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[Darth Revan of the Sith]

Yea this idea just popped in my head its got a whole storyline to it too.


In case anybody doesnt know a Light Bringer is a Heartless/Nobody who uses Darkness to use Light looking attacks. And Exodus are rare forms of light bringers that can only happen to light bringers whose original humans were keyblade wielders.

Vale cards

[Teh ZWOOTS]

Lol @ "2010 GOOGLE".

Anyway, not too bad.
1. The pictures are OK. Not good, but not really bad either.
2. Too weak. Add 200 ATK and DEF to each and you should be good.
3. Not the most enthralling descriptions I've ever heard, but they're not bad. I actually like the first quite a bit.
4. Fake types burn me. Try...
Warrior-Type for Vale
Fiend-Type for Vale Second Form
Fiend-Type for Vale Third Form
5. Does it really make sense for Vale Second & Third form to be LIGHT? I know he's supposed to be a light bringer, but his forms seem to be mostly comprised of DARK. Just sayin'.
6. Saying that Vale "kills one person every day" kind of sounds funny. Try edit it so it sounds less...I don't know, exact?
Example:
"Because of his unquenchable hatred for humanity, he kills at least one human every night."
I'll admit, I'm not the best at Vanilla text, and this is not the best I've ever done, but it's at least a bit more interesting, no?

I'll give you a 5/10.

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

thanx man u rock

[Teh ZWOOTS]

thanx man u rock

I do my best to give advice and a fair right. I'm glad my service is to your liking.

[til til cj]

i would love it if you made more

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

i would love it if you made more

Already been necrobumped so might as well answer you.

I won't be making more KH cards but I am working on a new deck as of right now. The banner for it is in my siggy.