The War Machines [21/??]

[MystirMeme]

These are a group of (hopefully growing) Machine-Type monsters based on mechs commonly used for war (hence the name). Their effects employ a type of recycling through battle to maintain card advantage. the main 5(+) War Machines have aggressive effects to help maintain the field and punish defensive players. The synchroes are support for the main ones, increasing the recycling capability, providing offense, etc.

[spoiler='Monsters ( 10 ) (NEW)'][spoiler='War Machine Foot Soldier'][img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/5073/35239u.jpg[/img]
Once during your Main Phase, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Long Blaster'][img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/7802/35239b.jpg[/img]
During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Space Figher'][img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5733/35239ub.jpg[/img]
Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove this card and 1 other card on the field from play. If you remove this card by this effect, return those monsters to the field in the same battle position as when they were removed from play during your next Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine All-Terrain'][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4061/35239m.jpg[/img]
Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can look at 1 face-down card your opponent controls, then return it to its original position. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Droid Patrol'][img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/5977/35239w.jpg[/img]
If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Battle Fighter'][img]http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/1735/35239q.jpg[/img]
You can tribute this card when an opponent's Effect Monster's effect would destroy a card on the field to negate that effect and destroy it. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Skilled Assassin'][img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7011/35239l.jpg[/img]
Once per duel, if this card is in your hand, you can toss a coin. If you call it right, you can discard this card to destroy 1 monster on the field to the Graveyard. If you call it wrong, Special Summon this card. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Stealth Destroyer'][img]http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/4061/35239m.jpg[/img]
You can set this card in your Spell and Trap Card Zones. When this face-down card in a Spell and Trap Card Zone would be destroyed, you can Special Summon this card to your side of the field and destroy 1 card your opponent controls instead. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Lancer'][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/9983/35239h.jpg[/img]
If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, this card gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step. Negate the effects of face-up Defense Position monsters this card attacks. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine General (NEW)'][img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7613/35239n.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If there is a face-up Field Spell Card on the field, you can Tribute 1 level 3 or lower "War Machine" monster to Special Summon this card. If this card is Special Summoned this way, it's ATK is equal to double the ATK of the Tributed monster. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "War Machine" monster in your hand. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "War Machine" monster in your Graveyard.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler='Synchros ( 6 )'][spoiler='War Machine Rampant Ram'][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4483/35239o.jpg[/img]
1 "War Machine" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Destroy any Defense Position monster this card attacks at the end of the Damage Step. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Chimera'][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/1640/35239ld.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "War Machine" monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can add 1 "War Machine" monster in your Graveyard to your Deck. Once per turn, You can discard 1 "War Machine" monster in your hand to have this card gain 500 ATK until the End Phase of this turn.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Recycler'][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/6678/35239y.jpg[/img]
1 "War Machine" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Once per turn, you can return 1 "War Machine" monster in your Graveyard to your Deck. If a "War Machine" monster you control would be destroyed by a card effect, you can return that monster to the Deck and add 1 "War Machine" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Super Solder'][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7802/35239b.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "War Machine" monsters
Once per turn, you can reduce this card's ATK by 500 until your next Battle Phase to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Fleet Ship'][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/8735/35239c.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "War Machine" monsters
Once per turn, when you add a "War Machine" monster to your hand, you can Special Summon that monster. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "War Machine" monster to switch this card's ATK and DEF and gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. If this card attacks the turn it used this effect, it cannot use this effect again or switch it's battle position until the End Phase of your next turn.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='War Machine Supreme Fortress'][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5073/35239u.jpg[/img]
1 "War Machine" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner "War Machine" monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster that was used for the Synchro Summoning of this monster. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "War Machine" monster from your hand or Graveyard, OR tribute any number of face-up "War Machine" monsters to destroy the same number of cards on your opponent's side of the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x 500.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler='Spells ( 3 )'][spoiler='Moving Battle Fortress'][img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/1735/35239q.jpg[/img]
If there is a face-up Field Spell Card, this card is treated as a Continuous Spell Card and is placed in your Spell and Trap Card Zone. All "War Machine" monsters on the field gain 200 ATK and lose 200 DEF. Once per turn, if a "War Machine" monster would be added to your hand, you can Special Summon it. You can send 1 "War Machine" monster in your hand to the Graveyard to add 1 "War Machine" monster in your Deck to your hand. If this card would be targeted by an Effect Monster's effect while this card is a Continuous Spell Card, you can discard 1 card to move this card to an adjacent column and negate that effect.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Dimension of War (NEW)'][img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3052/35239z.jpg[/img]
Once per turn, If a "War Machine" monster you control would be destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can return it to the Deck instead. You can remove 1 "War Machine" monster in your Graveyard to increase the ATK of all "War Machine" monsters on your side of the field by 200. A monster that attacks the turn this effect was used is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='B.E.E.T.L.E.'][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9983/35239h.jpg[/img]
Add 1 "War Machine" monster in your Graveyard to your hand. After this card's effect resolves, you can pay 1000 Life Points to return up to 3 "War Machine" monsters in your Graveyard to your Deck.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler='Traps ( 2 )'][spoiler='Hyper Jump'][img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/2221/35239s.jpg[/img]
Activate only when a "War Machine" monster is added to your hand from your Deck by the effect of a "War Machine" monster. Special Summon that monster to your side of the field. The monster Summoned by this effect gains 500 ATK and DEF until the end of the Damage Step after that monster battles.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='F.L.I.'][img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/8905/35239.jpg[/img]
Activate only if you control 1 face-up "War Machine" monster. Send the top card of your deck to the Graveyard and activate 1 of the following effects:
*You can look at 1 face-down card your opponent controls, then return it to its original position. If that card was a Counter Trap Card, you can discard 1 card to send it to the Graveyard.
*You can reveal 1 card in your opponent's hand. If the revealed card was an Effect Monster, you can discard 1 card to send it to the Graveyard.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

Please comment and rate on these monsters so that I can make them better.

[MystirMeme]

Bumpz...

[MystirMeme]

Kerbumpz!

[MystirMeme]

Bumpz.

[cardmaster791]

omg i love the pics where did you get those those are some of the coolest ive ever seen

[MystirMeme]

Can I have a Rating? and Jazin Kay's album.

[MystirMeme]

Bump.

[MystirMeme]

Bump. Anyone?

[Heavens Guardian]

Good Pics... With Machines Add some more traps...bu other then that their great....

[MystirMeme]

[quote name='Maple' timestamp='1292396189' post='4854029']
Good Pics... With Machines Add some more traps...bu other then that their great....
[/quote]
Thanks

EDIT: 5 new cards!! Also changed War Machine Soldier and War Machine Fleet Ship. One of the new cards was inspired by a certain set.

[beefman]

Those are really good cards! I love machines so I would definitely use them. I don't see any OCG errors, the pics are great, and they don't seem OP or UP. No mistakes, so 10/10

[MystirMeme]

[quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1292451216' post='4855328']
Those are really good cards! I love machines so I would definitely use them. I don't see any OCG errors, the pics are great, and they don't seem OP or UP. No mistakes, so 10/10
[/quote]

Thanks!

[MystirMeme]

Bump. Anyone?

[MystirMeme]

Bump. Anyone!?!?

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Great job man!' I don't see how you aren't getting any comments with such good cards for someone sorta new. I like all your cards and there balanced as well as effective.

10'

And just for your hard work and patience for receiving comments, here's a +rep.

P.S. Mind commenting on my single card please?

[The Sleeping Dude]

good archetype supports each other and no ocg error also balanced
10/10

[MystirMeme]

[quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1292640569' post='4860505']
Great job man!' I don't see how you aren't getting any comments with such good cards for someone sorta new. I like all your cards and there balanced as well as effective.

10'

And just for your hard work and patience for receiving comments, here's a +rep.

P.S. Mind commenting on my single card please?
[/quote]

Thanks!! I knew If I kept trying I'd get some eventually. And yea Ill comment on your card for ya.

[quote name='ks2ill34' timestamp='1292640876' post='4860521']
good archetype supports each other and no ocg error also balanced
10/10
[/quote]

Thanks. The goal for this archetype was Toolbox-based, being able to search for what you need when they were destroyed in battle. I also saw that image for the Supreme Fortress monster and thought "gotta make it."


Thanks guys. +rep for both of ya.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Thanks man!' And I'm glad your one that never gives up!

[MystirMeme]

[UPDATE:] two new Synchro monsters.

[beefman]

Hooray for synchros! Those are awesome!

[Master of Sabers]

Awesome pics!

Love the idea of a powerhouse toolbox. It's not that common.

Once comment, though. Why would anyone in their right mind go for the Chimera when they could synch for Goyo Guardian? It has better attack, and an awesome effect. Maybe make an effect like -

"When a "War Machine" monster is added to your hand through a card effect, draw a card"

or

"when a "War Machine" monster is sent to the graveyard, select one "War Machine" monster from your deck, and send it to the grave. Then, add a level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your graveyard to your hand."

something like that.

I'd love to see more!

also, It'd be awesome if you'd like to look at mine.

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/234040-galactics/page__gopid__4894202#entry4894202

[MystirMeme]

[quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1293659380' post='4894073']
Hooray for synchros! Those are awesome!
[/quote]
Lol thanks.

[quote name='Ryuka' timestamp='1293661686' post='4894204']
Awesome pics!

Love the idea of a powerhouse toolbox. It's not that common.

Once comment, though. Why would anyone in their right mind go for the Chimera when they could synch for Goyo Guardian? It has better attack, and an awesome effect. Maybe make an effect like -

"When a "War Machine" monster is added to your hand through a card effect, draw a card"

or

"when a "War Machine" monster is sent to the graveyard, select one "War Machine" monster from your deck, and send it to the grave. Then, add a level 4 or lower "War Machine" monster from your graveyard to your hand."

something like that.

I'd love to see more!

also, It'd be awesome if you'd like to look at mine.

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/234040-galactics/page__gopid__4894202#entry4894202
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Thanks. I'll try to come up with something for Chimera. In the meantime, +rep for ya.

[MystirMeme]

[UPDATE:] 2 new cards, 1 Monster Card and 1 Spell Card.

I also edited War Machine Chimera to actually have an effect.

[beefman]

I'm glad that no matter how many times you need to bump it to get reviews, you keep trying and making new cards.
GOOD ones too, at that.

[MystirMeme]

[quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1293735173' post='4896682']
I'm glad that no matter how many times you need to bump it to get reviews, you keep trying and making new cards.
GOOD ones too, at that.
[/quote]
Thank you. I do my best to make good cards. I always love looking back at what I made and pretending to use them in my mind to see how they would fit.