I'll be posting more Chapters on my old posts, like this:
Chapter 16 (Click to View)
Chapter 17 (Click to View)
Chapter 18 (Click to View)
Chapter 19 (Click to View)
Chapter 20 (Click to View)
Chapter 21 (Click to View)
Chapter 22 (Click to View)
Chapter 23 (Click to View)
Chapter 24 (Click to View)
Chapter 25 (Click to View)
Chapters 26-38 are in Post #6.
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12-08-2008, 05:23 PM (This post was last modified: 06-29-2009 08:16 AM by Mystery Guest.)
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Chapter 26 (Click to View)
Chapter 27 (Click to View)
Chapter 28 (Click to View)
Chapter 29 (Click to View)
Chapter 30 (Click to View)
Chapter 31 (Click to View)
Chapter 32 (Click to View)
Chapter 33 (Click to View)
Chapter 34 (Click to View)
Chapter 35 (Click to View)
Chapter 36 (Click to View)
Chapter 37 (Click to View)
Chapter 38 (Click to View)
Chapters 39-54 are in Post #8.
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12-09-2008, 01:29 AM
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Good new two chapters! 8.75/10
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12-16-2008, 07:10 AM (This post was last modified: 06-29-2009 08:32 AM by Mystery Guest.)
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Chapter 39 (Click to View)
Chapter 40 (Click to View)
Chapter 41 (Click to View)
Chapter 42 (Click to View)
Chapter 43 (Click to View)
Chapter 44 (Click to View)
Chapter 45 (Click to View)
Chapter 46 (Click to View)
Chapter 47 (Click to View)
Chapter 48 (Click to View)
Chapter 49 (Click to View)
Chapter 50 (Click to View)
Chapter 51 (Click to View)
Chapter 52 (Click to View)
Chapter 53 (Click to View)
Chapter 54 (Click to View)
Chapters 55-64 are in Post #9.
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12-19-2008, 11:25 PM (This post was last modified: 06-29-2009 08:18 AM by Mystery Guest.)
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Chapter 55 (Click to View)
Chapter 56 (Click to View)
Chapter 57 (Click to View)
Chapter 58 (Click to View)
Chapter 59 (Click to View)
Chapter 60 (Click to View)
Chapter 61 (Click to View)
Chapter 62 (Click to View)
Chapter 63 (Click to View)
Chapter 64 (Click to View)
Chapters 65-76 are in Post #10.
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12-20-2008, 05:42 PM (This post was last modified: 06-29-2009 08:18 AM by Mystery Guest.)
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Chapter 65 (Click to View)
Chapter 66 (Click to View)
Chapter 67 (Click to View)
Chapter 68 (Click to View)
Chapter 69 (Click to View)
Chapter 70 (Click to View)
Chapter 71 (Click to View)
Chapter 72 (Click to View)
Chapter 73 (Click to View)
Chapter 74 (Click to View)
Chapter 75 (Click to View)
Chapter 76 (Click to View)
Chapters 77-86 are in Post #12.
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12-20-2008, 06:06 PM
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RE: My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
That's a great one.I read the first 9 chaps at once.Great work 8,5/10 because of the fast dueling,wich is sometimes a bit too fast ^^.
Also please check out mine \/
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12-20-2008, 06:38 PM (This post was last modified: 06-29-2009 08:21 AM by Mystery Guest.)
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Chapter 77 (Click to View)
Chapter 78 (Click to View)
Chapter 79 (Click to View)
Chapter 80 (Click to View)
Chapter 81 (Click to View)
Chapter 82 (Click to View)
Chapter 83 (Click to View)
Chapter 84 (Click to View)
Chapter 85 (Click to View)
Chapter 86 (Click to View)
The Epilogue is in Post #13.
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12-20-2008, 09:59 PM (This post was last modified: 06-13-2009 10:07 AM by Mystery Guest.)
Post: #13
RE: My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
This is where the epilogue will be. The epilogue will be 5 chapters long.

Epilogue

Chapter E1 (Click to View)
Chapter E2 (Click to View)
Chapter E3 (Click to View)
Chapter E4 (Click to View)
Chapter E5 (Click to View)
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12-20-2008, 11:25 PM (This post was last modified: 12-20-2008 11:26 PM by Crystal Beast 123.)
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RE: My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
Good! Some Chapters are short, though.
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12-20-2008, 11:40 PM
Post: #15
RE: My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
I got to hand it to you Mystery Guest, your Fan Fic is really something. BTW, check out my new Fan Fic "Chaos Universe: The Unknown Past Ch. 1 - 7". You'll love it.[/size]
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12-21-2008, 01:12 AM (This post was last modified: 12-21-2008 01:19 AM by Mystery Guest.)
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RE: My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
(12-20-2008 06:06 PM)LarryCotter Wrote:  That's a great one.I read the first 9 chaps at once.Great work 8,5/10 because of the fast dueling, which is sometimes a bit too fast ^^.
Which duels are "a bit too fast" within Chapters 1-9? And how so, exactly? Also, Chapter 11 is short because that duel didn't last too long. In real life a duel between a Warrior Toolbox and a DAD deck would take a similar amount of time for DD to win.

(12-20-2008 09:59 PM)Mystery guest Wrote:  I posted Chapter 12, it is a long one and possibly "vaguely inappropriate" depending on the audience reading it. I'm still trying to think up what deck the opposing duelist will use. After all, if you haven't noticed, the odd chapters are storyline and the even chapters are duels.
Cool, 33.33% vote for each of the top 3 choices. Apparently my fan-fic is better than I first thought it would be.
Why am I replying to my own post?

(12-20-2008 11:40 PM)Haou Devil 12 Wrote:  I got to hand it to you Mystery Guest, your Fan Fic is really something. BTW, check out my new Fan Fic "Chaos Universe: The Unknown Past Ch. 1 - 7". You'll love it.[/size]
Thank you Haou. Your fan-fic is also pretty good. It has a cool storyline and an amazing duel disk, though 24 monster zones and 24 spell/trap zones still seems a bit much.
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12-21-2008, 11:11 AM
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Now I've made Chapter 14. Yay!
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12-22-2008, 11:48 AM
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RE: My First Yugioh Fan-Fic: Evolution of a Duelist
(12-20-2008 09:59 PM)Mystery guest Wrote:  I posted Chapter 12, it is a long one and possibly "vaguely inappropriate" depending on the audience reading it. I'm still trying to think up what deck the opposing duelist will use. After all, if you haven't noticed, the odd chapters are storyline and the even chapters are duels.
Cool, 33.33% vote for each of the top 3 choices. Apparently my fan-fic is better than I first thought it would be.
BTW, I just realized something: For the first 5 chapters, it was "Odd chapters are storyline, Even are duels", but I wrote 2 consecutive storyline chapters when I wrote Chapter 6, so after chapter 6, it is "Even chapters are storyline, Odd chapters are duels." For some reason I wanted to end Chapter 5 at the thought that it ended at.
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12-22-2008, 01:23 PM
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Chapter 15 is up. John vs. ???.
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12-22-2008, 02:26 PM
Post: #20
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So far so good. It took a while but I read eight chapters so far. Will continue reading them! 8.7/10 (It's good.)
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