Chaos Universe: The Unknown Past Ch. 1 - 56 (Chapter 47: The Lion, the witch, and the Duel!) has arrived

[Haou Devil 12]

Thank you, all of you. Congratulations on your 4th star Mystery Guest and love the new chapters on your Fan Fic.

[ragnarok1945]

you going to update again soon, Haou Devil 12?

[Haou Devil 12]

Yeah I am. By the way, click on my user name and click on "find all threads" and click on the 4 threads beneath this Fan Fic. P.S. I'm already making Chapter 16 as we speak.

[ragnarok1945]

that's good to hear. I'll look forward to reading it

[Haou Devil 12]

Here's Chapter 16 everyone. Enjoy.

Chapter 16 (Click to View)

Duel!
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Neos/ 5 cards/ LP 8000

Neos: Turn 1
I draw. I play the spell "Ancient Rules", this gives me the ability to Special Summon 1 LV5 or higher Normal Monster from my hand, so Nick I would like to introduce you to my brother "Elemental Hero Star Neos"(LV7/LIGHT/Warrior/ATK/2500 DEF/2000) (Nick says: "Elemental Hero... Star Neos"?) He was created while you were still roaming the Duel Monster Realm back, but just like me, he wasn't created alone. But first, I activate "Pot of Greed", so now I draw 2 cards. (Neos: Hand: 5) Next, I play "Double Summon", so I can bring forth his Neo-Spacian brethren. (Nick says: You mean he...?) Exactly. I summon "Neo-Spacian Burst Dragon"(LV3/FIRE/Dragon/Effect/ATK/500 DEF/700) and "Neo-Spacian Tide Serpent"(LV3/WATER/Sea Serpent/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/500) (Nick says: A new breed of Neo-Spacians. Wait! If he was created along with the new breed, then that means...) Now I activate "Neo-Spacian Burst Dragon"(s) effect, once per turn during my Main Phase, I can inflict 300 points of damage to you for every card in your hand, so you're being dealted with 1500 points of damage. (Nick: LP 6500) Now "Elemental Hero Star Neos", "Neo-Spacian Burst Dragon", and "Neo-Spacian Tide Serpent" use "Triple Contact Fusion" to summon "Elemental Hero S. Solar Neos"(LV9/FIRE/Warrior/Fusion/Effect/ATK/3000 DEF/2500) (Nick says: (gasping and panting) I knew it.) Now I activate his effect, by discarding 1 card from my hand I can Special Summon 2 "Chrysalis" or "Neo-Spacian" monsters from my hand, Deck, or Graveyard, so I Special Summon from my Deck "Neo-Spacian Burst Dragon"(LV3/FIRE/Dragon/Effect/ATK/500 DEF/700) and "Neo-Spacian Crasher Dino"(LV3/EARTH/Dinosaur/Effect/ATK/800 DEF/500) Next, I activate "Neo-Spacian Burst Dragon"(s) effect one more time, so lose 1500 more points. (Nick: LP 5000) Now I activate "Elemental Hero S. Solar Neos"(s) other effect, once per turn, for every card on the field, you lose 500 LP, and since there are 3 cards counting him, you lose another 1500 LP. (Nick: LP 3500) Now I play the Field Spell "Galaxy Space", so now my monsters gain 500 ATK & DEF. ("Burst Dragon": 500 + 500 = 1000 ATK/ 700 + 500 = 1200 DEF) ("Crasher Dino": 800 + 500 = 1300 ATK/ 500 + 500 = 1000 DEF) (S. Solar Neos: 3000 + 500 = 3500 ATK/ 2500 + 500 =3000 DEF) I end my turn.

Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 3500
Neos/ 0 cards/ LP 8000
Field: "Galaxy Space"

Nick: Turn 2
I draw. (Nick thinks: It's already the second turn and I'm already hit with 4500 points of damage. (sighs) Neos, I will save you again.) I summon "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) and thanks to his effect, I can sacrifice him to summon "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"(LV7/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2200) Next, I play "Chaotic Revival", so I can bring back "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) Now I play the Quick-Play Spell "Quick Trap", so I can activate a Trap Card from my Deck, so I'm activating "Pot of Forgiveness", so I draw 3 cards from my Deck. (Nick: Hand: 6) Now I activate the spell "Triple Summon", if I already Normal Summoned this turn, I can add in 2 more Normal Summons, so I summon "Chaos Spirit Searon"(LV3/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/800) and "Chaos Spirit Landcaron"(LV4/EARTH/Spirit/Effect/ATK/900 DEF/850) Hey Z, you ready?! (Z says: Do it!) Now "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior", "Chaos Spirit Searon", and "Chaos Spirit Landcaron" use "Triple Cross Fusion" to summon "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior"(LV9/FIRE/Warrior/Fusion/Effect/ATK/3000 DEF/2600) and thanks to his effect, he gains 400 ATK & DEF for every card in both of our Graveyards. And since there's a combined total of 4 cards, he gains 1600 ATK & DEF. (3000 + 1600 = 4600 ATK/ 2600 + 1600 = 4200 DEF) Now i'll equip "Chaos Sword" to "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" and i'll equip "Instant Chaos Realm" to "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior". Both of them get 1000 ATK. ("Zeo": 2500 + 1000 = 3500 ATK) ("Z": 4600 + 1000 = 5600 ATK) Now "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" destroy "Elemental Hero S. Solar Neos". (Neos says: But their ATK power is equal.) Thanks to "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"(s) effect, he gains 500 ATK during Damage calculation. (3500 + 500 = 4000 ATK) (Neos: LP 7500) Now "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior" destroy his "Neo-Spacian Burst Dragon". (Neos counters: By removing "Neo-Spacian Guardian"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/0 DEF/1800) from my Graveyard from play, all "Neo-Spacian" monsters I control are not destroyed as result of battle.) But you still take damage. (Neos: LP 3900) I end my turn.

"Come on, Neos. Snap out of it!" yelled Nick.

"I must obey the orders my master has given me." said Neos.

"She's only controlling you!" yelled Nick. "Please, Neos! Think back to when I saved you and everyone from the attack on Neo Space caused by the Arcana!"

"The attack... on Neo Space?" said Neos as he flashed back.

Flashback:

("Quick Aquos, dive in the water for an underwater assault." ordered Neos. "That way Grand Mole can dig underground to where the water stops at and be able to make hole large enough to trap them in. Quickly. We're gonna need all the help we can get.")

("Yes, sir!" said Aquos & Mole.)

Aquos dives in the water all the way down, but then sees an enemy battalian.

("It's no good." said Aquos. "They've already figured us out.")

("Impossible." said Neos until...)

Then Neos was struck from behind by Arcana Force XV.

("It's over Neo-Spacian." said XV.)

Arcana Force XV went in for an attack, but suddenly...

("Huh?" said Neos.)

("Need any assistance?" asked Zeo.)

The battalian underwater was about to fire, but a whirlpool soon washed them all away.

("What?" said Aquos.)

("Nice to see you again, Aquos." said Hydroc.)

("Likewise, Hydroc." said Aquos.)

("Hey, is everyone okay?" asked Nick.)

("So you're the creator of my new form." said Neos.)

("And I think it's about time for you to put it to good use." said Nick.)

("Right." said Neos. "Aero, Moss, Panther!")

("Yes, sir!" said his troops.)

So Neos along with his team used "Contact Fusion" to form "Elemental Hero Necro Neos".

("Zeo, you too." said Nick.)

("Right!" yelled Zeo. "Searon and Landcaron get ready!")

("Right!" yelled Searon & Landcaron.)

So Zeo, Searon, and Landcaron used "Cross Fusion" to form "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior". Soon after, the both of them destroyed all of the Arcana's forces and then retreated back to their dimension.

("Thank you." said Neos.)

("Don't mention it." said Nick. "We're just here to help.")

("Nick Cunningham, for your bravery and safety for others, I owe you a dept of gratitude." said Neos.)

The story continues:

("That's correct." said Neos' will inside his mind. "He saved my people once before. I must return the favor somehow, but this Black vein controlling me.")

"I must abide by my masters orders." said Neos.

"Neos, no!" yelled Nick.

"Let us continue with the Duel." said Neos.

Nick/ 1 card/ LP 3500
Neos/ 0 cards/ LP 3900
Field: "Galaxy Space"

Neos: Turn 3
I draw. I play the spell "Pot of Greed", which allows me to draw 2 cards. (Neos: Hand: 2) Next, I play one of your cards known as "Quick Trap" (Nick says: Not good.) Now I can activate a Trap Card from my Deck and the card I choose is "Gift of Greed", so you are able to draw 2 cards from your Deck. (Nick: Hand: 3) Next, I activate another "Pot of Greed" to draw 2 more cards. (Neos: Hand: 2) Next, I play the spell "Galaxy Draw", for each "Neo-Spacian" on the field, I can draw 2 cards for each one, so I'm able to draw 4 cards. (Neos: Hand: 5) Now I play another "Ancient Rules", so I summon back "Elemental Hero Star Neos"(LV7/LIGHT/Warrior/ATK/2500 DEF/2000) Next, I summon "Neo-Spacian Stardust Fairy"(LV3/WIND/Fairy/Effect/ATK/500 DEF/800) Now "Elemental Hero Star Neos", "Neo-Spacian Stardust Fairy", and "Neo-Spacian Crasher Dino" use "Triple Contact Fusion" to summon "Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos"(LV9/WIND/Warrior/Fusion/Effect/ATK/3000 DEF/2500) and thanks to my Field Spell, he gains 500 ATK & DEF. (3000 + 500 = 3500 ATK/ 2500 + 500 = 3000 DEF) And thanks to his effect, he gains 400 ATK & DEF for each card in both players hands and since there is a total of 5, he gains 2000 ATK & DEF. (3500 + 2000 = 5500 ATK/ 3000 + 2000 = 5000 DEF) (Nick says: No, Neos! Don't do this! Fight it!) (Neos' will says: I must do something!) This will fullfill my masters order. (Nick says: (softly) No!) "Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos" destroy "Zeo The Chaos Warrior". (Nick: LP 2000) And thanks to "Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos"(s) effect, when he destroys a monster, all of your monsters are destroyed and you take half of the ATK of those monsters as damage.

Then the last attack was a blast of light and directly hit Nick with all its might, then with an echoing voice, Nick said...

"NEOOOOOOOOOOOS!!!!" echoed Nick's scream.

Nick: LP 0/ Defeated
Neos: LP 3900/ Winner

Nick was then unconcious. Wasn't even able to move.

"Now to take him to my master." said Neos.

"No!" yelled Neos' will.

Neos then started to lose control of his body. The darkness surrounding him was trying to fight off his will.

"I won't take him to her." said Neos' will.

"Yes, you must do it." said a demon voice. "I order you! I control you!"

"Not anymore!" yelled Neos' will as he unleashed his powers.

Then light was emiting from Neos' chest and the Black vein was about to disperse, then Neos let out with a scream and an orb of light surrounded him.

"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!" screamed Neos.

The light faded and then floating onto Nick's back was Neos' card. And then it was over and Nick was just lying on the ground in the dead of night.

("Neos.... I'm sorry." thought Nick.)

Card of the Day: "Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos"

Nick was defeated, but in the end, he saved his friend from the darkness. Who knows what's gonna happen next after that fight. "Next Chapter"! When Nick told the gang what happened to him last night, Rein realizes this may be his fault. Then later at School they have a new student who has her eyes on Nick. Much to Rachel's dismay, then she asks Nick to Duel her. Will Nick recover and win the match, or will he eaten up by the skills of the new student? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!

[ragnarok1945]

a little short for a chap, I'll wait until you update it to review it properly

[Haou Devil 12]

Chapter 16 is finished. Please read and comment.

[ragnarok1945]

now hopefully Nick will be able to get Neos back later on. Good chap

[Haou Devil 12]

Here's Chapter 17 everyone. Enjoy.

Chapter 17 (Click to View)

Nick then awoke in the daylight with his head on Rachel's lap.

"Hey, you okay?" asked Rachel.

"Yeah, I think so. (gasps)" said Nick weakly.

Flashback:

("This will fullfill my masters order." said Neos. ""Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos" destroy "Zeo The Chaos Warrior". And thanks to "Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos"(s) effect, when he destroys a monster, all of your monsters are destroyed and you take half of the ATK of those monsters as damage.")

("NEOOOOOOOOOOOS!!!! (Nick: LP 0)" echoed Nick's scream.)

The story continues:

"Wait a minute! Where's...?!" yelled Nick as he looked at his hand.

Nick then noticed Neos' card was in his hand.

"But how?" said Nick.

("I destroyed the Black vein myself." said Neos as a Duel Spirit.)

("You did?" thought Nick.)

("Even though my body may be gone, my spirit still holds strong and it was all thanks to you Nick." said Neos. "Because you never gave up on me when things start to get worse. And for that, I thank you.")

("No problem." thought Nick. "By the way, what were those new Neo-Spacians you had with you and there was something about a brother?")

("I think one of your friends can answer that for you." said Neos as he faded away.)

"Say what?" said Nick.

"What is it?" asked Rachel.

"Hey." said Cody. "Me and Rein just got your message, Rachel."

"Nick are you okay?" asked Rein.

"Yeah." said Nick.

"So what happened?" asked Rein.

"Well, I was Dueling Elemental Hero Neos and..." said Nick.

"And what?" asked Rachel.

"I lost." said Nick.

"What?!" yelled Rein. "Nick, I've seen you Duel. There's no way you could've been beaten by Neos. Even if he is the smartest Elemental Hero."

"But that's just it." said Nick. "I was facing Neo-Spacians I never even seen before. And the strangest thing Neos said was that he had a brother that can use "Contact Fusion" with the Neo-Spacians I never seen or heard of before."

("A brother and new Neo-Spacians? Uh-oh." thought Rein.) "Did he say his brother was named Elemental Hero Star Neos?" asked Rein.

"Wait. How did you...?" asked Nick before just realizing it. "YOU created them?"

"Yes, alright." said Rein. "When I was traveling in the Duel Monster Realm, I saw Neo Space. It looked like a wasteland. I talked to Neos about what happened and told me you saved them just in time, but they were unable to defend themselves again, so I had an idea. I said I can create them another world which you already know is called "Galaxy Space", then since they don't have much reinforcements, I created his brother, Elemental Hero Star Neos. And I also created Neo-Spacians that can go well with Star Neos. Then after that, all of them started training. They making "Contact Fusions" left and right, but Star Neos was victorius, then it was decided that Star Neos was to rule Galaxy Space that was on the other side of Neo Space and come to their rescue whenever they were under attack."

"So you made them to protect the other Neo-Spacians?" asked Nick.

"That's right, but now that I heard the Dark one was using them to destroy you, I don't know what to do with them next." said Rein.

"Don't worry Rein." said Nick. "We'll pay her back. Right now, let's get ready for School."

So they got ready for School and got on the bus and headed for School. And a beautiful, white, pale blond girl walked into Nick's class.

"Everyone, I'd like you to meet our new student, Alice Daniels." said the teacher.

"Nice to meet you, everyone." said Alice.

"Wow, she's beautiful." said a boy. "But we're not giving up on you Rachel."

"Yeah, thank you." said Rachel all embarassed.

("Why does she look so familiar?" thought Rein.)

"Alright, Alice. choose a seat to your liking." said the teacher.

"Yes, sir." said Alice.

Alice then approaches Nick and the gang.

"Heh, heh, heh." giggled Alice as she winked at Nick.

"What the...?" said Nick all confused.

("Why that little..." thought Rachel angrily.)

("Alright, two beautiful girls for each arm, but why did the other girl wink at Cunningham?!" thought Zane.)

Alice sat next to Rein.

("So familiar." thought Rein.)

After class, it was free period and Alice walked and sat next to Nick.

"Hi. My name is Alice." said Alice.

"Hello. I'm Nick." said Nick.

"I know." said Alice. "You're the one who saved the School and the town countless times."

Then Alice starts to move in closer to Nick's face while she was talking.

"So tell me." said Alice. "How do you win so many times? Are you a genius or something? Did you create those cards yourself? I want to know everything about you."

Nick was running out of room to back up.

"So?" asked Alice.

"Uh, you're moving in a little too close to my face." said Nick.

Then Nick fell out of his seat along with Alice.

"Whoa!" said Nick & Alice as they fell.

Nick & Alice opened their eyes and as soon as they looked at each other, Alice was on top of him and they were both embarrassed.

"(blushing) Aah! I'm so sorry." said Alice all embarassed.

"No! I'm sorry." said Nick. "I never should've fell out of my seat."

"Shut it, Cunningham!" yelled Zane. "You done enough. I'm sorry about him. He's a loser."

"Why you...!" yelled Nick clenching hs fist until...

Alice slapped Zane in the face so hard, his whole face turned red.

"OW!" screamed Zane.

"He's not a loser!" yelled Alice. "Nick, are you okay?"

"Dang, woman." said Nick. "That's some arm you got."

"Heh, heh, heh." giggled Alice. "By the way, I've been meaning to ask you... Will you Duel me?"

"What?" asked Nick.

"Pleeease?" asked Alice. "I just want to see how you Duel that's all. And to see if my cards are worthy enough to Duel you, so pleeease?"

"(sighs) Alright, alright. I'll Duel you." said Nick until...

Alice, in a surprise attack, hugged Nick and they both fell down again.

"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!" said Alice as she hugged him tightly. "You won't regret this. I swear."

"No problem." said Nick suffocating.

When Rachel saw them, she was angry as ever. After free period, it was P.E. and Nick and Alice got prepared.

"I can't believe I'm about to Duel the hero of Oxford." said Alice. "(blushing) This is so amazing! Yet, I feel so embarrassed about what happened today."

"Don't worry about what happened just focus on the Duel." said Nick. "Alright let's go."

Duel!
Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000
Alice/ 5 cards/ LP 8000

Nick: Ladies first.

Alice: Thank you.

Alice: Turn 1
I draw. I play the Field Spell "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt", then I play my 5 Continuous Spell Cards, "Easter Egg(s) 1", "2", "3", "4", and "10". (Nick says: Wow, you must really love Easter, don't you?) (Rein says: (in thought) Wait. Now I recognize her. (out loud) Nick, I should...) (Nick says: Don't worry, Rein. Just let her do her thing. Sorry about that. Continue.) Thank you. Now I activate the effects of "Easter Egg 3", once per turn, if "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" is on the field, I can draw 1 card. (Alice: Hand: 1) Now I activate "Easter Egg(s) 1, 2, and 4"(s) effects, just like the same with "Easter Egg 3", but not the same effect, their effects activate while "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" is on the field. "Easter Egg 1" lets me gain 500 LP. (Alice: LP 8500) "Easter Egg 2" lets me inflict 500 LP to you. (Nick: LP 7500) And finally "Easter Egg 4" lets you discard 1 card from your hand. (Nick: Hand: 4) Now I activate the effect of "Easter Egg 10", I can Special Summon 1 LV3 or higher monster from my hand and you can Special Summon 1 LV2 or lower monster from your Deck, so I Special Summon "Dragon of the Many Eggs"(LV4/WIND/Dragon/Effect/ATK/2100 DEF/1300) (Nick says: And I Special Summon "Warrior Synchron"(LV1/LIGHT/Warrior/Tuner/ATK/200 DEF/800) Now I activate my fields effect, once per turn, I can activate 1 "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell Card from my Deck, so I activate "Easter Egg 5", so I pay 1500 LP (Alice: LP 7000) and draw 2 cards. (Alice: Hand: 2) Next, I activate my fields other effect, once per turn, I can remove from play 1 "Easter Egg" card on my field, so I choose "Easter Egg 10". I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.

"So what do you think so far?" asked Alice.

"Uh, I'm taking a wild guess, but did you create those cards yourself?" asked Nick.

"Yes!" yelled Alice. "Finally, somebody notices my cards."

"That's what I've been trying to tell you." said Rein as he runs up and whispers in Nick's ear. "I met this girl in the Duel Monster Realm." whispered Rein. "She created a new dimension there, which you already noticed. She's been really anxious to meet ever since you were traveling there."

"For real?" asked Nick.

"It's true about what he said." said Alice.

"You also read lips too." said Nick. "Anyway, let's get back to the Duel."

Nick/ 4 cards/ LP 7500
Alice/ 1 card/ LP 7000
Field: "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt"

Nick: Turn 2
I draw. (Nick thinks: Yes! Another one.) I summon "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub"(LV4/WATER/Machine/Union/ATK/1500 DEF/1200) and when this card is summoned, I can add "Chaos Spirit Hydroc"(LV3/WATER/Spirit/Effect/ATK/700 DEF/600) and "Chaos Spirit Tsunami"(LV4/WATER/Spirit/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/1000) to my hand. Next, I play "Double Summon", so I summon another Chaos Vehicle known as "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet"(LV4/FIRE/Machine/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/1600). When this card is summoned, I can add "Chaos Spirit Searon"(LV3/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/800) and "Chaos Spirit Lava"(LV4/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1000) to my hand. Now "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub" and "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet" combine together to form "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine"(LV7/WIND/Machine/Fusion/Effect/ATK/2400 DEF/1500) I should tell you that whenever a "Chaos Machine" monster is summoned, the Material Monsters are put in my Spell & Trap Card Zone. Now I activate its effect, I select 1 of its Material Monsters and use it as an Equip Spell Card and this card gains the effects of the selected monster, then I select another one of its Material Monsters and Special Summon it to the field, so I choose "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet" as the Equip Spell Card and Special Summon "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub"(LV4/WATER/Machine/Union/ATK/1500 DEF/1200) And since "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet" is equipped to "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine", "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine" gains "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet"(s) effect of increasing the equipped monsters ATK by 300 for every Spell & Trap Card on the field, so he gains 1800 ATK since there 6 Spell Cards on the field. (2400 + 1800 = 4200 ATK) Now "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine" destroy her "Dragon of the Many Eggs". (Alice counters: I activate the trap "Easter Mine", when this card is activated, I can remove from play any number of "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell Cards on my field and inflict 500 points of damage to you for each one, so I remove all of them and you take 2000 points of damage. Not only that, but your monster loses 1200 ATK. Am I right?) (Nick: LP 5500) (4200 - 1200 = 3000 ATK) (Alice: LP 6100) Now "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub" attack her directly. (Alice: LP 4600) Next, I attack with "Warrior Synchron". (Alice: LP 4400) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.

"You're doing really good." said Nick.

"Really?!" asked Alice. ("I can't believe it. He actually acknowledged me." thought Alice. "Okay, Alice. Keep it together. You still haven't pulled out your ace yet. And once he gets a good look at what my Deck is capable of, he'll probably ask me out. Alright, let's go!")

Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 5500
Alice/ 1 card/ LP 4400
Field: "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt"

Alice: Turn 3
I draw. I activate my fields effect, so I activate "Easter Egg 5" from my Deck again. (Alice: LP 2900/ Hand: 4) Now I activate "Pot of Greed", so I draw 2 cards. (Alice: Hand: 5) Now I summon "Easter Baby Dragon"(LV3/EARTH/Dragon/Effect/ATK/1200 DEF/700) (Nick says: What do you know, it's Baby Dragon in Easter form.) Thanks. (Alice thinks: Yes, now it's time to bring him out.) Now I Special Summon the ace of my Deck. Come forth, "Easter Knight"(LV7/EARTH/Warrior/Effect/ATK/2400 DEF/1500) (Nick says: Whoa. Nice monster.) (Z says: Hmph, He doesn't look so tough.) He can be Special Summoned if I have 5 "Easter Egg" Continuous Spells removed from play by the effects of "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt". (Nick says: Wait. You only removed 1 "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell thanks to your fields effect.) Don't you remember my trap card? Because thanks to its effect, all "Easter Egg" Continuous Spells removed from play by its effect are treated as being removed from play by my fields effect. (Nick says: I'm impressed.) (Alice thinks: Yes! Finally. I hope I get through this all right.) Now I activate his effect, by equipping the following monsters to him, he gains 1 of his 3 effects, so I equip "Easter Baby Dragon" to him. Now I activate his first effect, once per turn, I can Special Summon 1 LV4 or lower EARTH monster from my hand, so I summon "Milus Radiant"(LV1/EARTH/Beast/Effect/ATK/300 DEF/250) Thank to its effect, it increases the ATK of all EARTH monsters on the field by 500 and decreases the ATK of all WIND monsters by 400, so your monster loses 400 ATK (3300 - 400 = 2900 ATK) while my "Easter Knight" gains 500. (2400 + 500 = 2900 ATK) (Nick says: So they're equal.) Not after this. I equip him with "Easter Egg Sceptor", when this card is equipped to "Easter Knight", he gains 1000 ATK. And not only that, once per turn, I can activate an "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell Card that was removed from play by my fields effect. (Nick says: What?!) (2900 + 1000 = 3900 ATK) Now I activate the effects of "Easter Egg 2", so you lose 500 LP. (Nick: LP 5000) (Nick says: With another Spell Card in play, my monster gains another 300 ATK. (2900 + 300 = 3200 ATK) Now "Easter Knight" destroy his "Warrior Synchron". (Nick: LP 4150) Wait. How come you took half the damage and "Warrior Synchron" wasn't destroyed? (Nick says: Thanks to his effect, he can't be destroyed once per turn and I take half the damage inflicted to him and since I took Battle Damage from this card, I can Special Summon 1 Warrior-type monster from my hand, Deck, or Graveyard, so I Special Summon "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) Wow! (Z says: Alright, "Easter Knight". Let's see what you got.) I end my turn.

Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 4150
Alice/ 1 card/ LP 2900
Field: "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt"

Nick: Turn 4
I draw. Now I'm tuning "Warrior Synchron"(LV1) with "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine"(LV7) to Synchro Summon "Stardust Warrior"(LV7/WIND/Warrior/Synchro/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2100) (Alice says: Wait. How come your monsters LV is 7?) Thanks to "Warrior Synchron"(s) effect, I can increase his level to 2 or 3 or decrease it to 0 and I chose 0. Now I activate "Stardust Warrior"(s) effect, when he is Synchro Summon, I can destroy 1 monster on the field, so I choose your "Easter Knight". (Alice counters: When "Easter Egg Scepter" goes to the Graveyard, any "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell removed from play are put into my Graveyard. And I can inflict 500 points of damage to you for each one.) (Nick: LP 1650) Sorry about this, but this Duel ends here. Now "Stardust Warrior" and "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub" END THIS!

Nick: LP 1650/ Winner
Alice: LP 0/ Defeated

"(sighs)" sighed Alice.

"Alice." said Nick. "Look, Alice. I'm sorry that I..." said Nick until he could finish...

Then she ran up to him and hugged him for some reason.

"Why are you hugging me?" asked Nick all confused.

"I'm just so happy that you acknowledged me and my cards." said Alice. "I wanted to be like you. To become a better Duelist."

"Then how about you join our group?" asked Nick. "We could need another Duelist for our mission."

"Mission?" asked Alice.

"To defeat the crisis in the Duel Monster Realm." said Nick. "A rouge monster calling herself the Dark one. So what do you say? Want to save the world?"

"(crying) (sniffs)" cried Alice.

"Hey, I didn't mean to make you cry or anything." said Nick. "I..."

"Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!" said Alice as she hugged him again.

Nick and Alice walked over to Cody, Rein, and Rachel who is still jealous.

"Hey guys. We got a new addition to the team." said Nick.

"I don't blame you." said Rein. "That was some Duel back there. You pulled off some good strategies."

"That's great." said Cody. "Nice Duel."

"Uh... Rachel." said Alice.

"Yes." said Rachel.

"You think we can hang out sometime?" asked Alice. "Just us girls?"

"Sure." said Rachel. "That'd be cool."

"Thank you." said Alice.

Zane walks over to the girls.

"So girls, how would you two like to ditch the geeks and hang out with a real man?" said Zane.

The girls looked at each other.

"On three?" asked Rachel.

"Let's do it." said Alice.

"1, 2, 3!" said Rachel & Alice as they went in for the punch.

They both punched Zane so hard in the face, that both his nose and mouth was bleeding.

"OWWWWW!!" screamed Zane. "I STILL LOVE BOTH OF YOU!!"

"Let's get out of here, guys." said Nick as they got on the bus.

So they all got on the bus and rode all the way home.

"So he's the great Nick Cunningham." said a voice. "I'll teach him what happens when he messes with my sister!"

Card of the Day: "Stardust Warrior"

So Nick and the gang got a new ally in the group, but what of the mysterious person saying he'll teach Nick what happens when he messes with his sister? Question is, who is that guys sister? "Next Chapter"! Nick gets an unexpected visitor from some kid and the kid challenges him to a Duel with a crazy surprise. Will Nick pull out of this one, or will the snot-nosed kid come out cheering? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!

[ragnarok1945]

Major problem with Zane. You know at this rate I expect him to go somewhere along the lines of killing soon

[Mystery Guest]

I wonder if she uses Doll Parts and Doll Chimera.

[ragnarok1945]

that can be revealed later on when the next chaps are up

[Haou Devil 12]

No, she doesn't use Doll monsters, but she'll use cards that you like, Mystery Guest.

[Haou Devil 12]

Chapter 17 is updated. Please read and comment.

[Mystery Guest]

(02-24-2009 06:43 PM)Haou Devil 12 Wrote:  No, she doesn't use Doll monsters, but she'll use cards that you like, Mystery Guest.

Cool that my Easter Eggs are recycled again, Haou. Also, I just realized that you congratulated me on my 4th star. Thank you for the recognition. Also, great duel so far in Chapter 17.

[ragnarok1945]

yeah, I'm loving the duel myself. Keep it up

[Haou Devil 12]

Sorry I have to say this, but I'm gonna have to update Chapter 17 this weekend.

[ragnarok1945]

that's fine, I'll probably be busy myself until then anyway

[Haou Devil 12]

Chapter 17 is finished. Please read and comment.

[ragnarok1945]

Nice to see Nick won, and Zane is going to have his challenge for both the girls