Nexusgrave's Rainbow Revolution Deck(w Booster Pack)

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[center]This is my officially third complete set and my first take on an archtype.

This deck contains an archtypes know as the [b][color="#FF0000"]R[/color][color="#FF8C00"]A[/color][color="#FFFF00"]I[/color][color="#00FF00"]N[/color][color="#0000FF"]B[/color][color="#483D8B"]O[/color][color="#4B0082"]W[/color] [color="#FF0000"]P[/color][color="#FF8C00"]H[/color][color="#FFFF00"]A[/color][color="#00FF00"]N[/color][color="#0000FF"]T[/color][color="#483D8B"]O[/color][color="#4B0082"]M[/color][/b], a group of fierce looking monster that dwell in a very hierarchical community. Much of the hierarchy appears to operate like a military organization, broken down into smaller units and factions called Spectral Knight, which contains the low level monsters. Light Of Necross, which contains the mid level monsters and Ancient Apparition, which contains the high level monster. Meanwhile the Rainbow Phantom are guided by several powerful Host which are the Synchro and Fusion monster. All of these monster serve and answer to a powerful [color="#FFA500"][b]DIVINE[/b][/color] monster which are 1 of the [b][color="#FF0000"]7 DIVINE monster[/color][/b] called the [color="#FFA500"][b]Saint Of Days[/b][/color]. This deck is an aggressive control oriented deck. Unlike most deck, Rainbow Revolution's power came from the low level monster which provides many strategics and counters to your opponent while the mid level would solidifies your field presents and the high levels would provides you with powerful destructive force with a little help from monsters from your extra deck and the sacred card would help you to win the duel completely.
All images credit goes to Jazinkay and devianart

[spoiler='[font="Palatino Linotype"][b][color="#FF0000"]R[/color][color="#FF8C00"]A[/color][color="#FFFF00"]I[/color][color="#00FF00"]N[/color][color="#0000FF"]B[/color][color="#483D8B"]O[/color][color="#4B0082"]W[/color] [color="#FF0000"]P[/color][color="#FF8C00"]H[/color][color="#FFFF00"]A[/color][color="#00FF00"]N[/color][color="#0000FF"]T[/color][color="#483D8B"]O[/color][color="#4B0082"]M[/color][/b] Music Theme [/font]'][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VjgxAwWSNyc[/media][/spoiler]

[spoiler='Booster Pack'][img]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/1179/76639843.png[/img][spoiler='Introduction']At the end of the Rainbow lies no treasure nor happiness but False Hope for the terror of the Rainbow Phantom will be unleashed [/spoiler][/spoiler]

[b][font="Palatino Linotype"]Field Card[/font][/b]
[spoiler='Rainbow Land'][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/2462/293373u.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Increase the ATK and DEF of all "Rainbow Phantom monster by 400. Increase your Life Points by 600 for every Rainbow Spell and Rainbow Trap card(s) activated when this card is face-up on the field. [/spoiler][/spoiler]

[b][font="Palatino Linotype"]Low Levels[/font][/b]
[spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Balesk, Spectral Knight'][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']When this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can return 1 card from your hand to the top of your Deck to add 1 "Rainbow Land" or to increase this card's ATK by 700 points until End Phase.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Balthazar, Spectral Knight'][img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot be Special Summon except by the effect of a face "Rainbow Phantom" monster. When this card is Normal Summon to the field, all face-up "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control cannot be affected by the effect of Effect Monster, Spell and Trap card. If this card is Special Summon to the field, your opponent cannot select a "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control as an attack target[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Balza, Spectral Knight'][img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/5388/293373c.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, you can add 1 "Polymerization" or "Fusion Gate" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. When this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a "Rainbow Phantom" monster, you can Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Bergsma, Spectral Knight'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']When this card is Normal Summon to the field, increase this card's Level by 1. This card cannot be Special Summon except by paying 1200 Life Points. When this card is Special Summon to the field, increase this card's ATK equal to the number of "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control on your side of the field x300.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Bodacious Giant, Spectral Knight'][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/6550/293373d.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card can only be Normal Summon. This card cannot be Special Summon except by the effect of a "Rainbow Phantom" monster. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can tribute 1 monster from your side of the field except this card to take control 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your opponent side of the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Bolmeteus, Spectral Knight'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/29/293373t.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. Each time this card inflict damage to your opponent Life Point through Battle, draw 1 card from your deck. If it's a Level 5 or lower monster, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[b][font="Palatino Linotype"]Mid Levels[/font][/b]
[spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Mabel, Light Of Necross'][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot be Special Summon or Set. When this card is Normal Summon to the field, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Rainbow Phantom" monster from your hand. When this face-up Attack Position monster destroy 1 monster your opponent control, this card can attack your opponent directly during the same Battle Phase.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Malefic, Light Of Necross'][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5876/293373b.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot be Special Summon except by the effect of a "Rainbow Phantom" monster. When this card is Special Summon to the field, you can add 1 Spell or Trap card from your Graveyard to your hand. If this is the only "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control on the field, destroy this card. If this card you control would be destroyed by battle, you can tribute 1 other monster you control instead.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Mihail, Light Of Necross'][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/555/293373n.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If this is the only "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control on your side of the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. When this card is removed from the field except by it's own effect, destroy all face-up monster your opponent controls and inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Molar, Light Of Necross'][img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']When this face-up Attack Position card is on your side of the field, your opponent can only select this card as an attack target. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If This card destroy a monster your opponent control by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to halve the original ATK of the destroyed monster.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Morpheus, Light Of Necross'][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2885/293373s.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']If you control 1 or more Level 3 or higher "Rainbow Phantom" monster, you can Normal Summon this card without tribute. If you do, decrease this card's ATK by 700 points. When this card is in face-up Defense Position, your opponent cannot conduct their Battle Phase. If this is the only face-up"Rainbow Phantom" monster you control on your side of the field, destroy this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[b][font="Palatino Linotype"]High Levels[/font][/b]
[spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Daedalus, Ancient Apparition'][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/4122/293373e.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summon by Tributing 1 Level 6 or 5 "Rainbow Phantom" monster on your side of the field. This card can attack all monster your opponent control once each.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom-Daldaruis, Ancient Apparition'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/9164/293373q.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot be Special Summon or Set. This card can only be Tribute Summon by tributing 2 Level 4 or lower "Rainbow Phantom" monster. While this card is face-up in Attack Position on your side of the field, it gains 300 ATK for every non LIGHT monster on the field. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can let this card lose 1000 ATK to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Rainbow Phantom" monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field. If this is the only "Rainbow Phantom" Monster on your side of the field, destroy this card at End Phase. [/spoiler][/spoiler]

[b][font="Palatino Linotype"]Spells and Traps[/font][/b]
[spoiler='Rainbow Spell-Bombs From Paradise'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/4355/293373h.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Activate only during your Main Phase. Reveal all cards in your hand to your opponent. For every Level 4 or lower "Rainbow Phantom" monster you reveal to your opponent, inflict 800 damage to your opponent. [/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Spell-Emarosa, Blade Of Necross'][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/6931/293373i.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Equip only to a "Rainbow Phantom" monster with Light Of Necross in it's name. If the equipped monster attacks, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field at the end of the Damage Step.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Spell-Necross Rainbow '][img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1592/293373p.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']You can only equip this card to 1 "Rainbow Phantom" monster with Light Of Necross you control. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 800 points. If the equipped monster would be destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead, and make the Battle Damage to the controller of the equipped monster 0.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Spell-Rainbow March Home'][img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/5876/293373b.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']You can only activate this card while there is a face-up "Rainbow Phantom" with "Spectral Knight" in it's name on your side of the field. Return to the owner's hand(s) all monster(s) on the field, except "Rainbow Phantom" monster with "Spectral Knight" in it's name[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Spell-Rainbow Tokens'][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Each time a "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control destroy a monster your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 "Rainbow Phantom Token" (Winged Beast-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) to your side of the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Spell-Supernumerary Rainbow'][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/7019/293373hh.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Pay 1000 Lifer Points to activate this card during your Main Phase 1. Each time a "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control destroyed a monster your opponent control, your opponent must send a number card(s) equal to the level of the destroyed monster. Each time during your End Phase, pay 300 Life Points or destroy this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Spell-Wrath Of Spectral Knight'][img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Equip only to 1 "Rainbow Phantom" monster you control with "Spectral Knight" in it's name . It gains 800 ATK. When it destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of the destroyed monster. During the End Phase, shuffle this card into the Deck.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Trap-Calling For Dragon'][img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/2705/293373x.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Active only during your Main Phase. Select 2 Level 5 or higher monster you control and add it to the top of your deck than shuffle it. Special Summon 1 "Rainbow Phantom Dragon" from your Extra Deck. The Special Summon monster cannot attack during the turn it was summon this way to the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Trap-Divinity Of Rainbow'][img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/5546/293373.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Activate only during the Damage Step when a face-up "Rainbow Phantom" monster with Light Of Necross you control is attacked by an opponent's monster. Add 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Trap-Light Of Necross'][img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/29/293373t.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Activate only when a monster is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field. Equip this card to that monster. It gains 500 ATK. During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. The equipped monster cannot select a "Rainbow Phantom" monster as an attack target.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Trap-Rainbows On Titan'][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9164/293373q.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Active only if you control 1 Divine-Beast Type monster with "Rainbow Phantom" in it's name. Each time during your opponent Main Phase, your opponent cannot activate the effect of all Spell and Trap cards as long as you still control a Divine-Beast Type monster with "Rainbow Phantom" in it's name on your side of the field. Each time during your End Phase, tribute 1 monster or destroy this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Trap-Reflected Rainbow'][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7343/293373nu.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']Activate only when a "Rainbow Phantom" monster is destroyed. Select and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Rainbow Phantom" monster from your Deck.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Trap-Seven Color Of Rainbow'][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/555/293373n.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore ']Activate only when your opponent activates the effect of an Effect Monster while you control a "Rainbow Phantom" monster. Negate the activation and effect(s) of that Effect Monster, and destroy it.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[b][font="Palatino Linotype"]Extra Deck[/font][/b]
[spoiler='Rainbow Phantom Dragon'][img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4733/293373a.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']1 "Rainbow Phantom" Synchro monster+ 1 LIGHT monster
When this card battles with an opponent's monster with equal or higher ATK, destroy all face-up monster your opponent control at the start of Damage Step and inflict 800 damage to your opponent for every monster(s) destroyed.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom Paladin']False Hope appearing from the end of the Rainbow please hear my cry, be born from the hope you take away, Synchro Summon! Show yourself, Rainbow Phantom Paladin![spoiler='Rainbow Phantom Paladin'][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/1592/293373p.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']1 "Rainbow Phantom" Tuner+ 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card gains half the ATK of the Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this card from the Extra Deck. Each time this card destroy 1 monster your opponent control, you can add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Rainbow Phantom Phantasm']Treasure lock at the end of the Rainbow be unleashed, Become the path its false hope shines upon! Synchro Summon! Show yourself, Rainbow Phantom Phantasm!"[spoiler='Rainbow Phantom Phantasm'][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/555/293373n.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler='Lore']1 "Rainbow Phantom" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster
When this card is Synchro Summon to the field, all Level 6 or higher monster cannot attack during either player's Battle Phase except for this card. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can reveal all the card in your hand to your opponent. This card can attack your opponent equal to the number of Level 4 or lower "Rainbow Phantom" monster you reveal to your opponent.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[font="Palatino Linotype"][b]THE SACRED CARD[/b][/font]
[spoiler='THE SAINTS OF DAYS']Reap all the hopes from this world and provides false hope for today is your Advent! Descent down Saint Of MONDAY-Diablo The Rainbow Phantom[spoiler='Saint Of MONDAY-Diablo The Rainbow Phantom'][IMG]http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/8339/gtunw.png[/IMG][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. If a face-up "Rainbow Phantom" monster, except for this card, is destroyed by battle or a card effect, you can pay half your Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, destroy all face-up monsters your opponent control. During your End Phase, pay 1000 Life Points or tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. If you don't destroy this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/center]

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34 view and still nothing?
come on!! BUMP!!!!!!!!!!

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BUMP!!! I really need comments on this one!

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seriously!! come on
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[HoneycombTroy]

I like them. Work on OCG. These are Fantastic. 5/5

[Y2Jgrave]

it's been a long time huh Nexus?
anyway back to your set/deck, umm the idea around the set/deck is great and frankly the only original set around here since December before a bunch of newbies posting some trashy cards around this section.

Ok here we go!
Originality:8/10
It might be just me but yes, the concept is quite original. Why is that? well, the low level monster is actually useful and not just for tributing to summons higher level monster with superb ATK. All the low level monster provides an excellent stall and offers some great strategy. My favorite is [b]Rainbow Phantom-Balthazar, Spectral Knight[/b]! Meanwhile the mid levels are an excellent power force while also needs the low level monster to stay around so they could stay on the field which makes it much balance and pretty rare to see card like this in this section.

Balance: 8/10
You can't really make a set that's totally balance but you prove me wrong for the moment at least. Each card's provides something and demand something or there's a cost to keep them from being op.

Playability: 8/10
Like I said, each of the monster provides it's own specialty.
The low levels(3-4) provides an excellent stall while you search for the sacred/divine card. While the mid level just provides you with an excellent quick absolute power force and the high levels are scary in your face strong. The spell and trap are quite helpful and if you have a rainbow land on the field, you can gain more Life Points. The extra deck monster are awesome beyond recognition and their effects are just amazing instead of being generic. But the divine card..well divine powers..can't comment much on that.

Pictures : 9/10
The pictures fit really, really well with this one well except for Rainbow Trap-Reflected Rainbow, I got a huge headache seeing that one. So kudos to Jazinkay and whoever from devianart.

OCG: 7.5/10
Although it seems perfect at first glance, there's some ocg errors I spotted so find it for yourself so you could improve.

So overall, I'll rate em an 8.5/10 for being awesome!!

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thanks guys!! but why are they more people vote on the poll rather that giving comments? guess this set is just perfect!! lol
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[Ginko]

you're right, this set is very good to not have many comments
i really love especially how most of the card's pictures can come together and all look unified because they are so similar
the OCG and effects of the monsters i really love too, and i feel the ATK and DEF of the monsters suit the names and the pictures of the cards
overall i give it a 9.5 out of 10 because personally, i think it is one of the best i have ever seen, but there's always room for improvement somewhere

[TJP12409]

You had told me to look at your cards for an example of good card making, but the only thing I see is OCG as bad as mine, misspelled words, and overpowered cards...

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@Booger, thanks man!! I tried to make them in a hierarchical community, so each level would support the deck/set/archtypes in their own ways and unlike most set, the lower levels gives you a solid plan rather than just waste them to summon stronger monster. I started to make this set after making the divine/sacred card and the pics is so hard to find so thank you for liking them.

@TJP12409, well everybody has their own opinion. But I never told you to look at my set for good ocg example! I advise you to look at pre-existing cards(meaning? real cards) and if you think the ocg is bad? why not try and fix em and tell me what's the overpowered card, misspell words and all that so that I could actually fix them.

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[Ginko]

bahaha, i'm loving the insane number of bumps on this page
btw, i'm starting a new archetype called twilight warrior, where do you think i could find good pictures of dark and light human-esk monsters because to be honest, i want to try to make them look unified like you did with your set

[LC]

These cards are good as far as I'm concerned.
I'm a newbie so I'm still learning.
9/10

[Guest Seth Dawnstrider]

Top-notch originality, not so much for the theme of the deck but for the card effects and ideas. The cards seem to be very balanced and that contributes to the playability, which, theoretically, should be great! Some of the pictures seem to be made by Kazuki himself, however, there also a lot of pictures that seem out of place or not so well done, but I will give credit to your friend for working hard to make some of those pictures.

[Sman518]

Best Ive ever seen. Ever seen YET.

[Guest Seth Dawnstrider]

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Best Ive ever seen. Ever seen YET.
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You need to look around in the forum more.

[Nazryl]

I'm not so good at in-depth reviews, so this is going to be short.
The pictures look amazing, although a few seem a little blurred (But that may be to do with my eyesight lol)
As other people have said, the effects are balanced and mould with each other perfectly.
9.5/10 from me

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@Booger, I'll PM you the links for some sites where you can get great pics
@lightningcloud, Thanks mate! Hope to see one from you
@Seth Dawnstrider, For someone who have 32 post, you're great at top-notch review man!!+rep
@Nazryl,thanks man! I finally get one comment from a pro

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[Ginko]

having fun bumping? hahahaha

[Daigusto Sphreez]

I would post these in the Realistic Cards Section instead of the Finished Set section, not many people look here.

I don't have much time and I've only looked at your monster cards, but at a glance:

OCG errors, although most look like they just need double checking, some are phrased wrong, your OCG isn't [i]bad [/i]but it certainly has plenty of errors. I might help you correct them in the future if I find the time.

I like the pictures, the names, also the booster pack cover is pretty awesome.

their likeable and i would use them..which brings me onto the 1 (proabably the only 1 too) major flaw..


THEY ARE MADLY OVERPOWERED.

I've seen Chuck Norris Cards with more balance.

Lets just take this card for example:

Bolmeteus, spectral knight
3*/ 1400 ATK/1200 DEF

Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target.

[b]fair enough, so far..[/b]

This card can attack your opponent directly.

[b]1400 of direct damage, well ok, but surely theres a massive repercussion to that sort of power? [/b]

Each time this card inflict damage to your opponent Life Point through Battle, draw 1 card from your deck.

[b]even more generousity? [/b]

If it's a Level 5 or lower monster, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.

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[/b]the thing is about 90% of the cards share that sort of mad power..
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[/b]So quite basically, good looking highly appealing creative cards that are broken because they are mega-ultra powered, tone them down and I think you have an awesome set on your hands.




So yeah, the ocg and the playability are the points for improvement whereas everything else is fine, unforunately your poll options forced me into marking harshly.

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I would post these in the Realistic Cards Section instead of the Finished Set section, not many people look here.

I don't have much time and I've only looked at your monster cards, but at a glance:

OCG errors, although most look like they just need double checking, some are phrased wrong, your OCG isn't [i]bad [/i]but it certainly has plenty of errors. I might help you correct them in the future if I find the time.

I like the pictures, the names, also the booster pack cover is pretty awesome.

their likeable and i would use them..which brings me onto the 1 (proabably the only 1 too) major flaw..


THEY ARE MADLY OVERPOWERED.

I've seen Chuck Norris Cards with more balance.

Lets just take this card for example:

Bolmeteus, spectral knight
3*/ 1400 ATK/1200 DEF

Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target.

[b]fair enough, so far..[/b]

This card can attack your opponent directly.

[b]1400 of direct damage, well ok, but surely theres a massive repercussion to that sort of power? [/b]

Each time this card inflict damage to your opponent Life Point through Battle, draw 1 card from your deck.

[b]even more generousity? [/b]

If it's a Level 5 or lower monster, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.

[b]

[/b]the thing is about 90% of the cards share that sort of mad power..
[b]

[/b]So quite basically, good looking highly appealing creative cards that are broken because they are mega-ultra powered, tone them down and I think you have an awesome set on your hands.




So yeah, the ocg and the playability are the points for improvement whereas everything else is fine, unforunately your poll options forced me into marking harshly.
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Now that what I really need!! I'll see what I can do first cause I'm busy doing another set and I've wanted to put this card into a Fan Fic so I'll maybe tone it way more down . Anyway,[size="7"][b] BUMP[/b][/size]