Undead Army Complete Set

[yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx]

Ok i've finally finished my set Undead Army. so rate comment and tell me what you think. i think the OCG is ok.


Monsters:





Avengefull Warrior Card Lore:This card cannot Attack unless you tribute 1 Level 1 Zombie-Type monster. When this card Destroys a monster by battle you can Special Summon 1 Undead Army Token (Zombie-Type/DARK/1 Star/ATK 0/DEF 0) in ATK position on your side of the Field.



Card Lore:This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it treated as an Effect Monster with the following effect:
● Once per turn by removing 4 "Undead Counter's" from a monster you can Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand.





Card Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Zombie-Type monsters. This cards ATK is the Same as the number of "Undead Counters" on the Field x 1000. Once per turn by removing 5 Zombie-Type monsters from play you can destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field.







Card Lore:Once every Standby Phase you can place 1 "Undead Counter" on 1 monster on you opponent's side of the field. When there are 5 "Undead Counters" on a monster destroy that monster. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard detsroy all monsters that have "Undead Counters" on them.




Card Lore:Once per turn during your Standby Phase you can draw 1 card. If it is a
Monster: Place 1 "Undead Counter" on 1 monster on the field.
Spell: Increase your LP by 500 points.
Trap: You take 300 LP of Damage.








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All images were found on deviantart.com

[LiAM]

decent cards for a newbie im impressed, keep it up,

also i dont like B'n'W pictures

some effects are short and simple, expand a little, show mroe complication

[Bittersweet88]

I like the theme, but some of the cards seem overpowered and others pointless. Soul takers effect especially seems pointless. I wouldnt bother my ass putting five counters on a monster to kill it, I would just spread the counters over all the opponents monsters and then dare them to "destroy" my monster. not by battle, just destroy. it seems pretty sick. Also, a counter is generated every turn, yours and your opponents. I thought I would give some constructive criticism. minus the odd over powered card and that effect I mentioned. I really like your deck. Its looking really nice and the way it works is a fun concept. Pictures are awesome too

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p.s. I think the simple effects are better
They are easier on the eyes and less rules querying occurs

[kingdom01]

pretty good job for a new member, i loved the pics and the names but i think if i were in ur place i could of called them Undead Soldier... instead but it's fine, and ur OCG is good, i like it, may be few mistakes but it's still great, keep up the good work!!

[yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx]

I'm gonna use your advice about spoutaker Bittersweet88. thnx everyone. this really took effort to make. i really appreciate it.

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yujiooh can you explain to me exactly which cards have simple effects. tnx.

[yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx]

i got an idea for a new synchro card a little while after i poated this so.....

[jeq313]

Dude sweet u should check out my set....dark galaxy

[yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx]

bump