Evolved Moonlight Deck

[Crimson Blaze]

[spoiler='Moonlight Deck'][spoiler='Monsters']
[spoiler='Ancient Full Moon'][img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon "Half Moon" from your Deck.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Celestial Ranger'][img]http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card and gain 200 Life Points.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Celestor'][img]http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When this card is discarded from your hand by a card effect, you can Special Summon it and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Force Gladiator'][img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a Light attribute monster, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponent's side of the field.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Half Moon'][img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon "Quarter Moon" from your hand, deck, or Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Light Attracter'][img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Light attribute Tuner monster from your Graveyard. If you do, you cannot summon monsters from your hand, deck, or Graveyard until the End Phase.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Light Lancer'][img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/8905/397828n.jpg[/img]
When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards. For each monster your opponent controls, increase this card's ATK by 100.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Lunar Draco'][img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, you can increase the level of 1 monster you control by 2.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Lunar Solaris'][img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/7951/397828w.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. As long as this card remains face up on the field, any monster that attacks this card has its ATK reduced to 0. During the End Phase, you must pay 800 Life Points. If you do not, destroy this card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Mona Wolf'][img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/3981/397828h.jpg[/img]
When this card is used to Synchro Summon a Light attribute monster, send 1 card from your Deck to your Graveyard and draw 1 card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Moon Magic Orb'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/1613/397828f.jpg[/img]
You can discard 2 cards from your hand to Special Summon this card. If you do this, draw 2 cards during your 2nd Standby Phase after this card is summoned.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Moonlight Angel'][img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/2565/397828o.jpg[/img]
You can discard this card from your hand to negate the activation of a card that would destroy 1 card you control and destroy it. If 2 or more cards would be destroyed, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard to negate the destruction.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Moonlight Cyber'][img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When this card battles a face down defense position monster, destroy the monster without Damage Calculation and inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the DEF of the destroyed monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Night Slasher'][img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/8011/397828r.jpg[/img]
As long as this card remains face up on the field, all Synchro monsters you control gain 500 ATK and inflict piercing damage.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Quarter Moon'][img]http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/7010/397828k.jpg[/img]
When this card is destroyed in battle, you can pay 2000 Life Points to destroy all monsters on the field.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Shining Nebula'][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
You can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do, Special Summon 1 level 4 monster from your Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Silver Streaker'][img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 cards from your hand. When this card is summoned, gain 200 Life Points for each monster your opponent controls.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Sonic Brawler'][img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
All Light attribute monsters you control gain 600 ATK. When this card destroys a monster in battle, inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent.[/spoiler]
[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Spells']
[spoiler='Eclipse Draw'][img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Each time a Light attribute monster you control is destroyed in battle, you can draw 1 card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Light of Revoke'][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
This card can only be activated when you control a level 8 or higher Light attribute monster. Return all cards on the field other than that monster back to their owner's hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Lunar Energy Release'][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/4342/397828q.jpg[/img]
This card can only be activated when you control a level 6 or higher Light attribute monster. Increase its ATK by 1200 and switch all monsters your opponent controls to attack position. [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Magic of the Moon Stone'][img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/3166/397828u.jpg[/img]
Tribute 1 level 4 or lower Light attribute monster to Special Summon a level 8 or higher monster from the Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Miracle Radiance'][img]http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/7426/397828g.jpg[/img]
All Light attribute monsters gain 500 ATK until the End Phase. When a monster you control inflicts battle damage to your opponent, you can draw 1 card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Rebellious Spirit'][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monster's ATK or DEF. You cannot declare an attack this turn.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Shining Screen'][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
This card stays face up on the field until your opponent's next End Phase. While this card is face up, your opponent cannot declare an attack or activate any Spell or Trap cards.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Soul Ascension'][img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 Light attribute monster from your Graveyard. During the End Phase, you must pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, the monster is removed from play.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Streaking Bullet'][img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Decrease the ATK of a monster on the field to 0. When that monster is destroyed by battle, inflict 600 points of damage to its owner.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Tension Force'][img]http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card when your opponent controls a monster and you don't. Special Summon up to 2 level 3 or lower monsters from your hand. [/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Traps']
[spoiler='Final Tribute'][img]http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/7315/397828t.jpg[/img]
Destroy 1 monster on the field. The controller of that monster can draw 1 card for every level of the destroyed monster (max. 3).[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Forceful Descent'][img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
If you are about to take damage, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate all damage you receive this turn.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Light Repulse'][img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Tribute 1 Light attribute monster. Negate all Monster, Spell, and Trap cards on the field. No Monster, Spell, or Trap card effects can be activated this turn.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Lunar Meteor'][img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/1861/397828i.jpg[/img]
Tribute 1 Light attribute monster you control to destroy 1 card on the field and inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Magic Return'][img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Each time your opponent activates a Spell card, you can discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card or add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Maximum Energy Intake'][img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Select 1 monster you control and equip this card to it. While that monster is equipped with this card, it gains 2000 ATK and cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects. During each of your End Phases, you must pay 700 Life Points. If you do not, remove the monster from play.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Moonlight Silverwind'][img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7578/397828d.jpg[/img]
When your opponent activates a Monster, Spell, or Trap card while you control a Light attribute monster, you can remove all cards on the field from play. During the End Phase, return all removed cards back to the field in their original positions.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Nature Collision'][img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/7578/397828d.jpg[/img]
When your monster is battling your opponent's monster, increase the ATK of your monster by the number of monsters on the field x200.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Reverse Destiny'][img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
If a monster you control would be destroyed, select 1 card your opponent controls and destroy it instead.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Shattering Strike'][img]http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
When a monster you control destroys a monster in battle, inflict 1000 points of damage and return 1 card on the field back to its owner's hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Shining Soul'][img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card when a card you control is destroyed. Equip this card to a monster on the field and increase its ATK by 1500.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Synchro Guts'][img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
Tribute 1 Synchro monster you control to destroy all monsters your opponent controls.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Extra']
[spoiler='Ancient Lunar Knight'][img]http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Once per turn, when this card destroys a monster in battle, you can discard 1 card to increase its ATK by 1000 and have it attack again.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Celestial Enforcer'][img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3636/397828l.jpg[/img]
1 Light attribute Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card battles a non-Light attribute monster, increase the ATK of this card by 800 during the Damage Step. If this card battles a Light attribute monster, no monsters can be destroyed in battle until the end of the Battle Phase.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Dark Nebula Dragon'][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/3377/397828j.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower monster from your Graveyard. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack until your next Standby Phase. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon "Moonstar Dragon" from your Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Mini Moon Striker'][img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/7951/397828w.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each monster in the Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Moonstar Dragon'][img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
You can remove this card from play to Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard. It cannot be tributed, used for a Synchro Summon, or attack. It gains the ATK and DEF of this card. If you do this, send it back to the Graveyard and Special Summon this card on your 2nd End Phase after activation.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Shining Nova Crusader'][img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
1 Synchro Tuner Monster + 1 Light attribute Synchro Monster
This card cannot be destroyed in battle. When this card is about to be remove from the field by your opponent's card effect, you can discard 1 card to negate and destroy that card. Once per turn, you can increase the ATK of 1 monster you control by 1000. During your End Phase, inflict 1000 points of damage to the player who controls the monster with the lowest ATK on the field.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Werewolf Paladin'][img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/4305/397828.jpg[/img]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card gains 200 ATK for each monster on the field. If this card is destroyed in battle, you can draw 1 card.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]

[Kyng's Old Account]

LOL! Force Guardian = Meta Knight! / Silver Streaker = Silver Surfer!

I'm sure there's lots more.

Overall 8/10

[newhat]

Neat. A couple of things:

Sonic Brawler is far too strong. It's a Level 3 2100 attacker with no weaknesses, and you can search it with roughly five different cards. 600 is far too much. I suggest dropping it to the 3-star 1700 mark by lowering its ATK to 1300 and the boost to 400.

Moonlight Angel is also too strong. Aside from the Special-Summon-as-cost thing, which is evil, this card kills Catastor, Shi En, Stardust, and Naturia Synchros, from the hand, with no cost but itself. IT blocks MST and sets itself up for a surprise Starlight Road.

"When...you can" effects won't work if their trigger is the cost for another card's effect. For example, if Shining Nebula or Silver Streaker discards Celestor as the cost for its Summon, Celestor won't be able to Summon itself because
[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_World"]it's an effect rather than a cost[/url], and
[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Missing_the_Timing"]the last thing to occur on the field was the Summon of Shining Nebula or Silver Streaker[/url].

If you want Celestor and such to work with the other monsters, you can use this wording:
[quote]If this card is discarded, you can Special Summon it...[/quote]
The "if" and the exclusion of "by a card effect" are important. Effects with "if" don't miss the timing, and this can work with costs.

Luna Solaris and Quarter Moon are cost-balanced, in my opinion. Luna might actually be underpowered; the wording implies that she applies the ATK reduction when an attack is declared; if she's face-down, nothing will happen--so nobody would ever trigger the 0 effect because there's no point in attacking. Moon Magic Orb is nicely high-risk and high-return. Moonlight Cyber is good under the right circumstances, but not splashable. Mona Wolf has nice synergy with Lightsworn Synchro.

Does Light Lancer have Ancient-Gear-style protection or is it just protected from cards like Dimensional Prison?

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

this is more or less a copy of dark world

but still okay job eah ?

where the "EVOLVED" in this ? the gremlims demand it that and cake

[lvl1hero]

[u]OCG[/u] = Perfect (few here and there but not noticable)
[u]Images[/u] = Great
[u]Comments[/u] =
... a lot of cards are kinda overpowered or broken... well not broken just at the point where its gonna be (or should be) limited/semi-limited...
(too many to name)
[u]Overall Rating[/u] = 8/10
... i like the deck... no specific them but i'm guessing your deck recycles through your graveyard pretty easily... never seen that kinda deck before...
but ofcourse since your deck is LIGHT theres gonna be a lot of different set ups for your deck...

CON:
... theres a lot of cards... =\
i literally spent like 2 hours looking at them (i was kinda side tracked half the time)... ... but its okay i had time to kill today...

[Crimson Blaze]

Let me begin by saying how much I appreciate the time and effort each one of you took to critique my work. Thank you so very much. Now, with that said, I will respond to each individual comment.

[quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1307623774' post='5269132']
LOL! Force Guardian = Meta Knight! / Silver Streaker = Silver Surfer!

I'm sure there's lots more.

Overall 8/10
[/quote]
Thank you for the rating. I'm glad you found those amusing.

[quote name='newhat' timestamp='1307644309' post='5269772']
Neat. A couple of things:

Sonic Brawler is far too strong. It's a Level 3 2100 attacker with no weaknesses, and you can search it with roughly five different cards. 600 is far too much. I suggest dropping it to the 3-star 1700 mark by lowering its ATK to 1300 and the boost to 400.

Moonlight Angel is also too strong. Aside from the Special-Summon-as-cost thing, which is evil, this card kills Catastor, Shi En, Stardust, and Naturia Synchros, from the hand, with no cost but itself. IT blocks MST and sets itself up for a surprise Starlight Road.

"When...you can" effects won't work if their trigger is the cost for another card's effect. For example, if Shining Nebula or Silver Streaker discards Celestor as the cost for its Summon, Celestor won't be able to Summon itself because
[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_World"]it's an effect rather than a cost[/url], and
[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Missing_the_Timing"]the last thing to occur on the field was the Summon of Shining Nebula or Silver Streaker[/url].

If you want Celestor and such to work with the other monsters, you can use this wording:
If this card is discarded, you can Special Summon it...
The "if" and the exclusion of "by a card effect" are important. Effects with "if" don't miss the timing, and this can work with costs.

Luna Solaris and Quarter Moon are cost-balanced, in my opinion. Luna might actually be underpowered; the wording implies that she applies the ATK reduction when an attack is declared; if she's face-down, nothing will happen--so nobody would ever trigger the 0 effect because there's no point in attacking. Moon Magic Orb is nicely high-risk and high-return. Moonlight Cyber is good under the right circumstances, but not splashable. Mona Wolf has nice synergy with Lightsworn Synchro.

Does Light Lancer have Ancient-Gear-style protection or is it just protected from cards like Dimensional Prison?
[/quote]
I think Sonic Brawler is okay. I mean, if you look at the Goblin Attack Force/Chainsaw Insect + Skill Drain combo, Sonic Brawler is nothing. But I do understand where you're going with Moonlight Angel. I'm really not sure what to do with it. Because this deck lacks the draw power, I think that Moonlight Angel would probably SAVE it. I appreciate the suggestion concerning Celestor. I'll fix that up...sooner or later. Thank you for your compliments about the others. Finally, I never really thought there could be a question about Light Lancer. I assumed that it had the Ancient Gear protection, but I suppose it would be more fair if it just stopped Traps that activate when you declare an attack.

[quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1307646516' post='5269853']
this is more or less a copy of dark world

but still okay job eah ?

where the "EVOLVED" in this ? the gremlims demand it that and cake
[/quote]
This is a deck that I will be using for one of my characters in my Fan Fic in the future. Somewhere along the story, my protagonist loses his deck and makes a new one. Originally, the "Moonlight" deck had advantages for having cards in your Graveyard.

[quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1307653900' post='5270100']
[u]OCG[/u] = Perfect (few here and there but not noticable)
[u]Images[/u] = Great
[u]Comments[/u] =
... a lot of cards are kinda overpowered or broken... well not broken just at the point where its gonna be (or should be) limited/semi-limited...
(too many to name)
[u]Overall Rating[/u] = 8/10
... i like the deck... no specific them but i'm guessing your deck recycles through your graveyard pretty easily... never seen that kinda deck before...
but ofcourse since your deck is LIGHT theres gonna be a lot of different set ups for your deck...

CON:
... theres a lot of cards... =\
i literally spent like 2 hours looking at them (i was kinda side tracked half the time)... ... but its okay i had time to kill today...
[/quote]
Oh, thank you for complimenting my OCG. The images were actually copied, cropped, and occasionally edited by me. Also, the broken cards are necessary because this is a fictional deck (yes, this is a full deck) meant for entertainment, and the overpowered cards make up for that.

[newhat]

SPELL:

When does Miracle Radiance's second effect end? Does it just apply to monsters you control when it's activated?

Shining Screen is like Cold Wave, but better. Feex eet.

Streaking Bullet is too powerful. It needs some kind of fair-sized cost.

TRAP:

Final Tribute is not overpowered on defense; Offerings to the Doomed has higher speed an a smaller drawback. However, this "drawback" can be used on yourself to gain advantage. Aim it at your Dandylion or Card Trooper and you gain lots.

SYNCHRO:

I can see Moonstar Dragon having some wicked combos, but it's a Level 8 Synchro, so it's cost-balanced.

Werewolf Paladin's too good. It has the same ATK as Goyo Guardian if your opponent has a monster. It's Level 6 and easily kills Stardust. The second effect is also good, but probably won't see much use. I suggest bumping his original ATK down to 1900. That way, he'll start at 21, and will only reach 25 if there are two other monsters on the field, which happens frequently.

OTHER:

I don't agree with your assessment of Sonic Brawler. For a Goblin Attack Force + Skill Drain combo, you need to have at least a turn of preparation (setting Skill Drain) and pay a cost (1000 LP). Furthermore, you can't use on-field effects like Marauding Captain while you're using Skill Drain; your Deck has to be built around it. You could use Sonic Brawler in any Deck, at no cost, as soon as you drew it.

It's acceptable for an archetype-specific card to be [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Judgment_Dragon"]a tad unbalanced[/url]. However, Moonlight Angel can be used in any Deck. If you change the first effect of Moonlight Angel so it doesn't destroy the opponent's cards, it will be acceptable. As for the second effect, reword it so Summoning isn't a cost.