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Guilty Gear: Axl Low, Baiken, Chipp Zanuff

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So far this is all I have and I was hopeing you guys could help me even out their effects and what not.

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So no one is gonna offer me any comments to help me with my problems?

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Effect for baiken:
When this card attacks a monster, it gains 500 ATK. When this card battles a "Hero" monster, it gains another 500 ATK.
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you can't have fake types it's against the rules. Make support for the vanillas. the first cards. effect has bad OCG. 4/10

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If these cards are based off of a game, they should probably go in the 'Pop Culture' thread. I'm assuming these are your first cards. First, try to use real Types. ('Ninja', 'Samurai', and 'Time-Traveller' are not real types. 'Warrior' for example is a real type, however.) Secondly, try to avoid post cards with no effects, they are bland and uninteresting. Third, fix your Official Card Grammar (OCG). Help is found in my signature for that. Fourth, why doesn't Chip Zanuff have any ATK or DEF? I hope this helped. Good Luck. :)
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last card needs an effect and stats, plus ninja and samurai aren't real types

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