Zombie Heroes / Red-Eyes Zombie cards

[underneathean]

This is my first group of cards. I plan to continue this set well into the future. This first part contains a few OCG errors that I am aware of, but I am unable to change them without completely recreating them as I neglected to save them. Please feel free to comment and rate. (note that this set would work best with Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon included)

lore: "Zombie Hero Vamprus" + "Zombie Hero Lady Vamprus"
Every-time this card destroys a monster in battle, Special Summon 1 "Bat Token" (Zombie-type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position on your side of the field. During your Main Phase you can sacrifice any number of "Bat Tokens" on your side of the field to Special Summon 1 monster from your opponents graveyard with the same number of "Bat Counters" as the number of "Bat Tokens" you sacrificed. At the beginning of your turn take away 1 "Bat Counter" from each monster summoned by this cards effect. If a monster summoned by this cards effect does not have any "Bat Counters" on it, destroy it.




Lore: When this card battles one of your opponents monsters, you can treat this card as an equip card and equip it to your opponents monster (Battle Damage is calculated normally). Take control of the monster this card is equipped to. When the equipped card would be destroyed, destroy this card instead. At the end of your turn, unequip this card and summon it on your side of the field. When this card is no longer equipped to your opponents monster, it gains a "Vamprus Counter" and your opponent gains control of it. A monster with a "Vamprus Counter" on it is treated as a Zombie-type monster and loses 300 attack and defense points for each "Vamprus Counter" on the card.

[Sasuke Pitsura]

I like the theme,

some pics could be better

few OCG errors

rate 8.3/10

[~~Kira Yamato~~]

a little OCG errors
nice pics
9/10

[Lucarios]

I must admit it is really beautiful beautiful

[Spire]

Some capitilazation errors, and the pics could be of better quality and some effects seem very basic indeed. Though they seem alright seeing as your new, 7.6/10.

[~Twisted]

Crop some of the images, they have white borders.

level = Level
Zombie-type = Zombie-Type
one = 1
When this card battles one of your opponents monsters = When this card battles 1 of your opponent's monsters
attack points = ATK

This card is not affected by Trap, Spell, or Monster effects = This card is unaffected by the effects of Monster, Spell, and Trap Cards

[Domi the Mystery]

Some OCG errorz, overused pics and nice archtype! 7.9/10

[underneathean]

Thanks for the comments guys!
But could somebody review my cards balance? Nobody's commented on that yet and I'm curious what you guys think.

[PremierAameer]

Some OCG errors
(Ex. Take Away -> Remove)
but Awesome work!

[underneathean]

Thanks Premier!

New cards:





Toon Earthen Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. When this card is selected as an attack target, flip a coin. If its heads, negate the attack.

Toon Deathcloak Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, but Tributes are required for monster Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. While this card is face-up on the field, all cards that would go to your opponents Graveyard go to your Graveyard instead.

[underneathean]

bump

[YuugiCM]

Red eyes zombie metal ultimate baby rare super deluxe white fudge brownie dragon

[NickLD]

awesome idea, and pretty cool pics even thoguh they need renders and backgrounds. (well some of them)
8/10

[underneathean]

Thanks, I assume your talking about the white borders on some of them, that was because of a problem with the pic format I used in some of the earlier cards. I've fixed it now though so there shouldn't be any problem with them in the future.

[JAD Le Rusecue]

I rate your cards a 9.5/10
God, I wish I was this good.
Anyway, it's been awhile since I played YUGIOH and I was just wondering, what are the white monsters, and what is a Tuner monster?

[noroldir]

to answer you question white monsters are sychro monsters and tuners are neded to summon sychro monsters.

and for the cards love em all exept for devro the pic its kinda weird if you could find better pic i rate 10/10 awsome idea. favorite one is red eyes revived dragon coolest one on my opinion.

[underneathean]

thanks noroldir, and pic-wise red-eyes revived is probably my favorite too. I found it, I think, while looking for zombie metal, so I made myself make that card especially for that pic. because I liked it so much.

thanks to JAD too!

[ratcoon]

nice i would show you mine but i need to kknow how to
do that

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[Gijinka]

Good archtype a lot of overused pics. 7.5/10

[WTF]

overused pics

7/10