Chaos Universe: The Unknown Past Ch. 1 - 56 (Chapter 47: The Lion, the witch, and the Duel!) has arrived

[ragnarok1945]

Getting no cards in his hand isn't smart so quickly for Link

[Mystery Guest]

I think I have an idea what Link will do next. It's cool that you're using the Synchronized archetype.

[ragnarok1945]

ok, what do you think he'll do next?

[Mystery Guest]

Here's what I'm thinking:
He'll probably use another draw card in order to get at least 3 cards in his hand if he doesn't already have 3 cards in his hand. Then he'll activate Double Summon or something similar, allowing him to summon Synchronized Arsonist from his hand, who will be Level 3 because of Cost Down. Then he'll activate Reverse-Synchronized Realm, which will allow him to Synchro Summon by changing his Arsonist's Level to -3 (I'm not sure if that would work with how Cost Down works. If it doesn't work this way I would have to slightly change the wording of the Field Spell so that it would work like that because that's how I initially intended for it to work), therefore letting him Synchronize his Dragon and his Arsonist to Synchro Summon Synchronized Leviathan (ATK 2700). Synchronized dragon will destroy all cards on the field except face-up Synchronized cards, Arsonist will inflict 1500 damage, and Leviathan will attack directly.
That's what I think anyway.

Bad news Haou:

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[Haou Devil 12]

(07-26-2009 08:02 AM)Mystery guest Wrote:  Bad news Haou:

Fanfiction rules thread wrote Wrote:Script format, writing your fanfic with a layout similar to a theatrical play or a film manuscript, is not allowed.

Example (Click to View)

Alice: Hey, Bob! What's up?

Bob: Nothing special, Alice.

A fanfic that uses script format is reportable. You will be given ONE WEEK to adjust your fanfic to this rule.

Aw man! Look you got to help me or they'll lock my Fan Fic. I put a lot of work into making it this far in the story. Please?

[Mystery Guest]

I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all, I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

[Haou Devil 12]

(07-26-2009 01:43 PM)Mystery guest Wrote:  I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all, I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

Oh well. Then I decided to continue the story by creating another thread on Fan Fic. But this time, I'll describe everything that going on in the story. Once I finish Chapter 33, I'll get right on it. Since all the chapters I've written already have script format, I wouldn't blame them if they locked this thread.

[Mystery Guest]

They'll lock that one as soon as you make it because fan-fics shouldn't take more up than 1 thread. Just make all the chapters on the first three pages of this thread into regular writing and then the last three pages and chapters after that in non-script format and change all the other ones in your spare time. You'll have to sell out all your spare time to this thread because you only have at most about 100 hours to change all the chapters into non-script format. that doesn't sound too hard, since all you have to do is add quotation marks, remove the "[name]:" things and describe things.

[ragnarok1945]

(07-26-2009 01:43 PM)Mystery guest Wrote:  I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all, I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

you never thought of this when you were writing the fic?

[Haou Devil 12]

Chapter 33 is finished and script format is changed. (sort of) Please read and comment.

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(07-26-2009 05:49 PM)ragnarok1945 Wrote:  

(07-26-2009 01:43 PM)Mystery guest Wrote:  I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all, I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

you never thought of this when you were writing the fic?

I didn't forget the monsters. It's just that my monsters are too hard to describe. No one would get what I'm saying anyways. So when I started writing the Duels of my fic, I visualize the battles, the attacks, the features, and the outcomes of each Duel so I can continue the story. It's not hard to visualize the Duels while writing them. Even when you're writing in Script Format.

[Mystery Guest]

Chapter 33 was good, especially in the new format. Even though you still didn't describe the monsters, at least you got rid of the basic script format. If you can't describe the monsters, at least describe what the people are doing while they're talking.

[Haou Devil 12]

Thanks. BTW, thanks for giving me that strategy in your above post.

[ragnarok1945]

also too quick of a rematch for one Link lost. Usually don't see one that fast

[Mystery Guest]

Hey Haou, if you aren't already doing so, you should at least change the format of a few more chapters at the beginning of the fic.

Anyway, I hope Link can duel well with the Dark Tuner side of the Synchronized cards. We can wait for that chapter until after all the other chapters are changed from script format though, since that should be your top priority right now. If I could help with this process, please tell me how.

[Haou Devil 12]

(07-27-2009 08:33 PM)Mystery guest Wrote:  Hey Haou, if you aren't already doing so, you should at least change the format of a few more chapters at the beginning of the fic.

Anyway, I hope Link can duel well with the Dark Tuner side of the Synchronized cards. We can wait for that chapter until after all the other chapters are changed from script format though, since that should be your top priority right now. If I could help with this process, please tell me how.

Don't worry. I'm way ahead of you. Chapters 1 - 8 are already reformatted. I just have... (depressed) 24 more to go. In any case, Chapter 34 won't be written until I get done reformatting. And at the speed I'm going, I'm sure to be done in 2 days.

[ragnarok1945]

that's not too long of a wait, how long does it usually take to reformat 1 chapter?

[Haou Devil 12]

(07-28-2009 12:10 AM)ragnarok1945 Wrote:  that's not too long of a wait, how long does it usually take to reformat 1 chapter?

Aside from all the videos and T.V. I watch, about 15 minutes more or less.

[ragnarok1945]

I considered that quite fast, but that's usually because I spend so long proofreading if I upload a chap

[Haou Devil 12]

Okay. I have 4 more chapters to go. How long until they check my Fan Fic?

[ragnarok1945]

beats me. Depends on how well your selling skills are