Manpole Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Look, enjoy, rate. Any comments are always appreciated. [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/4713/135252r.jpg[/img][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/6816/135252c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9722/135252.jpg[/img][img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/9722/135252.jpg[/img] [img]http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9722/135252.jpg[/img][img]http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9876/135252v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9704/135252l.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]This card can only be equipped to a Normal Monster. The equipped monster gains effects based on the amount of Normal Monster's you control other than this card. ● 1+: The equipped monster cannot be destroyed in battle with an opponents monster that has the same attack. ● 2+: The equipped monster gains 700 ATK. ● 3+: Once per turn if the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, it is not.[/i] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/8113/135252o.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]You and your opponent can both Special Summon up to 5 monsters from your personal Graveyards in face-up attack position. The selected monsters are treated as Normal monster and do not gain their effects. The selected monsters cannot be used in a Synchro Summon. The original ATK and DEF of the selected monsters is changed to 1000/1000. If the monsters summoned this way are removed from the field (except as a result of battle), they are removed from play.[/i] [img]http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing a Normal Monster. This card gains ATK equal to the tributed monster's level x 200. This card gains 200 ATK for every Normal Monster in your Graveyard. This card gains 200 ATK for every face-up Normal Monster. This card gains 200 ATK every time it destroys an opponents monster.[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 My first thought is that the first two monsters are... well, very seemingly underpowered. Centaur's effect isn't exactly useful, though I do understand that Behrmoft was probably created to just be a giant beatstick, which he is. I do like a few of the Spell and Trap support though, like Surprise Attack, Underdog Retrieval and especially Two-Faced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted February 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Well I think Centaurs effect could come in handy, field spells can really change the duel. But if you think it seems UP, should I maybe increase Centaur's attack to 1600? or 1700? and Behrmoft is the highest ATK Normal Monster that I know of (at least higher than Blue-Eyes) so I made it only possible to Tribute Summon by tributing Normal Monsters to even it out a bit. Thanks for the positive comments on my other cards =) - One question I'm having, does "Soul Consumer" seem UP? I keep re-reading it and every after I made it, it seems that in a real duel it would end up with about 2000 or possibly less ATK, because for it to have over 2000 ATK with its effect, the duel would probably be over. The change I'm thinking of making to the card is to increase it's stats but keep its effect the same... say 200ATK/2200DEF, that small change I think might make it a bit better. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Centaur is...meh. Behrmoft is OK because he can be Special Summoned. Soul Consumer seems like he would be decent in a Gemini deck, since they get creatures in the Grave pretty fast...but even so, there are better options. Skeleton Field is good support, but it's better support for cards like the Wicked, or Obelisk the Tormentor, or Raziel (in a Fiend deck)... Surprise, Underdog, and Two-Faced are all solid support. Life Gatherer does not need the last sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted February 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 [quote name='Lord Smeagle' timestamp='1297200675' post='4997836'] Centaur is...meh. Behrmoft is OK because he can be Special Summoned. Soul Consumer seems like he would be decent in a Gemini deck, since they get creatures in the Grave pretty fast...but even so, there are better options. Skeleton Field is good support, but it's better support for cards like the Wicked, or Obelisk the Tormentor, or Raziel (in a Fiend deck)... Surprise, Underdog, and Two-Faced are all solid support. Life Gatherer does not need the last sentence. [/quote] You both seem to think Centaur isn't good, should I make its ATK 1700? Also I proposed a change for Soul Consumer as well, giving it 200ATK and 2200DEF, should I do that? As for Life Gatherer, I did in fact add that at the last second thinking people would think its OP without it. I'll take it off unless others post with opposite feelings. Anyways, thanks for the comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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